COMMENTARY:
John has a dilemma. He finds Kristin attractive but
knows better than to get romantically involved with one of his
athletes. Even if he didn't have to worry about getting fired
and/or arrested, his conscience wouldn't let him get away with it.
Eventually he ignores his conscience, but not before he gets an
earful from it.
This is a beautiful story. I thoroughly enjoyed it. It is very
nicely paced. There is more to it than just sex. In my opinion,
the focus of the story is really John's dilemma and not his
relationship with Kristin. The sexual tension is palpable as well
as extremely arousing.
I did find some flaws. There is a small number of typographical
errors. In some cases a word or two has been left out, in other
cases the wrong word or verb tense has been used. For the most
part these mistakes do not interrupt the flow of the story. I also
found a couple of inconsistencies. In Part I, a two-piece bathing
suit mysteriously becomes a one-piece bathing suit. The transition
between parts II and III isn't the smoothest. Part III opens with,
"a few months went by," when actually more than a year has passed.
If you are looking for a story that is heavy on graphic
descriptions of sex then you may want to skip this one. On the
other hand, if you are like me and enjoy a long build up with a
passionate ending then I strongly recommend you give this story a
try.
One final comment, there are some descriptions of lesbian sex in
this story but Kristin is only an observer in these scenes and not
one of the participants.
NOTE: At the time this spotlight was written there were only six parts or chapters to the story. Since then the author has added another five chapters. |