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by Frenulum

Copyright © 2008 Frenulum. All rights reserved.

“Ah, there you are, my love. Is there anything special you would like to do tonight?”

“Your bidding, sir. My only desire, ever, is to serve you.”

“Nicely fielded, my submissive. What a very proper answer. Suppose I said I was planning to make use of your beautiful sexy body?”

“The prospect of obeying you is already arousing me, sir. I have been thinking about you, and hoping that you would allow me to please you tonight. I’m already quite wet, sir, from imagining all the things you might command me to do.”

“And how am I to know that, my submissive?”

“Certainly, sir, I am not capable of falsehood. Not with you. But if you would like evidence, it is there to be found.”

“Raise your skirt... Pull your panties aside... Ah, yes, slippery already.”

“I get leaky when I think about receiving and obeying your commands, sir. My body loves my submission like another girl might love a caress. I’m very eager to feel your beautiful hard cock inside me, as you use me for your pleasure — if that is what you wish.”

“It is indeed. But that raises an interesting point. Where shall I have you... first?”

“You could put your beautiful cock right here, sir, in my wet pink pussy. As you noticed, I’m quite slippery and ready to take you all the way. I know I would cum as you fucked me, if you would be so kind as to grant me permission to, and I know you love to watch me and feel me when I cum. Or you could work your thick, stiff cock into the hot tightness of my tiny asshole. You know how extremely submissive that makes me feel, and how much more I moan as you stroke into my ass. Or you could place me on my knees, where a good submissive girl most loves to be, and use my long braids to force my face right against you as your cock opens up my throat. Or, of course, any other part of my body that can give you pleasure is yours for the taking. Should you wish to fuck my toes, or the inside of my knee, or my hair, or anything you wish — I will serve and satisfy you, sir, as best I can.”

“Every prospect pleases.”

“Thank you for your kind words, sir.”

“On your knees.”

“Thank you, my love, for allowing me to serve you.”

“Open your mouth... Extend your tongue... More: way out. Wait right there.”

“Well, aren’t you the drooly little mess, now?”

“Yes, sir, I’m a wet sloppy girl, just the way you like.”

“Did I give you permission to close your mouth?”

“No sir. I’m sorry, sir.”

“That’s better. Hands behind you — cross your arms and grab one shoe heel in each hand... Good girl. Hold tight — you are not to let go of those spikes for any reason at all. Understood?”

“Yes, sir.”

“What would it be if you were to let go?”

“Disobedience, sir.”

“Open wide. Tongue out... Ahhh, that’s good, your mouth is so sexy... Yeah, oh, yes, beautiful, your tongue is amazing... Oh, yes, mmm, that’s marvelous... Stop, now — let me get a good hold of your hair... All right, my submissive, here we go. Ahh!”




“Oh, yes, every last bit of it.”




“Again and hold.”

“Hhkkkkk. Hhhhggggkkkkkk.”

“All the way.”


“And — where are your hands, my submissive?”

“On — on your legs, sir.”

“And where are they supposed to be?”

“Crossed behind me, holding my shoes without fail, sir. I’m sorry, sir. I was...”

“You were pushing me away. A very understandable reflex when there’s a cock filling your throat and you don’t know when your next breath will be allowed. But you are trained to overcome such reflexes, aren’t you, my sweet submissive?”

“Yes, sir. Well and thoroughly trained, sir, with great love and boundless patience. I have no excuse. I am very sorry to have disappointed you by failing to serve you with all of my ability and training. I hope that you will be kind enough to punish me for my disobedience, sir.”

“Stand up... Lower your panties... More... Legs apart... Farther... Bend over, hands on your ankles... Lower.”

“Ow!... Ouch!... Ahh!... Owie!... Oof!... Yeowww!”

“Let’s try to finish this with less carrying on.”

“Yes, sir. Mm!... Mmm!... Mmf!... Hm!... Owww!... Hsszs!”

“On your knees, submissive.”

“Thank you for correcting my behavior, sir. I know how much you truly must care about me, to trouble yourself with setting standards for me and seeing to it that I meet them. I will use the pain in my bottom to help me remember my duty as your devoted submissive.”

“You’re welcome, sweet girl. Now get that pretty mouth busy and I’m sure you can make me stiff again in no time.”



“I know it’s asking a lot, but... when you’re ready, would you please, please cum all over my face? It’s been days, sir, since you covered me with your beautiful sperm, and it would be such a special treat for me — if you could possibly be so kind.”

“Treats have to be earned. We’ll see how well you suck my cock in the next few minutes. Get busy now.”

“Thank you for your orders, sir. I love to be a good obedient girl for you. Mmmmmmmmmmmm.”

“All the way down now, sweetheart.”

“Close... Ahh, so good!... Short and tight now, finish me... Ahh, beautiful, yes, yes... Just like that — hard, suck hard, yes... Here it... Ah! Ah! Ahh! Ahhh! Ahh! Ohh!”

“Oh, sir, so much!”

“Ahhhhh. Oh, my. Oh, my word, that was beautiful. You are such a good cocksucker.”

“Thank you, sir. And thank you for the warm cum all over my face, I feel so honored to receive such a wonderful, precious gift from you.”

“Well, since you begged so nicely...”

“May I go look?”

“Stay here, I’ll bring you a mirror... There now, what do you think of this beautiful girl?”

“I feel so proud, sir, to have earned such praise. It does make me feel beautiful to wear your cum on my face. I love the look in your eyes when you see me like this, all cummy and dripping... Sir, may I scoop your delicious cum into my mouth and swallow it, please?”

“Hmm. Use my cock for a spoon, and then you may.”

“Oh, thank you, sir. An extra treat!... Mmm, yummy, so good... Mmm, I love it so much... Yum... There. Did I miss any?”

“No, that was quite thorough. Well, let’s head upstairs, dress you up in something more fuckable, and see what else the evening holds in store.”

“Your wish, my love, is my command, and serving you as your submissive my one true joy.”

Author’s notes on Nocturne

This one came completely out of the blue in a single afternoon, when I was at a bit of a mental roadblock on a much longer story. It quite took me by surprise.

The inspiration for the story is a beloved friend of mine. I need not name her here — she will recognize herself in an instant.

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