OoPS: 231

Title	Orange County Babylon [Part 4 of 8]
Author	MichaelD38
Story Code(s)	M/F, F/F
Length	9,400 words
Rating	--
Summary	Jack's desire to dump Karen has some unforseen consequences.
Commentary	There is not much sex in this part of the story. There is some character development, which helps to flesh out some of the main characters. I like the way this part is divided up into sections. I think it works better than Part Three.