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Alley of OoPS : 66 |
Title |
Laura's Dad |
Author |
Mat Twassel |
Story Code(s) |
Exhib? |
Length |
400 words |
Rating |
Good |
Summary |
Mat allows his girlfriend to get him into a rather compromising position. |
Commentary |
There has to be more to this story. This was not enough. The cliffhanger ending begs for a sequel. This is more of an episode, than a story. It kept me wondering. The final line is priceless. |