This is something that was deleted from my story
"Degraded Assets". Part of my writing is cutting away
things that I don't think work. I cut this away
because it didn't really give the effect I wanted,
however I thought some might be interested.

QS


      Kate had seen the video. Missy was right it
didn't happen often but it was getting more frequent.
It would not be entirely accurate call them
"beatings", as they where often over in one slap or
one punch, missy always folded immediately and
unconditionally, her only and best defense being total
utter submission. The ritual spankings were no longer
good enough for Bruce; he needed the instant action,
the release, of a good smack down. It is a natural
tendency, that when you have someone under your
control, who lacks the ability to fight back or appeal
to a higher authority as Missy is to Bruce to break
all bounds of social restraint. Even if Bruce was not
predisposed to do it he would have any way, its part
of the human condition.
      But the most interesting aspect of this new
dynamic was Missy's obvious arousal at being put in
her place so completely and unforgivingly. This was
evident in the furiosoity and joy she took in the sex
that often soon followed these incidents. It was now
clear that she was not at all a "softly gently" type
of girl, she was not the type of girl that would come
around; Missy wanted, no needed, to be forced by
instant threat into the act. The pain, the
humiliation, gone she now need the force to relive the
lingering internal guilt and shame she felt at
enjoying the act. In-between heavy breathing and moans
she needed Bruce to alternately tell her what a bad
girl she was, what a filthy slut she was, and then how
much he wanted her for it or how pretty she was under
him. These intense lovemaking sessions only came about
as a result of the use of force. It's possible, Kate
wondered, that Missy was doing some training of her
own, maybe unintentionally, creating the perfect
unforgiving sadist of her dreams, or perhaps fear, to
her new found masochism. It may be entirely by
accident but in time violence could be the only
foreplay Bruce would be interested in and Missy would
be the only one to blame; a true match made in heaven.

Copyright 2004 Quiet Savage
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