SUMMARY: Rick is relaxing by himself on the beach in Flordia. He wants to cool off in the ocean, but he has forgotten his bathing suit. He takes a chance and goes skinny dipping, only to find Michele, Kendra, Julie, Stephanie and Alison sunning themselves right next to his towel when he gets back.

COMMENTARY: Great story. I thoroughly enjoyed it. It is very well paced; not too fast, not too slow. The author sets the scene and then allows the story to evolve. I am also impressed by the main character, Ricky. He seems realistic enough. The range of emotions that he experiences seem appropriate given the situation. He is both aroused and embarrased, tentative and eager. I am also grateful that the women in this story aren't clones of one another.

In my opinion, there's just one problem with the story: the typographical errors. They are numerous enough for me to say something but not so numerous that they interfered with my ability to enjoy the story.

I think that this story should appeal to both male and female readers, possibly to varying degrees. I strongly recommend that you give it a try.