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Title |
Dandelions |
Author |
Mat Twassel |
Story Code(s) |
M/F/F |
Length |
1,600 words |
Rating |
8.5 |
Summary |
Mark, Pat, and Julie are taking a walk of a nice spring day. Pat and Julie spend some time comparing Mark's tool to a dandelion. |
Commentary |
This was a nice little vignette. It had a surrealistic feel to it.
It also had a very naturalistic feel to it. It was sex in the
outdoors. Like any vignette this was not really story, but I liked it a lot. The whole thing was very understated; no sudden orgasms or violent eruptions. A very nice piece. |
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