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Title

Orange County Babylon [Part 2 of 8]

Author

MichaelD38

Story Code(s)

M/F

Length

12,400 words

Rating

--

Summary

Jack learns more about the women he is sleeping with.

Commentary

I find that not all the sex scenes are as arousing as I had hoped. I think this is because I empathize with Jack and because he has not completely accepted his situation by the end of Part Two. He has changed some. I found the scene at the end of this segment particularly arousing.

ASSM Link(s)

Part 1 (of 3)
Part 2 (of 3)
Part 3 (of 3)

Deja Link(s)

Part 1 (of 3)
Part 2 (of 3)
Part 3 (of 3)