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Alley of OoPS : 377 |
Title |
Michelle |
Author |
MichaelD38 |
Length |
13,200 words |
Main Character |
Male |
Combination(s) |
Twosome (1 Female, 1 Male) |
Orientation(s) |
Heterosexual (Female, Male) |
Relationship(s) |
Incest (Cousins) |
Kink(s) |
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Setting(s) |
Home |
Genre(s) |
Romance |
Caution(s) |
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Summary |
Danny, age 22, comes home from college to visit family. Michelle, his 16-year-old cousin, has a crush on him. At first the time he spends with her is rather innocently passed, but eventually their hormones get the better of them. |
Commentary |
This is a very arousing story. Most of the scenes that I found arousing were not ones which contained sex. For that matter, there isn't all that much sex in this story. It was pretty clear what was going to happen between Danny and Michelle from early on. What made it arousing was seeing how their relationship develops and some of the near misses they have before, well, you get the idea. This is a very well written story. It is very well paced. It is about the evolution of Danny's relationship with Michelle. It does not revolve around sex, but sex does play a crucial role in the story. If I were to characterize this story in a word then I would say it is a Romance. I say that because the author takes it slowly, and for another reason that I do not want to reveal for fear of giving away part of the plot. The author does do a nice job with both Danny and Michelle. He reveals the facets of their personalities both through Danny's narration as well as their conversations. They are both rather horny, but they are realistically horny and that makes all the difference in the world. I enjoyed this story quite a bit. It is both very arousing and very well written. I think most people should be able to appreciate it, unless of course you don't like to read stories, and only like to read descriptions of sex. In retrospect I would say it is more touching than arousing. I have given it an Excellent. |
Arousal |
4 out of 5 |
Plot and |
5 out of 5 |
Editing |
5 out of 5 |
Objective |
9.0 out of 10 |
Subjective |
Outstanding |