- by Alvo Torelli, September, 2018
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This story is dedicated to Piper.
To be truthful, preteen blonde cutey Daniela Fortney is overweight. But Daniela gets help from a very nice weight trainer who uses hypnosis to help her clients fight their weight problems in unique and exciting ways. It doesn't take long for Daniela to tone her body - but will her evil stepmother ruin her new happiness? About 34,000 words.
Chapter 1: A child learns to exercise
Chapter 2: Babysitters have things too!
Chapter 3: Daddies can get jealous!
Chapter 4: When a daddy just can't keep up
Chapter 5: Things go wrong, and daddy is still jealous!
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