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Title |
Stroke Story |
Author |
MichaelD38 |
Story Code(s) |
M/F, M/F/F |
Length |
8,400 words |
Rating |
Good |
Arousal Factor |
Average |
Story Factor |
Low |
Summary |
Bret, a famous movie actor, bangs his way across the City of Angels. |
Commentary |
For the most part, this story is forgettable. It
does not get interesting until Cindy, that's girl
#5 in the script, enters the story. She adds
some life to it. I like to believe that where you begin it less important than where you finish. Having said that, I think that the reason I did not give this story a lower rating is for the simple fact that it got better as it went along. Possibly I missed the point of the story. The author's notes indicate that this is supposed to be a satire. I guess the humor just went over my head. |
ASSM Link(s) |
Part 1 (of 3) Part 2 (of 3) Part 3 (of 3) |
Deja Link(s) |
Part 1 (of 3) Part 2 (of 3) Part 3 (of 3) |