virgins choice                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                           a tale of rape and honor , death and friendship  and maybe love                    by lynn1212                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                        sue laid on the hard bunk  in her  cell and almost giggled as she remembe red the old saying about how nothing would concentrate your mind like the prospect of being hanged in the morning. almost giggled because there was nothing funny about the fact that she was going to be hung in the rnorning.she had been captured by a group of men that claimed she was a spy for the great satan and that she must hang as a lesson to others not to oppose their gods will. that the chances that a high school student lost from her group and unable to speak the language or even able to tell where she was except in the most general terms was a spy were  very slight did not seem to occure to them. thay told her that she had been found guilty by a group of elders and had no recourse but to pray to her false god. the other odd thing was they had asked no questions about her spying or her contacts or anything else that might have a  bearing on her case. indeed the only questions they asked were things like name, age , and oddly was she a virgin? after several days of conf iment during which she was fed ,watered, and led to the outhouse twice a day but otherwise left alone two men entered her cell and informed her that all the required people had arrived and that she would die in the morning after prayers.they also said that men would visit her later to prepare her although she did not understand what preparation was needed that could not be done in the morning.
  shortly after evening prayers three men were let into the cell and informed her that she was to come with them. after tying her hands behind her back and blindfolding her she was let outside and down a set of steps into what felt like a cool basement then down a long narrow hall bumping into both sides as the men pushed her along before them. suddenly she was stopped be running into something solid , damn that hurt she muttered . as she stood she heard somebody fumble with keys then a door opening.after entering the roon the blindfold was removed and she found herself in a room that was used for many things, none of which bode well for her . one side looked like a set for a bad movie about mad doctors and whips amd chains and other bad things she did not want to thing about while the other side looked like a motel room -king sized bed, night stand , chairs, and -wait a minute ropes tied to the corners , sides , head , and foot of the bed . what was this prepartion that was  needed ? it did not look like she was going to enjoy it . why could't they just kill her and get it over with? after being led over to a chair and her ropes removed she was told to sit down . one of the men showed her a paper with some werid writing on it and informed her it was her marrage papers. what marrage? what the hell did that have to do with anything? her puzzlement must have showed for the man explaned that rape was a crime. repete -what the hell! he went on and explaned virgins were promised heaven and it that would never do for a spy for satan to go there. so what was the answer to this small problem? she must be married so she could lose her hyman without one of them commiting the sin of rape. he also noted that the paper described her three marragies and later divorces . this would make sure that she would spend the rest of time with satan as a just reward for her crimes. however as they were not bad men but just had a dirty job to do she would be given a choic e. one man spoke for the first time and invited her to sit ."there are certain things to be explaned,i think that among your own people you are but a child but among the tribes you are a woman and are expected to act as one.as it is plain that you know not how the elders will allow me to guide you but there are limits as to what i may tell you. your treatment will depend on you acting with honor. an adult is expected to do what they promised or die trying, to do less is to lose honor, however there is no shame in knowing your weaknesses and asking for help. in your case either choice may contain honor or shame but we cannot offer much guidence . we honor keeping ones word but we also honor bravery and honest definence where one feels no choice. come eat your last meal with your husbands and we will talk of what is to happen tonight and answer as many of your questions as we are able ". as she sat trying to eat what was appearenty as good a meal as the village could provide h e continuted "your choice is simple will you act as a good and proper wife tonight giving in all things or not ? while rape outside of marrage is a sin a man can force his wife to do anything as she belongs to him. your choice - you can spend the night having sex for the first and last times of your life willing or not . we will give you a little time to think it over while you eat your last meal" [ they were not big on breakfasts for dead girls] ." also i will try to explain how you came to be here, we of the tribes are guarding something for the great leader of our country- we do not know what it is but we do not need to do so to guard it - it is enough that we are given this trust and know what is demanded of it . one of the things is to stop anybody not of the tribes from entering our lands unless invited by the leader or our elders, anyone else is a spy and we are to execute them as soon as we can. we have no choice except how to kill you. when you wandered into our vil lage you declared youself dead. i am sorry but if you do not die and the leader hears of it- we -all of us will". 
  the other man who up to now had been quiet spoke up " i will tell you what i can about being a good wife now . if you choose to be a wife you will do all that we ask without question or fight, fail to do so and lose honor , if you chose to fight you will not be given any chance to change your mind and must fight to the end or lose honor. if you lose honor there are worse things than hanging. the choice of either still allows you to ask for help to save honor- for example to ropes on the bed will only be used if you ask for them as a way saving your honor- we relise that we may ask for things you may be not able to do without help so ask if you have any weaknesses show up. this is the reason we three have been given this task- we are the only ones who understand your talk and the honor of the tribe demands that you be given the chance to die with honor." number one joined in " come eat this excelent meal for you will need your strength and it would be rude to refuse the gift . we will answer your questions about tonight now as we can but can say nothing about tomorrow ". as sue pondered her short future she relised all she could do was try to earn as easy a death as she could and just maybe avoid as much pain as possable. meanwhile the food did look good if a little strange and the three man seemed like decent people even if thay were going to rape her - better not think of it as rape or she might not get through it without fighting and that would be a bad thing. how she wished she had given in to mark at least she would have tried sex with somebody who cared about her and would have had a little better idea of what to expect. she had never gone past letting mark feel her tits and that was through her bra . she had never seen a mans dick when it was ready to go but only had felt the bulge thru marks pants, how big did thay get and would if fit in her tiny opening? maybe if she asked " what will it be like , i mean having sex will it hurt, what w ill i have to do , how many times , and will i have to take all of you"? number two looked gently at her " all three of us married virgins and can tell you that it will hurt at first but we will be gentle , we each will have you as many times as we are able but we must do as the elders command and cannot tell you all that we will demand before the time , just remember to ask for help if we demand anything you cannot do on your own". she looked at her food and relised it was gone except for the hot sweet tea and tried to decide what to do - if she refused she would be raped anyway and there would be pain like she had never known and if she could not fight untill the end hanging would seen like a welcome thing but woun,t be allowed her instead something worse would be her lot.
 on the other hand maybe being a wife to these men might not be to bad , at least they would not hurt her needlessy and might even try to make it as easy as possible. if they asked for something too strange she could always ask for the ropes to get through it. taking a deep shuddering breath " what would my husbands like? i will try to be a good wife but will need help as i do not know what is expected of me to please them." all three looked at her and then one spoke" is this your choice then , to do all that we ask this night willinging and without fight and with honor". "yes , i will do all that i am able to please you willinging and will ask for my husbands help if needed to avoid dishonor." " this is a brave choice and one we will honor and reward . are you ready to begin now"?
  sue like most girls had dreamed of her wedding night but never guessed it would be anything like this but she had no choice or chance and tried to be brave. " yes what would my husbands like and before we start may i ask your names"? number two looked pained and replyed " we would like to share names as is fitting with a wife but we cannot . you are a servent of satan and as he has ways of punishing those who thwart his plans we dare not let you name us to him. you may call us husband instead. do you wish us to call you by name"? she felt that being named might result in a little better treatment" yes , my name is sue , what  can i expect tonight"? " as you may or not know there are three way a woman may recieve a mans seed into her body. we each will use all three and one of will each be the first for each one of them. thus you can expect at least nine couplings tonight and as many more as you inspire us to. i thing it is safe  to say that we all will be tired in the morni ng. we will take turns and as is proper you will have each of one at a time to share the bed. do you understand and do you have questions?" "yes why must i be taken all ways , i do not understand  why it is needed?" "it is so you may not claim to be a virgin in any part of your body and try to thus earn lighter treatment in the afterlife. there are also reasons for there to be three of us but we cannot explain that untill later except to say it is for a like reason. stand and remove your clothes now so we may begin." this was it now , she stood and started to remove her shirt thinking at least i can get out of these filthy clothes and feel clean air instead. all went well until she was down to her bra and panties  and she realised she might not be able to finish the job so she asked " would one of you wish to finish disrobing me for your pleasure and thus help me to do the right thing?" number two answered" as i am to be your first i will help and am glad to see you ask for  help when you need it " he reached over and pulled her  bra off over her head and then worked the panties down over her hips and let them fall to the floor. as sue fought her first instinct to cover herself with her hands she stood there with three sets on male eyes looking at her nakedness and forced herself to stand tall with her hands at her sides and to look back at them. as she stood waiting for whatever was to happen she thought about what they were seeing -five feet three inches tall , hair the color of the sunset at both ends [how some of her friends wished they had hair like it] enough curves to show she was a girl but with was not soft and flabby. breasts about apple sized with no droop at all , and a nice firm round ass- she hoped they liked it . they did - one let out a soft breath and said" brothers we are blessed that this duty fell to us and i foresee a very active night ahead of us. sue will you go over to tub of water and wash yourself as it is fitting for a  bride to be clean for her husband." for a bath i will do almost anything she thought as she found a small tub , soap , scoop , and rough towel and tried to clean up as best she could knowing it would be her last bath ever. when she was clean number two led her to the bed and ordered her to disrobe him . she managed to remove the odd garments and soon was looking at the first hard cock she had ever seen , it looked huge and she didn't see how it would fit anywere except maybe her mouth . "what does my husband wish " she asked afraid of the answer. he took her hand and led her to lay down next to him and instructed her to relax as much as she could and just touch him anyplace while he did the same to her. " the first time should not be rushed and we can allow you some time to pepare yourself." after a few minutes she did feel more relaxed and he placed her hand on his large cock and told her he wished to be the first to sample her mouth . laying on his back he ordered her to  kiss his member and then to take it into her mouth . as she did so he instructed her in the art of cocksucking and warned her that when he was ready she should not lose any of his seed but must take it into her belly. she tried as hard as she could but really didn't know what to expect. she must have doing something right for soon he warned her to be ready for his seed and soon her mouth was filled with a thick warm salty fluid . she tried to get it all down but some spilled down her chin and she waited for his angry reaction but instead he praised her for doing a good job for her first time. as he got up to leave one of the other men brought he a cup of tea to wash out her mouth and told her to try to do better on him. with that he disrobed and standing be the bed gave her his prick to suck. he was not as nice but his cock was a little smaller and did not make her jaw hurt and soon she had more come in her mouth and indeed did not lose as much of it . soon the last one was  sitting on the edge of the bed telling her to kneel before him and presented her with a monster that she had to strech her mouth to fit around , to make matters worse he seemed in no hurry to come and soon all sue cared about was the pain in her jaw. just when she felt she could stand no more he grapped the back of her head and forced the huge thing farther into her mouth so far she could not breathe . she tried to pull back but he was just too strong and as she was about to pass out she felt his cock jerk and flood her . the next thing she knew she was on the bed with him looking at her and smiling" good wife, not many can take my prick that well . i hope you will do as well in your other holes. let us drink tea and rest a bit before we try your other charms." being a cocksucker was not as bad as she had feared and sue hoped her luck would hold untill the whole nightmare was over and she was safely dead. as she sat drinking tea with three men who had just filled her belly w ith sperm sue realised she had come up with private names for them - nice guy , little dick [although it wasn't really] and monster.
  soon the break was over and little dick led her to the bed and as they lay down he began running his hands over her body , tits , arms , legs , ass , everywhere but her pussy. he told her to do the same to him and began to kiss her breasts . after a few minutes
he pushed her hand down to his pecker while his began to explore her slit. finding she was dry he reached over her to a table and returned with a handfull of something cold and slippery which he rubbed into her virgin pussy . as it warmed up it felt kind of good and she hoped that was a good sign but he stopped and lay on his back and directed her to suck him to full hardness. after he was raging hard he gave her a handfull of the grease and had her smear it on him. "it is my wish sue that you straddle me like a horse and push yourself down on my pole, you will take your own hyman while i watch. can you do that?" realising she had no choice she spread herself over him , reached down and greased his cock ,and guided it to the opening of her virgin cunt. as he watched she slid down his pole untill she felt it hit a wall inside of her .holding still she waited for her pussy to relax then lifted a little, took a deep breath and dropped down. the sudden pain brought tears to her e yes and a small gasp escaped but she forced herself to stay down on it and hope it got better. soon the pain passed and all that was a feeling of being full in a place she had never felt full before. as she waited for what was next he reached up with one hand and cupped her tit while reaching around to grab one cheek of her ass with his other hand. for what seemed a long time he played with her body and seemed to ingnore the fact that he was deep in her ."sue i am giong to have you do everything to make me fill you so do whatever you think will please me." guessing that almost any movement would work she tried a slow rocking from side to side and front to back. as her cunt relaxed she added a little up and down which seemed to please him. soon it did not really feel bad but was not something she was enjoying so she tried different movements in an effort to get him off and end one more part of her punishment. soon he was moaning and starting to push deeper into her which gave  her fresh pain but she forced herself to push back and soon was rewarded with his cock jerking and spurting in her. he grabbed both of her hips and forced her to hold still for a little while as she felt his warm spunk leak out of her and his prick go soft in her . then it was over but this time there was no tea or time to rest for monster was there and was ready to go . laying her on her back he filled her tight pussy with fingers-god it felt like his whole hand was in there.he flexed his hand after a bit and forced in another finger how much more could she take. however she had no idea how much her cunt could strech and soon he was able to wiggle his fingers around . her poor pussy felt like a streched soupy mess and when he pulled out it seemed that she had just given birth. before she could move his monster tool was pushing in trying to replace the fingers. god it felt like he would tear her apart-had her hyman regrown ? she tried to move out of the way but there was no were to go and she was forced to take it all in untill he hit bottom. after she stopped her wordless screaming have he relaxed the pressure and gave her time to breathe , strech , and try to get used to having this huge pole in her as deep as it would go. "very good wife, you took that better that i expected. it is hard to accept my member even for someone who is used to the marrage bed, for someone like you to do so is truly brave. i wish we had met otherwise for i would take you as my real wife. i had to hurry before your pussy tightend up after my brother husband was done but maybe next time we can take more time. with that he started fucking her slowly and with long strokes but soon he speeded up as she tried to fuck back hoping that he would come quickly and the pain would end. however he seemed to go on forever and she soon gave up and just tried to live through it . after what seemed to be all night he flooded her and dropped down on her spent. even as she felt him sh rink he still filled her more than she thought possible. when he pulled out she could feel the come gush out as her pussy tried to close up- god she was sore. monster left the bed and too soon she felt nice guy slide in next to her. please she thought no more , i hurt , i'm tired and my pussy will never be the same. however instead of trying to fuck her he slid his arm under her and pulled her head onto his chest and hugged her . as she lay there he whispered you are safe here, cry is you need to . suddenly it all came out and soon she was racked with sobs that never seemed to end. a storm like that cannot last forever and she finally cried herself to sleep there in the safety of his arms. when she awoke he was gently rubbing the side of her breast and down to her hip,she lay there enjoying the tenderness for a while then looked up at him and thanked him for allowing her the respite from the horror that her life had become. in answer he rolled her onto her back and slid his  hand to rub her breasts and then down to her legs. while it did not light any fires of passion in her it did feel good and when he laid his hand on her mound and gently stroked it she let it relax her poor streched out muscles. this man would not hurt her . that he had delayed his own pleasure was shown by the pressure of his hard cock against her leg and she was grateful. she reached over and touched his face "thank you for your kindness, i am ready now. please take me gently. i would like to know what it is like." without a word he slid a finger into her still wet slit then placing his hand under her knees he lifted then and slid his legs under . after a little jockying for position she felt him gently slide into her .  when he was deeply in her he stopped and began to rub the top of her mound again while at the same time he kissed her nipple. the pain that had filled her had been replaced with something else, something she had not thought to find here- having this man fil l and touch her created in her a wonderful feeling of peace and rightness that she did not want to ever end. if only she could die like this but she knew that was impossable so she would savor it untill it must end . his movements as he began to seek his release sparked return movements in her and too soon she felt him spend into her and she grabbed him and pulled him close as if to stave off the end of this interlude as long as she could. but all things must end and so too did this. placing her head on his chest again she shed a few tears for the loss on something she could not name. too soon he kissed her "i would spend the rest of our time like this but we cannot. we must finish our task and you must prepare for us to use your last hole. i am sorry but we have  no choice.come over to the tub and let me help you clean your back." an awful thought entered her mind " you were the first the use my mouth,another took my hyman, who is to be first now? " please dear god she thou ght not monster- he will tear me apart and they won't have to hang me . the look on his face told her everything- god no no no. as she stood by the tub filled with the terror of what was to come he had filled a bucket with soapy water ,set it on a head high shelf and handed her the hose that was connected to the bottom of it. "fill and clean your bottom several times, use the covered bucket to void in then wash only your rear not your pussy and while you do that i will speak with my brothers and maybe find an easier way." as she attended to her cleaning she watched the three men talk in low tones but could not tell if things were going her way or not. finishing up she slowly went over and looked at them. monster smiled at her " i understand your fear and as you have acted with honor this night i will forgo being first but would ask if later you would favor me by riding my cock like a horse as you did before with my brother." " i will try but you are very large and i do not k now if i can but i will do my best, thank you." little dick took her hand and led her to the bed" even with my more modest rod to open the way this will be hard do you wish for help. the ropes are there to save you from dishonor if you need them and there is no shame in using them."  looking at the three pricks before her and thinking how small her asshole was she decided " i wish to be tied so i may not disgrace myself and will have to trust my husbands not hurt me more than is needful"
  she was placed face down with a pillow under her so her ass was up to allow easy entry. leather cuffs went on her arms and legs and were tied to the corners of the bed. lastly a strap was run over the small of her back and tightened down. this kept her from moving away from what was to come. little dick greased her ass and started with a finger but too soon he was up to several. gently moving around he soon had her little ring as ready as it would get."as i enter you pretend you are taking a shit . this will allow me to enter you with a little pain as possible." as she felt him try to enter she pushed back and suddenly he was in. after a minute the pain passed and he started to thrust in and out. she tried to move with him as much as the ropes allowed and was soon rewarded by the feel of him gushing into her rectum. no sooner had he pulled out than nice guy climbed on and slid in. as he laid there to allow her to get used to his somewhat bigger tool he whispered " we will n ot allow your ass to close up beween times and thus will reduce your pain" " thank you " his passion was soon spent and he left her . forcing herself to relax she prepared to take monster into her . he did not waste any time and as he pushed in she pushed out . he hung there as though he could not fit and her pain grew. she gave one last push and recieved a huge wave of pain as he filled her. she screamed and sobbed for him to stop but he stayed deep in her and forced himself to hold still. as she lay with waves of pain washing over her she relised somebody was holding her hand and stroking her neck. looking over she saw nice guy there doing what he could to help her. "lay still and the pain will pass - i will wait for you to recover before i take my pleasure" she heard monster murrmer behind her. after what seemed forever the pain did pass and she began to move a little. he felt her return to life and slowly began to move with her . she could not believe how full she was bu t  although uncomfortable it did no pain her " i am ready now take me ". he shifted to long slow steady strokes and settled in to make the most of this rare chance,this girl was doing what no woman had ever done for him before. it was too good to last forever and too soon he was spent. unlike the others he stayed in her untill he had totalty shrunk and enjoyed the feeling of her ass slowly tighting up as he shrank down. when he pulled out she was left with a strange feeling of emptyness and almost wished him to return.
  after they untied her they swung her around to sit on the bed " sue the night is almost over and we are done with the tasks the elders have laid on us . in the time left we each wish to have you one more time. do you have any thoughts on how ?" "you three have been as kind as you could be and i wish to thank you. perhaps i could ride all three of you as i did when i lost my hyman. could we do  it in the same fashion as we just did for my ass but without the ropes?" this was agreeable to all and the remaining time was spent doing so. when all three men were had spent their passion they sat her back in the chair and looked at her. realising something was up she asked "now what happens to me - do i go hang?" all three men repeated i divorce you three times and little dick and monster each placed a hand on her arm and left without a word. "they go to report to the elders about the events of this night and we must wait to see what they order. tell me what do you believe will hap pen to your sprit after you die? "she answered " we believe we go to the gates of the havens and there meet the gatekeeper who will question our lives and send us to the  place we have earned with our actions, the havens , one of the cirlcles of hell or someplace else. when i see him i will tell him about my husbands and ask that he look kindly upon you for i think you are good men and hope to meet you in the havens ." you do not know our names how will this gatekeeper know us?" "he knows all who come before him and has their lives in his book, he asks his questions to find out why you did things the way you did and judges you on both what you did and why."he thought a bit " if you are right i hope to meet you and wish you luck" . soon little dick returned and taking nice guy aside talked to him and left. "the elders have spoken. do you remember at the start you asked why three of us and we were not able to tell you all ? now i can, after three divorces a woman becomes a wif e of the tribe and any man or boy may take her as he wishs. a wife of the tribe under sentance of death is placed on a low table and tied with her legs up and spread open so any and all can use her. i think it is more than you deserve but it is the way we do it " "god you mean every man and boy who wants to gets to rape me before i hang- how long does this last?" "till sunset when you will be hung" "you say i have acted with honor, does that earn me a boon? is the way it is done the same as the law or can it be changed to suit the case at hand?" "tell me what you have in mind and i will ask for you" "i will give my body to all who wish but i do not think i have earned rape, those that want me can treat me with kindness and respect , nor do i want to be tied , i will walk out of here to my fate as a free person . if there is doupt about my honor let my husbands stand by me to insure it and also to see that i recieve proper treatment from those that wish to use me . i would sp end my last day with my head pillowed in one of your laps and with you holding me however we can manage. futher i ask that you be the one to lead my to the gallows and you hold my hand as i die [sob] i want somebody there that cares and i would like the last thing i see to be the face of a friend. please do this for me i beg of you. can you?" "what you ask is no more than i think you have earned. i will speak to the elders." with that he went to the door and spoke to someone outside. a strange man entered "this man will guard you while i leave for the law does not allow you to be left alone. he is a good man and will not harm you . i will return as soon as i can" she went to the bed and lay down to comtemplate where her life had led. a week ago she had been on a school trip without a care in the world now she has had things done to her she never dreamed of and more to come ending with a rope around her neck and her death. however she had found new depths to herself and had f ound friendship where she would never expected it. she hoped that her newfound strengh and her luck such as it was would see her through to the end. nice guy returned and the guard left"i have had words with the elders, custom is not law and they agree that you have earned a boon . it will be done as you ask." rushing to him she threw her arms around him and was hugged in return. too soon it was over "come little one we must go to the square to hear the words of the elders. they are waiting."
   as they entered the square there was a large crowd gathered before a table behind which sat a group of older men and women who she guessed to be the elders. they stopped at one end and nice guy bowed and talked for a little bit. a low hum swept thru the watchers and one of the elders stood and addressed them. when he was finished nice guy translated" he has told them of what we agreed and noted that you will be a wife of the tribe for the day but not as one facing death but as a free woman to be treated with respect and honor by all. he also spoke of your behavor and charged we your husbands to aid and comfort you as we can and to ensure your treatment be proper . you will be hung with only enough bindings to prevent you from hurting your self futher but loose enough to allow me to hold you as you leave this life. the elders also wished things were different and ask you to forgive them for doing what they must. they also ask if you would accept being made a member of the t ribe so that your actions may be told of and held up as an example for all to follow . you will be buryed with all honor and we will tend your grave with loving care as long as anyone cares to hear your tale. this is a great honor. will you accept?" thru tears "yes i will and i understand and forgive them my death and treatment" . he spoke with the elders again  then turned to her "they thank you and wish you to know that prayers will be said asking the god to accept you as one of his own so it appears that no matter which one of out beliefs is correct you will be welcome in the havens. i hope is so, now it is time for you to truly become a wife of the tribe . instead of a hard table you shall have a bed and will be shaded from the hot sun. none will be offered anything but your pussy and any who do not act with kindness will be removed . let us go now." 
    as the sun rose above the horizon she was shown to a large bed set under a tree . after she lay down her three husbands  sat by her head and asked if there was anything else they could do . "just stay with me and hold me as you can. it will be enough" she looked over to the line forming a short distance away " lets not keep everybody waiting" rolling onto her back she lifted her knees and waited for the first one . as man after man entered her , filled her ,and left she looked into the eyes fo those who were her friends and found she could be fucked and respond enough so the men thought that she was paying attention to each of them in turn. what she was really doing was wishing she could have met any one of them in a different time and place and trying to dream of what their life would have been like. every so often a break would be called for her to strech , move around , have a drink , and find a different position to service the masses. all the time the three men were  there for her and she took comfort in their strengh . from time to time she heard them talking but did not really pay attenction. then there was no more men to service and she relised the sun was falling and her time was getting short. monster motioned toward little dick " sue we do not wish to watch you die. will you forgive us if we say our goodbyes here and now so that we can remember you as you are - brave and honorable instead of some other way?" she stood and hugged then in turn "go with me blessings my husbands". as they left she looked at nice guy "and you?". "i will be with you till the end. we spoke of this and other things while you were busy and know they would never left had i not vowed to stay by you. we have some time yet what would you wish to do with it? "can i clean up, empty myself ,and make love to you one more time- i would  die with your kiss upon my lips and your seed in me . you will be my first and my last ." "we can do that'' and he led her back to  the bed downstairs where they made slow tender love untill their time was gone. as they left the basement room she noticed the sun was hanging low and thought soon it would not be the only thing. '' be strong i will be here for you untill the end''. she followed the hum of voices untill it led her to the same tree that she had spent the day under where there was a large rope thrown over a limb with one end tied loosely around a nearby tree and the other hanging down to a low stool. nice guy took her hand and led her to stand by the stool"i know you wish to die free but we must tie you .it is for your own good . if we do not you will just prolong your death needlessly. you will be unable to stop yourself from trying to pull yourself up the rope to get a breath of air and when you get too weak to do that you will claw your neck and face trying to loosen the rope. all this will just will make your death take much longer and be much more painfull. let me prepare you. '' at her w ordless nod he took a light rope and tied it around her waist like a belt.to this he tied her left wrist and made sure she could now reach the knots. with a little longer piece he tied her right hand loose enough that he would be able to hold her hand but she was unable to reach her neck. a man reached around her from behind and looped the hanging rope around her neck and tied it tight- no slipnot here she noticed. he then left nice guy to help her up on the stool. she stood looking at the villagers and waited for whatever was next. what was next was the rope around her neck was drawn up tight and she relised she only had seconds left . she felt the grip of his hand on hers and looked down to say thank you and then she was standing on air untill the choking rope pulled tight around her neck. her lungs sucked desperatly for air and to her suprise she was able to take some in. not much but more than she had expected. as she hung there trying for more air she relised that the k not had slipped around under her chin instead of behind her head. what air she was getting was not enough and she felt the last of her control wash away under the wave of panic and thanked nice guy for tying her . she kicked , gasped , prayed but there was no air and as her strengh failed she felt the hand holding hers and with her last thought she looked down and tried to smile her thanks to him then all went black and she knew no more.
   nice guy stood by her as the rope was tied off and the hangman walked up behind her and prepared to kick out her stool and drop her to her death. he held tighter to her hand and she looked down to say thank you but the you was cut off by her fall and the jerk as the rope stopped her and begin its deadly work. she hung for a second trying for some air and he heard it rasp into her lungs but he knew it would not be enough and waited for her to panic . she lasted longer than he would have believed but in the end the lack of air won and she began fighting any way she could. he hung on to her hand though out it all and prayed for it to end soon. the panic lessned as she ran out of air untill she was just hanging limp with one last effort she looked down and it seemed that she tried to smile but before she could finish her body shuddered and she lost control of her bladder and a yellow stream ran down telling all that her fight was over as she just went limp . he held her hand u ntill there was no chance she still lived to feel it and then covering her body with a robe he looked up at her and whispered "my name is ahmed'', gently closed her eyes ,then went home where he held his wife and wept.

   author's notes- this is my first ever attempt at doing something like this. it started small - a short story about good people in a hard place . there are no villens here except maybe the leader with a secret to hide. it just grew and things happened that i did not foresee
i didn't want to write a find her fuck her kill her type of story but i did not expect sue to find friendship and love in the same place as she finds her death and i was not looking for tenderness either but there it is. i was trying to present her husbands as good men doing what was needful but i was suprised by the growing care they felt toward the young girl that it was their job to rape as part of her death .  the story takes place in a land made up of parts of many. the tribes beliefs are loosely based on islam with a good dose of the far eastern concept of honor, sues are more western but are a mix. the idea of marrying and rapeing a virgin so she cannot attain paradise after her killing does happen today in iran. you may copy , modify , repost this but please do not remove me as author . comments at lynn1212@excite.com  thanks glen