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Title |
Orange County Babylon [Part 4 of 8] |
Author |
MichaelD38 |
Story Code(s) |
M/F, F/F |
Length |
9,400 words |
Rating |
-- |
Summary |
Jack's desire to dump Karen has some unforseen consequences. |
Commentary |
There is not much sex in this part of the story. There is
some character development, which helps to flesh out
some of the main characters. I like the way this part is divided up into sections. I think it works better than Part Three. |
ASSM Link(s) |
Part 1 (of 4) Part 2 (of 4) Part 3 (of 4) Part 4 (of 4) |
Deja Link(s) |
Part 1 (of 4) Part 2 (of 4) Part 3 (of 4) Part 4 (of 4) |