Alley of OoPS: Is Clarissa Home?


 
TITLE:Is Clarissa Home?
AUTHOR:D.C. Roi
LENGTH:6,700 words
MAIN CHARACTER:Male
COMBINATION(S):Twosome (1 Female, 1 Male)
ORIENTATION(S): Heterosexual (Female, Male)
RELATIONSHIP(S): Adult Male-Teenage Female
Infidelity
KINK(S): --
SETTING(S): Home
 
 

SUMMARY: A man shares a shares an evening of sexual intimacy with his teenage neighbor, Katy.

 
 

COMMENTARY: I have mixed feelings about this story. On the one hand I feel that it moves too quickly. There is no real explanation given as to why Katy is interested in her neighbor. On the other hand, I love the manner in which the author moves the story along, through conversations. Even though the characters seem to have little more than sex-on-the-brain, for most of the story, they also seem human.

One more thing that I should mention, the author never clarifies exactly how old Katy is. He drops hints, but they only suggest a range and do not pinpoint a particular age.

If you can get over the adult male-teenage female thing then I strongly recommend this story.

 

Alley of OoPS