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Title |
Virgin Mary |
Author |
MichaelD38 |
Story Code(s) |
M/F |
Length |
8,500 words |
Rating |
Good |
Summary |
Jim meets Mary in the islands. At first he thinks she is a bartender, then he thinks she is a mermaid. |
Commentary |
I like the way this story was set up, but after reading it I feel
like something was missing. The title refers to a drink, not the mother of Jesus. |
ASSM Link(s) |
Part 1 (of 3) Part 2 (of 3) Part 3 (of 3) |
Deja Link(s) |
Part 1 (of 3) Part 2 (of 3) Part 3 (of 3) |