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                              "ETIENNE"


                             Chapter One 


                           by: Rob Morton


                           ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~


           Lorne  Williams studied the activity around  him  with 
         care,  noting that the security people for the  visiting 
         VIPS'  were  obvious. As general manager of one  of  the 
         largest research centers in the country, Lorne was  used 
         to VIPS' coming and going. But today was different. 


           His boss, Geoff Levin, MD, Ph.D., was bringing Carlton 
         Pharmaceuticals' board of directors in to show off their 
         multi-billion-dollar investment. Shaking his head at the 
         type  of  ass-kissing Dr. Levin  was  apparently  doing, 
         Lorne stepped back into his office which overlooked  the 
         reception  area  on one side and the area known  as  Lab 
         One. He studied his handsome face in the in full  length 
         mirror behind the door as he closed it and noticed a new 
         gray hair nestled amongst the waves of black. 


           At  40 years old, he was not only the youngest man  in 
         his  position, he was the only black in Carlton's  upper 
         management. As he contemplated the reason for the errant 
         hair, the phone rang. 


           Crossing to his desk, he picked up the handset and was 
         mildly  surprised to hear the voice of  his  16-year-old 
         daughter, Etienne. 


           "Eti,  what's  going  on?" he  asked.  "Is  everything 
         okay?" 


           "Oh,  yes," she answered. "I just wanted you  to  know 
         that I'm home from school and to ask you about dinner." 


           Lorne  could picture his little girl, all  smiles  and 
         becoming quite a pretty young lady. Ever since his  wife 
         died, his work and Etienne was all that mattered to him. 


           "Sure, honey," he finally said. "At home or would  you 
         like to have a date with a tired, old doctor?" 


           She  giggled,  but said, "Tired, huh? Then  dinner  at 
         home will be fine. I'll start on the salad and I'll  see 
         you later." 


           He  smiled at the thought of Eti bustling  around  the 
         kitchen.  Since  his  presence wasn't  required  at  the 
         meeting taking place in Lab One, he buzzed his secretary 
         and  told her that he was leaving for the day.  He  also 
         let  her  know  that if Levin needed him,  he  could  be 
         reached at home. 


           The ride home was quicker than usual and, before long, 
         he  was turning onto the main drive of Cascade Falls,  a 
         fairly quiet upper-middle class housing development.  He 
         remembered  the day the house was completed and the  joy 
         on Ellie's face when he finally showed it to her. It was 
         difficult keeping the house a secret while it was  being 
         built,  but somehow he managed to hide the  construction 
         costs from the household budget program. 


           Closing the garage door behind him, Lorne entered  the 
         house  and  looked around, a feeling of  pride  swelling 
         inside of him. He remembered his poor roots and marveled 
         from time to time how hard work could pay off. 


           Turning into the kitchen, he saw Etienne hard at  work 
         slicing  tomatoes  for the salad and humming a  tune  he 
         couldn't  recognize. He could smell steaks broiling  and 
         he was slightly embarrassed when his stomach growled,  a 
         reminder  that  he had missed lunch due to  the  project 
         startup procedure. 


           At  16,  Etienne had small but firm  breasts  and  her 
         mother's  full  lips.  Her wide  brown  eyes  stood  out 
         against  her light brown skin, framed by her  long,  jet 
         black  hair.  How  much she  resembles  her  mother,  he 
         thought as he cleared his throat. Etienne turned at  the 
         sound  and  when she saw her father,  the  smile  spread 
         quickly across her face. 


           "Dinner  will be ready in a few minutes, so  you  have 
         time to get cleaned up before we eat." 


           Hmm. Bossy, too - just like her mother . . . 


                               Chapter Two 

                               ~~~~~~~~~~~
           All  during dinner, he couldn't seem to keep his  eyes 
         off  Etienne  and  he was surprised  to  feel  his  cock 
         beginning to grow hard. It served to remind him that  he 
         hadn't  really  had  time for sex  since  Ellie  died  - 
         between his job and raising Etienne, where could time be 
         found?  More  than that, he realized that  his  erection 
         grew larger the more he looked at Eti. 


           Her voice brought him back to the present. 


           ". . .and I got an A on my science test. . . . " 


           Her  voice trailed off as she noticed the odd look  on 
         her father's face. 


           "Dad? What's wrong?" 


           Without   saying  anything,  Lorne   stood   suddenly, 
         forgetting  his now raging hard on. Etienne's eyes  grew 
         large  at  the sight of the huge bulge in  her  father's 
         pants, her young pussy instantly getting hot and wet. 


           A friend at school, Cindy Harrison, had told her  that 
         her  father  spent a lot of time between  her  legs.  Of 
         course,  Eti  didn't  believe her, one  bit.  One  night 
         during a slumber party, however, she had gotten up to go 
         to  the  bathroom and, on the way there, she  heard  the 
         sounds of someone moaning softly. 


           Following the sounds to the den, she noticed that  the 
         door  was opened slightly and peeked in - and saw  Cindy 
         being  fucked  with gusto by her father.  Eti  was  both 
         shocked and fascinated by the scene before her.  Cindy's 
         face  was  twisted  with the effort  of  containing  her 
         father's  ramming  cock inside her young,  tight  pussy. 
         Having never seen a man's penis before, she was awed  by 
         the sight of it plunging in and out of Cindy with  deep, 
         swift strokes that lifted her off the edge of the desk. 


           Flushed  with excitement, Eti slowly backed away  from 
         the  lurid  scene,  very  much aware  of  an  ache  that 
         suddenly appeared between her own legs. She hurried  off 
         to the bathroom and back to her sleeping bag and,  after 
         a  while,  she was fast asleep. But her dreams  were  of 
         large, hard dicks . . . 


           Her  mind snapped back to the present. Her father  was 
         saying,  ".  . . so, I'll just go to bed.  Don't  forget 
         your homework and remember to put the dishes away." 


           Etienne just nodded and watched her father walk  away, 
         the  residue  of emotions still fresh in her  mind.  She 
         completed her after-dinner chores mechanically and  soon 
         found herself at her desk, trying to focus on her  notes 
         for  the  upcoming  algebra test.  She  found  that  her 
         concentration  wasn't  complete, the  algebraic  symbols 
         momentarily losing their meaning. 


           Eti was frustrated and she was very much aware of  the 
         source of the frustration. Sighing, she crossed the room 
         to  her  bed, stretched out and let  her  thoughts  take 
         control. 


           Eti's  mind opened to the scene of her father  getting 
         up  from  the  table, the bulge  in  his  pants  clearly 
         defined. Just the thought of this sight set her blood on 
         fire.  No matter how hard she tried to clear  her  mind, 
         this picture hovered there. 


           It bothered her to the point where even wrapped in the 
         comfort of her bed, she could get comfortable. Her  hand 
         slipped under her shirt and she absently toyed with  her 
         nipple.  With her other hand, she undid her  jeans,  her 
         fingers  entwining  the lush forest of hair.  She  often 
         felt embarrassed at the crop of dark, curly hair framing 
         her mound. She let her finger slide further down and she 
         began  to  rub her clit, another prominent  feature  she 
         often  wished  she didn't have - but  it  didn't  matter 
         right now. 


           She  continued to massage her now-erect  nipples  with 
         one hand, the other rubbing her clit with more  urgency, 
         her pleasure increasing. Etienne stopped long enough  to 
         wriggle out of her restricting jeans, letting her spread 
         her long legs wider. 


           The  improved access to her wetness was just what  the 
         doctor  ordered,  as  she left  her  nipples  to  spread 
         herself wider, slipping two fingers inside. She imagined 
         that  the huge imprint in her father's pants was  inside 
         her instead of her fingers, a thought that increased the 
         heat inside her. 


           Mouth  open, eyes slightly closed, Etienne worked  her 
         young pussy feverishly, her climax building. She saw  in 
         her   mind   her  father's  ass   rising   and   falling 
         rhythmically  as  he  fucked  her  until,  finally,  she 
         exploded.  She  gasped as the sensation  hit  her  hard, 
         causing her to tremble with the release. 


           Etienne  found that this was what she needed,  as  she 
         curled up feeling warm and, at least, momentarily sated, 
         she drifted off. 


           Lorne  stepped back, closing the door just as  quietly 
         as  he  had  opened it. He had gone  to  Eti's  room  to 
         apologize for not being very social at dinner. As he was 
         about  to knock on the door, Lorne heard the  sounds  of 
         Eti's  labored breathing and wondered if she was  crying 
         because of his rude behavior. 


           Turning  the  knob gently, he looked in  and  saw  his 
         daughter  fingering herself, lost in her  own  pleasure. 
         The   sight  of  his  little  girl's   fingers   sliding 
         effortlessly  in  and  out of her  love  nest  cause  an 
         immediate erection. Butterflies appeared in his  stomach 
         and  his  knees felt weak as he wondered  what  she  was 
         imagining.  His own thoughts were running rampant as  he 
         watched  her,  noticing how large her clit  was  as  she 
         rubbed  it furiously, reminding him once again how  much 
         Etienne reminded him of her mother. 


           Lorne   watched  as  Eti  climaxed,  her  young   body 
         trembling  with such energy that her breasts shook  with 
         each  wave that rushed through her. As she  was  curling 
         up,  he  silently  closed  the  door  and  stood  there, 
         shaking.  He went back to his own bedroom, his  thoughts 
         wild and what he just witnessed. Realizing his own  need 
         for  release, he quickly undressed, his  cock  springing 
         free from restraint. 


           His  hand found his erection instantly and  began  the 
         slow  massaging action he'd become used to.  Eti,  naked 
         and  open, flashed in his mind as he stroked  his  cock, 
         wondering  what  it would be like to take her  like  the 
         woman  she was quickly becoming. The thought shamed  him 
         and  inflamed his passion that much more as his  strokes 
         were getting longer and faster. 


           Lorne  threw his head back and let out a long moan  as 
         he  felt  the  beginnings of his own  orgasm.  With  the 
         picture  of  Eti's clit in his mind, he came,  the  long 
         white  spurts crossing the room and landing  quietly  on 
         the  carpeting.  He  continued to  stroke  his  spasming 
         manhood,  thinking  that it's been too  long,  much  too 
         long. 


           Lorne walked to his bathroom to get a towel and  began 
         cleaning  up. He felt the heat of shame intermixed  with 
         the  flush of release on his face as he knelt to  remove 
         the  now-cooling  sperm  from the rug.  He  started  the 
         shower, feeling the need suddenly to be clean. 


           The  water  stung  him but relaxed  him  as  its  heat 
         penetrated his slightly tense muscles. Reaching for  the 
         soap, he reflected on his feelings about Etienne. He was 
         still  surprised that he was capable of  thinking  about 
         Eti  in sexual terms; the taboos of his youth  instantly 
         took their place in his mind, screaming their warning of 
         wrongness. 


           Lorne couldn't deny that his thoughts, however  wrong, 
         were  somewhat exciting. Hell, who was he fooling?  Just 
         the  thought of sliding his cock into his "little  girl" 
         was such a rush that he felt both excited and ashamed at 
         the same time. 


           He  was becoming confused, his thoughts  warring  with 
         his  feelings.  He remembered how  embarrassed  he  felt 
         whenever  Ellie  asked  him to change  Eti  as  a  baby. 
         Obviously,  he'd seen more than his share of pussy,  but 
         this was somehow different. He would complete the  task, 
         always  coming  away from it a little shaken  and  never 
         really knowing why. 


           Turning  off the shower, he began the task  of  drying 
         himself while trying to clear the jumble of thoughts  in 
         his  head. Lorne knew that he should focus on his  work; 
         he was sure that after today's presentation, the  secret 
         project  in  Lab  One  would  require  some   reworking, 
         especially after Levin got through fucking up things. 


           Shaking  his head at the workload he was sure to  face 
         in  the  morning,  he killed the  lights  and  left  the 
         bathroom  -  and  found  Eti  standing  in  the  bedroom 
         doorway. 


           Mouth open, Lorne was surprised because it wasn't like 
         Eti  to  just  come into  his  room  without  announcing 
         herself first. In fact, he was so shocked at seeing  her 
         there,  he  completely forgot the fact  that  he  hadn't 
         covered himself! 


           Wrapping  the towel around himself and regaining  some 
         measure  of composure, he crossed to his dressing  table 
         and began combing his damp hair. 


           "So,"  he  began. "What brings you here at  this  late 
         hour?" 


           "I  think  we  need  to  talk  about  something,"  she 
         answered. 


           "Okay. Sit and tell me what's on your mind, Peaches." 


           Etienne  grinned at the use of her nickname.  He  only 
         called her that when he wanted to lighten what may be  a 
         serious conversation. 


           Without  preambles, Eti said, "You were  watching  me, 
         weren't you?" 


           Lorne flinched; he didn't think that she had heard the 
         door close. 


           "Uh,  well, not really," he finally answered. "I  came 
         to  apologize  and when you didn't answer  my  knock,  I 
         thought that something may have been wrong." 


           "So you stuck your head in?" she asked. 


           Lorne nodded, his embarrassment clear. 


           "I  didn't hear you knock, but I thought I  heard  the 
         door close." 


           "Well, I thought that I had been quiet about it." 


           They sat silently for a few moments. Eti had her fears 
         confirmed and Lorne, well, he felt like a Peeping Tom. 


           Eti then made the biggest decision of her young  life. 
         Clearing  her throat, she said, "I guess, then, that  my 
         watching  you evened up the score." And she  waited  for 
         the shit to hit the proverbial fan. 


           Lorne  closed his eyes, a silent "oh,  shit"  escaping 
         his lips - and his face felt incredibly hot. 


           "You saw that, huh?" 


           Eti  nodded  and  sat  back  to  wait  for  the  angry 
         outburst. 


           But, Lorne just sat there, looking for all the  worlds 
         like a condemned man. He couldn't think straight and  he 
         really  needed  to think clearly in order to  deal  with 
         this  situation.  His daughter, however,  was  a  little 
         short  on patience; she wanted to get this over with  as 
         quickly  as  possible. She was wondering  what  sort  of 
         punishment  he'd give her when he said, "So. How  do  we 
         deal with this?" 


           Not  being  exactly  what she expected  to  hear,  Eti 
         blinked, not knowing how to answer. Her mind was racing; 
         she  knew how she'd like to deal with it. The  sight  of 
         her father standing in the middle of the room,  stroking 
         his large, hard dick was still fresh in her mind. It was 
         everything  she  dreamed it could be and,  oh,  how  she 
         wanted it. 


           When  she realized that she did hear the  door  close, 
         Eti  sat  immediately, knowing that it could  have  only 
         been  one person there. He saw you, her  mind  screamed, 
         and she was scared. But, her mind whispered, isn't  that 
         what you wanted all along? 


           Eti  tried to shake that whisper out of her head,  all 
         the  time knowing that it was true. She had made up  her 
         mind  to  go to him and tell him. When she  got  to  his 
         room, she noticed that the door was ajar, so she  peeked 
         in. Just in time to see her father furiously jerking his 
         cock, his hand a blur. 


           Eti stood transfixed in the doorway as Lorne continued 
         the  rapid movement. Suddenly, she saw him stiffen,  his 
         hand now moving as if he'd lost all rhythm and stifled a 
         gasp when she saw the first long spurt of cum  exploding 
         from  the  swollen head of his dick. Spurt  after  spurt 
         shot  from his heaving manhood as she heard  her  father 
         gasp.  Even from where she was standing, she could  hear 
         his load as it hit the carpeted floor. 


           As Lorne moved to the bathroom, Eti realized that  she 
         had actually stepped into the room. Fear glued her where 
         she  stood as he came out of the bathroom with a  towel. 
         Eti realized that had he just knelt where he stood,  she 
         would  be  caught.  But, Lorne turned his  back  to  the 
         doorway, cleaned up his spent seed, and returned to  the 
         bathroom. 


           When Eti heard the shower running, she moved to escape 
         -  and  found that she couldn't, for  some  reason.  Her 
         knees  were weak and shaking and she grabbed the  door's 
         edge for support. 


           She had no idea how long she stood there with her mind 
         swimming but, as she regained her composure, her  father 
         had  stepped  back into the bedroom  proper.  Shit,  she 
         thought.  I  never heard the water stop!  And,  she  was 
         caught, like an insect in amber. 


           Etienne snapped back to the here and now, noticing her 
         father's concerned look. 


           "Is  there  something wrong, Peaches?"  he  asked.  "I 
         asked you a question and you were a million miles away." 


           "I'm  okay." She responded. Eti was aware of  a  whole 
         squadron  of butterflies that suddenly appeared  in  her 
         stomach. 


           "Well?" asked her father, his concern deepening. 


           Now  is  our chance! Her mind whispered. It's  now  or 
         never! 


           Clearing her throat, she said "What I want to do about 
         this is, um . . . " 


           Go ahead, say it! 


           "I want to fuck you!" she blurted out finally. 


           One  part  of  her mind was  totally  shocked  at  her 
         outburst  while the part of her, the one  consumed  with 
         lust for this man, was very much pleased. 


           Lorne, too, was of two minds, one part stunned at  his 
         daughter's words, one part thinking that it wouldn't  be 
         a bad idea. 


           Where was the moisture in his mouth? Lorne's mouth, he 
         noticed,  was  so  dry! He blinked,  as  if  that  would 
         instantly solve the problem. 


           "Uh, Eti," he began. "Do you know what you're saying?" 
         Inwardly,  he hoped she did. Under his towel,  he  could 
         feel his cock beginning to stir in anticipation. 


           Eti, for her part, was doing some thinking of her own. 
         Gathering  her resolve, she moved toward the  bed  where 
         her  father was sitting. That's it! Go get it. You  know 
         you want it and so does he! 


           She  approached her father, her fear slipping away  at 
         every  step.  She stood before him and looked  into  his 
         eyes  and saw his want and his morality clashing  inside 
         of  him. Her mind was made up, knowing somehow that  she 
         couldn't walk away now. 



                              Chapter Three 

                              ~~~~~~~~~~~~~


           In  that mysterious way that only women seem to  know, 
         Etienne  pulled  the oversized tee shirt  she  had  been 
         wearing  over  her head, revealing her young  body.  Her 
         large  breasts were considered to be a curse for  her  - 
         but now she was hoping that her father would like them. 


           "Yes,  I know exactly what I am saying."  She  finally 
         answered him. 


           Lorne  was frozen in place at the sight of his  little 
         girl's  well  developed  body. He  drank  in  her  large 
         breasts  in a glance, his eyes moving down to  her  flat 
         belly  and stopping at the tufts of dark  hair  covering 
         her  mound. He could even see the head of her  unusually 
         large clit, thinking that her mother's hadn't been  that 
         pronounced. 


           "This is . . . Peaches, this is wrong." He croaked. 


           Eti  remained silent as she stepped closer  to  Lorne. 
         Now mere inches away, she reached down and, in one  deft 
         movement,  stripped him of his towel, exposing  his  now 
         raging erection. She marveled at how large and thick  it 
         looked close up. She watched it throb with every beat of 
         his racing heart. 


           Lorne  tried  to stand but Etienne  was  standing  too 
         close  to  him. His eyes frantically  searched  for  the 
         swiped towel, hoping to covering his embarrassment,  but 
         it was on the other side of the room. 


           "No, Peaches; we can't . . . " he protested weakly. 


           "We can, dear father. And we will." With those  words, 
         Etienne knelt before him until his cock was in her face. 
         She  reached up and tried to encircle it with her  hand, 
         but it was too large for her small hand. 


           Lorne struggled to free himself as he watched her head 
         dip to capture the head of his cock in her mouth. 


           YES,  OH Yes! , The voice in her head screamed as  she 
         covered the plum-shaped cockhead, her tongue  fluttering 
         across  the slitted opening. She had always  dreamed  of 
         doing this, often practicing with lollipops and  bananas 
         in  her  room. Ah, but this was the real  thing,  not  a 
         piece of candy or fruit. 


           Growing  bolder, she let her mouth slide further  down 
         his shaft slowly. She gagged slightly as the head of his 
         massive  cock  reached the back of her  throat.  Backing 
         off, the feeling quickly disappeared. 


           Lorne  could only watch with a mixture of  horror  and 
         pleasure, as his baby, his little darling, began to suck 
         him,  her head bobbing gently. He could tell  that  this 
         was  new for her, but he didn't care. This was  so  very 
         wrong and felt so very good! 


           Lorne's   excitement   rushed  through  him   as   her 
         inexperienced mouth worked on him. She looked up at  him 
         and  the  sight of his hard  blackness  penetrating  her 
         mouth  was too much for him. He was coming and he  tried 
         to move her head. 


           Eti could feel the tremors in his cock. As she  looked 
         up  at him, the tremors got stronger and she could  feel 
         his hand trying to move her off her captured prize. He's 
         going to come, the voice in her head said. She held  her 
         position  despite  his efforts to steal her  treat  from 
         her. 


           Lorne  struggled  against his  daughter.  He  couldn't 
         believe that he couldn't free himself until, finally, he 
         realized  that he didn't want to be freed. He relaxed  a 
         little and a moan of pleasure escaped his lips. His hips 
         began  to fuck her hot, moist mouth with  short,  gentle 
         strokes. 


           Eti's  mouth strained to hold his thrusting meat.  Her 
         jaws  were beginning to ache, but she was determined  to 
         have  this. With both hand around his thick  shaft,  she 
         slid them up the shaft, feeling the bunched skin against 
         her widespread lips. 


           Lorne  was bucking out of control, his legs moving  as 
         if  they  had a mind of their own,  his  head  violently 
         moving back and forth as Eti sucked and jerked his dick. 


           He  stiffened  as he started  cumming,  the  intensity 
         almost causing him to pass out. 


           "Oh, yes!" he breathed as his balls emptied their load 
         into her mouth. 


           Eti  wasn't prepared for the copious volume of  liquid 
         lust  that  poured from the slit of his cock.  When  her 
         father's  body went stiff, she instinctively  moved  her 
         mouth  back to cover only the bulbous head of his  cock. 
         She  could  feel  each  spurt on  her  tongue,  hot  and 
         slightly salty. He was coming so much that it started to 
         leak  through  the seal of her lips, trailing  down  her 
         chin and neck. 


           As  he softened, Etienne lifted her head, licking  his 
         seed  from  her  lips  and looked  at  her  father,  now 
         sprawled  across the bed, trembling as if he were  cold. 
         She climbed up on the bed and sat next to him. She could 
         see  the beads of sweat on his forehead and  upper  lip. 
         His  eyes opened and, after a few seconds, they  focused 
         on her. 


           She smiled at him, feeling both good and wicked. Lorne 
         blinked  several  times, clearing his  vision  until  he 
         could only see one Eti instead of two. 


           He started to speak, but Eti silenced him with a kiss, 
         her  tongue snaking between his lips in an instant.  His 
         mouth  softened  beneath hers as he returned  the  kiss, 
         tentatively at first, but with increasing desire.  Lorne 
         could taste his cum on his lips as their tongues battled 
         for attention. 


           Eti was quickly being overcome by the depth of her own 
         passion  as  her father rolled her over onto  her  back, 
         their lips still locked tightly together. 


           Lorne  was  in command now, and he planned  on  taking 
         full  advantage  of it. Breaking the kiss,  he  ran  his 
         tongue down the side of her face to the spot behind  her 
         ear,  stopping along the way to nibble at  her  earlobe. 
         Eti's  arms  wrapped around his neck as he  nuzzled  her 
         neck, licking and sucking her sweet flesh gently. He was 
         mumbling  incoherently  as  he worked  his  way  to  her 
         breast, so full and soft. 


           Capturing  a nipple between his lips, he sucked at  it 
         while his fingers sought and found her incredibly  large 
         clit.  He  grabbed it between two fingers and  began  to 
         jerk  her  clit, surprised at how much it  felt  like  a 
         cock. 


           Her  hips rose to meet his probing fingers,  waves  of 
         ecstasy  flowing  over  her as he  sucked  each  of  her 
         nipples in turn, his tongue tracing crazy patterns  over 
         them. 


           Lorne was growing impatient; he had to taste her! With 
         some   reluctance,  he  abandoned  her   more-than-ample 
         breast.  Spreading  her legs, he  opened  his  beautiful 
         flower,  exposing her wetness. He could easily see  that 
         her  young cunt lips were spread slightly and  that  her 
         clit, so large and full, easily stuck out a good inch or 
         two from her juicy lips. 


           Eti  could  feel her father's breath on her  pussy  as 
         drew  closer. Her eyes closed and she tried to relax  as 
         much  as she could. His tongue touched her clit  and  it 
         was if something electrical had landed there. 


           With  a  near  savage  grunt,  Lorne  dove  into   his 
         daughter's  cunt,  licking and sucking her  young  pussy 
         like  a  starving man. He barely noticed  that  Eti  had 
         spread  her  legs wider, giving him more access  to  her 
         blossoming womanhood. He sucked her clit, thinking  that 
         this is what it feels like to suck a cock, as his tongue 
         raced  around  the  head of her clit,  feeling  it  grow 
         harder between his lips. 


           Lorne  ran  his tongue into her virgin  cunt,  sliding 
         between  the  gaping  flesh. He probed  deep  into  her, 
         tasting the clean fresh taste of her sex. 


           Eti  thrashed uncontrollably on the bed as her  father 
         ate  her. Her hand reached out and found his  cock,  now 
         hard  again,  and moved herself so that she  could  suck 
         him.  Feeling her mouth on him again filled  Lorne  with 
         more energy and he doubled his efforts, sucking her clit 
         furiously as she fucked his face. 


           The new lovers ate each other like this for some time, 
         each  savoring the new but wrong feelings of  what  they 
         were doing. 


           Etienne experienced an orgasm so intense that she felt 
         as  if she couldn't breathe. She released his  straining 
         cock  from her mouth as she thrust her hips against  his 
         face, riding out her orgasm. 


           Lorne  was  surprised  as Eti came, the  hot  rush  of 
         liquid  so strong and so unexpected that it got  up  his 
         nose, stopping his breathing and stinging his  nostrils. 
         Despite this, he continued to suck her clit, feeling  it 
         quivering in his mouth. 


           He moved quickly to position himself between her  open 
         legs. What he wanted to do was to rush in strongly; but, 
         Etienne was still a virgin, so he had to be careful  not 
         to rip her open. 


           Sensing his hesitation, Eti looked up at him, her eyes 
         wild with lust. 


           "DO IT!" she screamed. "DO IT NOW!" 


           The  harshness  of her word shook him and,  without  a 
         further  thought, plunged into his  daughter's  unproven 
         flesh. He felt his cock spread her wide and deep,  until 
         he  pressed against her maidenhead. Without  hesitation, 
         he  thrust forward savagely, passing through her  cherry 
         easily until he was deep inside her. 


           Eti  grunted  with the force of his entry,  the  sharp 
         pain  blazing  through her as she lost her  cherry.  The 
         pain  was  intense, but subsided as quickly  as  it  had 
         appeared.  She  felt her father's hand cradle  her  ass, 
         lifting  her  slightly as the last couple of  inches  of 
         hard  maleness  slid into her. She felt  stuffed,  never 
         imagining that it could feel this good. 


           Lorne fucked slowly at first, giving his Peaches  time 
         to adjust. He looked into her eyes and, as they met,  he 
         knew that this was what he'd always wanted. 


           "You okay?" he asked. 


           Eti smiled back at him and nodded, her deepest  desire 
         becoming a reality. 


           He returned her nod and began to fuck her with  gusto. 
         All  he wanted to do was to please her as he  drove  his 
         hardness  into  her. He looked down and  could  see  his 
         thickness  as it withdrew, covered with her juices  and, 
         to his shock, a little blood. His stroke faltered, guilt 
         plainly written across his face. 


           "Don't worry, Dad," she said, reading his  expression. 
         "I'm fine. Just fuck me, please!" 


           Shaking his head, he resumed his movement inside  her, 
         his own passion now growing with leaps and bounds.  Gone 
         were any feelings of guilt; all he knew is that Eti felt 
         good under him. 


           Eti  wrapped  her legs around her father as  best  she 
         could,  holding on to him tightly as he fucked her,  her 
         breasts shaking everywhere with the force of his thrusts 
         inside her. He filled her totally and completely, to the 
         point where it was both painful and pleasurable. 


           Their  grunts and groans of pleasure filled the  room, 
         their  sweat mingling with their other juices  as  Lorne 
         rode his little girl hard. His lips found hers and  they 
         shared a deep kiss, tongue flitting here and there.  The 
         sounds of breathing were heaving in each other's ears as 
         they continued to kiss. 


           Eti  whispered in her father's ear, "Fuck  me,  Daddy. 
         Fuck your little girl well." 


           Lorne  really didn't need encouragement, but he  aimed 
         to  please  her. Taking a deep breath, he cut  loose  on 
         her, his hips moving swiftly, their bodies impacting  at 
         their junction of love. 


           His stokes quickened and Eti could feel his cock swell 
         inside  of  her, stretching her beyond her  limits.  And 
         felt  the first spurt of his cum splash her insides.  It 
         was so hot that it triggered her own release. 


           A  growl  started in Lorne's throat as he  pumped  his 
         seed into her, his hips losing their once steady rhythm. 
         Eti  could  feel his excess escape her  stretched  cunt, 
         dribbling down the crack of her ass. 


           "Yes,  dammit, yes!" she shouted as she felt the  last 
         spurt come from his cock. 


           But  Lorne  was  growing soft inside  her.  Spent  and 
         sated, he leaned forward to kiss her hungrily. 


           "I love you, Peaches," he said, feeling very warm  and 
         rather fuzzy. 


           "I  love  you,  too,  Daddy."  She  answered,  feeling 
         sleepy. "Thank you . . . " 


           And, exhausted and pleased, the new lovers slept. 




                             Chapter Four

                             ~~~~~~~~~~~~~ 


           Lorne  was dreaming. He was holding his dear Ellie  in 
         his arms, feeling warm and content knowing that she  was 
         there with him. He smiled as he felt Ellie snuggle up to 
         him,  feeling her warm breath against his  shoulder.  He 
         turned  his head and opened his eyes - and  looked  into 
         Etienne's sleeping face! 


           Coming  fully awake, Lorne slowly  disengaged  himself 
         from  the sleeping form next to him and got out  of  the 
         bed.  It took him a few moments to remember why Eti  was 
         here with him and, when he did finally remember, a  wave 
         of anguish flowed over him. 


           You  did it, you really did it, didn't you,  a  little 
         voice  in his head asked. He trembled at the thought  of 
         what  had happened here last night. He took a few  steps 
         backwards, as if trying to remove himself from the scene 
         of  the  crime.  His  thoughts  were  now  chaotic,  the 
         implications clear in his mind. He realized that he  had 
         done the unthink- able, committed the ultimate sin. 


           As he backed up, he bumped into the chair next to  his 
         dressing  table,  knocking it over. It  thumped  to  the 
         floor,   the  sound  partially  muffled  by  the   thick 
         carpeting.  But it was enough to cause Etienne  to  wake 
         up. 


           Eti sat up slowly and stretched, her movements  almost 
         catlike  in nature. She rubbed the sleep from  her  eyes 
         and  looked around the room. When she spotted  Lorne,  a 
         smile  spread  across her face. But her  smiled  quickly 
         disappeared  when  she saw the frightened  look  on  his 
         face.  She could feel his fear as clearly as if it  were 
         her own. 


           Failing  to stand the chair upright, Lorne sat on  the 
         floor, feeling sick of mind and body. He saw Eti looking 
         at him, concern etched on her face. Swallowing hard,  he 
         finally spoke. 


           "Morning, Peaches," he began. "Sorry about the noise." 


           "Forget that," Eti answered. "What's wrong with you?" 


           "Me?  Nothing. What makes you think there's  something 
         wrong?" he lied. 


           Eti, to her credit, saw right through his deception. 


           "You  look  like you saw the  proverbial  ghost,"  she 
         observed.  "Don't tell me you're feeling bad about  last 
         night." "Please don't tell me that." 


           The  guilty  look on his face told her that  this  was 
         exactly  what he was feeling. Climbing out of  the  bed, 
         she went to him. 


           Lorne couldn't help but notice how her breasts bounced 
         with  each  step she took, her  lithe  muscles  rippling 
         slightly. 


           She sat next to him and he moved away from her without 
         thinking about it, his fear increasing. Eti reached  for 
         him,  causing him to flinch. Frowning, she  grabbed  his 
         arm and, somehow, managed to pull him to her. 


           Lorne  refused to meet her eyes, his shame  blanketing 
         him like a shroud. 


           Etienne  took  his face in both hands and  forced  his 
         head around. 


           "Look at me!" she demanded, gripping his face  tighter 
         when he tried to turn away. "Look at me, damn you!" 


           Slowly, he turned his head at the force of her  words. 
         He  could see the anger flashing in her eyes,  but  made 
         himself look at his flesh and blood. 


           "You think you defiled me, don't you?" 


           He nodded. 


           "Well, you didn't. You didn't do anything that we both 
         didn't want." 


           Part  of Lorne's mind had to admit that he had  wanted 
         her. 


           Eti continued. "I've always wondered what it was  like 
         to be with you, always wondered why Mother was always so 
         happy with you." "Now, I finally know." 


           The  mention  of her mother ran through  him  like  an 
         electric  shock. It never occurred to him that  Eti  may 
         have overheard their lovemaking sessions. 


           He sat up straighter, his resolve returning. 


           "So, you were listening in on us, were you?" 


           Seeing that he had come back from whatever Hell he had 
         sent himself, Eti smiled. 


           "Well,  it wasn't like you two were the most quiet  of 
         people," she retorted playfully. 


           Lorne  smiled  despite  himself,  remembering  Ellie's 
         passionate moans. 


           "Yeah, keeping quiet wasn't one of our main concerns," 
         he replied. 


           "Peaches," he began. 


           Eti  cut  him off. "There's no need  to  apologize.  I 
         wanted it just as much as you did. Now, come here." 


           Eti  reached down and found his manhood and  began  to 
         bring it to full arousal. Lorne relaxed as his  daughter 
         stroked him. Turning his head slightly, he sucked at the 
         closest  nipple to him, feeling it grow instantly  erect 
         between his lips. 


           At  his  touch,  a  moan  slipped  from  her  and  she 
         increased  her  hand movements,  alternating  her  grip, 
         giving Lorne new sensations. Freeing her nipple from his 
         hungry  mouth,  she went to work on  his  stiff  member, 
         engulfing the now enormous head. 


           He sighed, and lay back to enjoy the attention Eti was 
         paying to him. With her new found skills, she sucked him 
         with confidence, relishing the feel and taste of him. 


           Feeling a little left out, he slid down and positioned 
         her over his mouth and lowered her to his lips,  feeling 
         her swelling clit enter his mouth. Eti moaned around his 
         shaft, the vibrations sending a curious feeling  through 
         him. 


           Their  bodies slick with the sweat of  their  efforts, 
         father and daughter enjoyed each other, both lost in the 
         indescribable  pleasure.  Their  love  was  taboo,   but 
         neither  really caring, for this moment was theirs,  for 
         now and forever. 


                              Chapter Five

                              ~~~~~~~~~~~~ 


           Lorne  was  ecstatic, his pleasure  beyond  words.  He 
         could feel Eti's pending orgasm as she moved against his 
         eager  tongue and lips, grinding her large clit  against 
         his  chin while his masterful tongue plunged in and  out 
         of her, lapping up her musky juices. 


           As  her father ate her, Eti tried to swallow  more  of 
         his  burgeoning  tool,  but found  that,  for  now,  she 
         couldn't quite manage it. So, working as best she could, 
         she increased her efforts, licking up and down the shaft 
         of  the large, veined monster in her hands.  Her  tongue 
         moved  back to the mushroom-shaped head, lapping up  the 
         large  dewdrop  that  had appeared there.  It  was  like 
         nectar to her, all that she ever really wanted. 


           Sitting up, Etienne screwed her overheated flesh  into 
         her  father's  mouth,  using  his  massive  erection  to 
         balance  herself.  She  could feel her  clit,  hard  and 
         throbbing, sliding quickly between his lips, teasing his 
         tongue with fleeting touches. 


           This  was  quickly becoming too much  for  her;  Lorne 
         could   feel  her  miniature  cock  stiffen  then   jerk 
         spasmodically  as  she came, her  hot  fluids  literally 
         flowing from her, drowning him. Above him, Eti  shrieked 
         as the waves of pleasure swept over her again and again, 
         each jolt causing her to shake violently. 


           Suddenly  weak  from  the intensity  of  cumming,  Eti 
         rolled off of Lorne's soaked face, shivering as if cold. 
         Before  she  could recover, her father rolled  her  over 
         onto  her stomach and, raising her ass, entered  her  in 
         one  swift,  deft movement. Eti nearly passed  out  from 
         being filled with so much so fast. 


           But  Lorne  wasn't  really  concerned;  all  he  could 
         concentrate  on was the joyous feeling of Eti  stretched 
         pussy  around his thickness. So hot, so wet,  his  lust-
         crazed brain said to him. He fucked his darling  Peaches 
         with  long, fast strokes, pulling all the way out  until 
         only the thick head remained inside her. He grunted with 
         pleasure as he plunged deeply into her, the force of his 
         reentry shoving her forward on the floor. 


           Etienne  was drunk with pleasure, feeling  her  father 
         moving inside her. The pain wasn't as bad as last  night 
         and, it seemed to her that she was actually getting used 
         to  his gigantic love muscle. She could hear her  father 
         groan  as he fucked her, delighted that he was  enjoying 
         her so much. 


           Lorne  reached  around and under Eti  until  he  could 
         finger  her clit, rubbing it in time with  his  strokes. 
         Eti  responded  by  shoving her  ass  back  against  him 
         harder,  the duality of sensations bringing her  closer. 
         Lorne  quickened  his  pace, his own  need  for  release 
         growing more intense. 


           Releasing  her clit, Lorne grabbed her ass  with  both 
         hands, spreading her further. He looked down and watched 
         as  he buried himself deeply into her, her  lips  spread 
         wide.  With one movement of his hips, he watched as  the 
         last inch or two disappeared inside her and he felt  his 
         cockhead bump into the opening of her womb. 


           Eti gasped as he hit the bottom of her. She could have 
         never imagined feeling so full; it was if he had somehow 
         bypassed the confining walls of her cunt and had entered 
         her stomach. 


           Being  this  deep  triggered  her  released  and   she 
         screamed  before  she even realized it, her  young  cunt 
         clutching his invading tool tightly. 


           Lorne, upon feeling himself squeezed so tightly,  felt 
         his cock swell inside her, and held on for dear life  as 
         he  emptied himself into her in great heaves.  He  shook 
         uncontrollably as he continued to come, his eyes rolling 
         back  into his head. His mouth, although open, issued  a 
         silent scream of pleasure as she bucked under him. 


           Spent,  he fell on top of her as she  collapsed  under 
         both  his weight and the intensity of her  own  release. 
         Mindful  of  the  difference  in  their  weights,  Lorne 
         somehow managed to prop himself up on his elbows,  while 
         the last precious drops of his seed emptied into her. 


                              Chapter Six

                              ~~~~~~~~~~~ 


           Unable  to  maintain his  position,  Lorne  skillfully 
         rolled  off  of Etienne and lay beside her  panting  and 
         smiling. 


           "What a way to start my day," she finally said. 


           Lorne could only smile and nod in agreement, wistfully 
         hoping that the day could continue like this but knowing 
         that  he'd better be getting on his way to the  lab  and 
         Eti off to school. 


           Sitting up, he playfully slapped her bottom,  noticing 
         the way it jiggled for a few seconds. 


           "Okay,"  he  said.  "It's off to the lab  for  me  and 
         school for you, so let's hit it." 


           Eti  groaned in fake displeasure, but moved to  comply 
         with his wishes. 


           "Oh, okay," she complained. "I'm going. Will you  drop 
         me off at school?" 


           As  he moved off to shower, Lorne said, "Of  course  I 
         will, Peaches. I'll be ready in a few minutes, so  you'd 
         better hurry." 


           After showering and dressing, Lorne dropped Eti off at 
         school.  Giving her a peck on the cheek, he  drove  off, 
         heading for his office, whistling happily. 

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         Author: Rob Morton


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