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Celestial Reviews 259 - February 18, 1998

"The Bedroom Window" by Sandman (sandman@bitsmart.com).  Sandman's stories are
archived at ftp://asstr.ml.org/pub/Authors/sandman/index.html.

This is the first author to accept my invitation to post a "Chapter 2" of my
"Review" story that first appeared as a review of DG's "Call of Desire."  You
might more fully enjoy this and the following story if you first read my
original story, which is archived at
http://www.qz.to/erotica/assm/Year98/7611.txt.

The present story assumes that there was a pair of voyeurs outside my window
while I was writing the review and while my husband was coming on to me - or
cumming onto me.  While they watch us, they make whoopee themselves.  At one
point we have my husband fucking me in the ass while I am talking to Rose on
the phone and the voyeur husband is fucking his wife doggie style outside the
window.  Then they decide to go home and give me a phone call.

I am not certain how this story would do as a stand-alone, but I certainly did
enjoy it in the context of my previous story.

This author seems to know me too well.  I think from now on I'll slant my
blinds up instead of down when I close them at night.

Ratings for "The Bedroom Window"
Athena (technical quality): 10
Venus (plot & character): 10
Celeste (appeal to reviewer): 10