The Control Ring by Wizard
	A boy receives a ring that controls people.
	Disclaimer : Read No Further If You Are Under The Age Of 18 Or If You Are Offended By Graphic Descriptions Of Sexual Activity. All Characters, Situations, And Locations Are Purely Fictional. Mind control is fictional, any attempt to dominate a real person in this manner would be sick and perverted. Remember its just fiction.Archiving And Reposting Permitted Only If The Complete, Unaltered File, Including This Disclaimer, Is Included. The Control Ring - Edition 2
	Original	Revised
Chapter 1	The Discovery	Chapter 1	The Discovery
Chapter 2	Teacher	Chapter 2	Older Women
Chapter 3	Mary	Chapter 3	Call the nurse (damn fine chapter)
Chapter 4	Conquest	Chapter 4	Mary
Chapter 5	King	Chapter 5	Conquest
Chapter 6	Living in Sin	Chapter 6	King
		Chapter 7	Living in Sin
		Chapter 8	Soldiers