COMMENTARY:
I really enjoyed this story. The author does a great job building the tension. Paula experiences a mixture of emotions, including lust and guilt. She wants Brendan, but she can't seem to forget that she is married. Brendan isn't quite as fleshed out as Paula is, but I don't think that really matters since the two elements that dominate this story are her dilemma and how she resolves it.
The sex is steamy, but there is more to it than just sex. I've think that most people should enjoy this story. |