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My Only Love (MF/Romance)
by
Artemis and Luna
vbaa85a@prodigy.com

				
Thanks to Patrick Donovan for all his advice, help and Erotic Synonyms list.
Even more thanks to our daughter for not playing with the keyboard again.

This story is true. (Mostly) Names have been changed to protect the innocent.
(Well, we're not exactly innocent, but...)

A long time ago. In a galaxy far, far away... 
(Actually it was a was few years ago in a small midwestern state. I always
wanted to say that line.)

Nicole and I first met when our parents got married. We hadn't met before
because I was away at college and I wasn't all that close to my father. I was
even less close to the all-around bitch who became my step-monster.

I went to the wedding with the intention of getting blitzed and leaving. That
all changed when someone introduced me to my new step-sister Nicole.

I saw a seventeen year old with blond hair, blue eyes, and a terrific figure
but there was something else. Something I couldn't put my finger on that I
liked about her.

We had a great time talking and dancing until the step-monster pulled her away
and told me to stay away from her. She told me that her daughter wasn't to be
around "trash" (her words) like me. As I said, the woman is a real BITCH.

After I graduated from college I was really lucky and got a teaching job at a
local school. Nicole and I had kept in contact with each since the wedding and
we started to see each other, no matter what the step-monster said, because we
really enjoyed being with each other. I don't make friends easily and the
step-monster tried to control everyone Nicole saw. We had a great time.
Nothing too fancy. Walks, movies, and that kind of stuff.

Things got interesting one night when Nicole helped me correct a lot of papers
at my apartment. The step-monster thought she was at the library.

We had been correcting for a while and my neck felt like it. Nicole could tell
that it was real stiff because she offered to give me a massage. Never one to
turn anything down that comes from a lovely lady, I leaned back while she got
behind me. I closed my eyes when I felt her hands touch my shoulders and start
to rub gently but firmly. I could feel the knots and tension start to dissolve
under her fingers.

As Nicole worked on me, my mind started to drift into places that I had never
ventured before. Into places that involved with my relationship with Nicole.
I had always thought of her as just a friend, nothing more, but as I explored
my feelings I knew it was much more then that. How I was going to deal with
them? I had no idea. I wanted to tell her how I felt but I didn't know how. I
can read people fairly well and I thought that Nicole felt the same way too.

All of these thoughts, and more, were running through my mind when Nicole
leaned closer and I felt her breasts press into the back of my head. They felt
so soft... I could feel the hard little points of her nipples through her
clothes. These sensations, plus the thoughts in head really blew my mind.
Before I could do anything about it, I felt my penis get rock hard and cause
a huge bulge in my pants.

I know Nicole saw it because I heard her gasp in surprise. I turned my head to
look up at her and I saw that her eyes were riveted on my erection. Matters
had come to a head (no pun intended) and I decided to see where fate took us.

I stood up and faced her. Nicole pulled back slightly but her eyes remained
locked on my penis. I gently took hold of her face in my hands and turned it
up towards mine. I then bent down and placed my lips on hers. Nicole's eyes
widened in surprised but she didn't protest. The kiss continued for many
seconds until we broke apart, gasping for air.

I figured that she would slap my face and run out but all she did was smile.
Our arms held each other tight.

We kissed again. Harder this time. My tongue pushed past her lips to explore
her mouth and she responded with the same. My hands cupped her full breasts.
The felt so soft yet so firm... My thumbs caressed the hard tips through her
clothes. Our mouths broke apart again. I could see the desire in her eyes and
knew that it was reflected in mine. I felt her hand reach down between us to
caress my hardness.

As we kissed again, my hands caressed her breasts and she did the same to my
penis. How long this lasted, I have no idea.

Our minds and bodies were on fire for each other and I know we would have
ripped our clothes off and done it right on the floor (we did that later) but
I knew now was not the time. We were meeting in secret and Nicole had to be
home soon. We couldn't let our parents know about our relationship.

When Nicole started to unbuckle my pants belt I stopped her. She protested but
I placed a finger on her lips and reminded her that she needed to get home. I
thought she looked like she was ready to start crying but she held it in. I
held her tight and told her that we could be together another time.

Nicole then told me that my father and the step-monster were going to be gone
all day Saturday and the could be our "another time". I couldn't speak but
nodded my head. With that we separated. I helped her get her stuff and led her
to the door. Just before she left, we took the time for a quick kiss. With
that, Nicole was gone.

I closed the door and leaned up against it. Fate leads you into some wild
places.

The rest of the week went by in a flash. I took many a cold shower that week.
I talked to Nicole on the phone Friday evening and she confirmed that the
parents would still be gone and that she would-be over Saturday morning.
 
I went to bed early on Friday. I was determined to be well rested for tomorrow.
The night seemed to drag past and I finally got up at about 6:30. I couldn't
try and sleep anymore, I was too wound up. After I had showered, I put fresh
sheets on the bed and then waited.

At 8:30, I heard a gentle knock on my door. I opened it to find Nicole
standing there with a huge smile on her face. She was dressed in a flannel
shirt and jeans.

As soon as I got the door close and lock, we embraced and kissed. Our hands
caressing each others bodies. My hands cupped her breasts and played with her
nipples while she again massaged my hardness. We took up from where we had
left off from the other night.

Nicole eventually broke the kiss and stepped back. Her hands went to her
shirt's buttons but I placed my hands over her and stopped her. I told her
that I wanted to do it. Nicole smiled. I kissed her again as my fingers gently
undid the buttons and pulled the shirt-tails from her jeans until the shirt
hung loose on her shoulders.

I gently slid it off and it fell without a sound to the floor. 

For a moment I admired the full curves of Nicole's breasts. Her pink nipples
and darker aureole were visible through the lace of her bra. My fingers traced
patterns on the exposed skin. She felt so smooth and warm. I reached around
and unhooked her bra. My hands seemed to have a mind of their own as they slid
under Nicole's loose bra and cupped her breasts. Her hard nipples dug into the
palms of my hands as I gently squeezed the softness. She moaned quietly.

I knelt down to take her shoes and socks off and the slid her jeans off. I
found myself staring at Nicole's lace panties. I could see a damp spot on the
front of them. A wonderful, spicy odor reached my nose.

My hands tugged at the waistband and pulled her panties down past her
trembling thighs and off her legs. I saw Nicole's womanhood for the first
time. It was gorgeous. I could see her pink slit clearly visible through the
soft, downy hair.

I stood and nearly gasped at the wonderful sight of Nicole in the nude. The
image was imprinted on my mind forever.

She was perfect!

Her blue eyes sparkled when she saw that I was admiring her body. Her full
breasts sagged not an inch and her pink nipples pointed straight out waiting
for my lips. Her firm, flat tummy led to a narrow waist and beautiful thighs.
I could see dew on the golden patch of cornsilk covering her mound. Her legs
were long and slender.

I don't know how long I stared, but it seemed like forever.
 
The spell was broken when I felt Nicole's hands start to lift off my shirt. I
raised my arms instinctively, without thinking. Next, I felt her unbuckle and
pull off my jeans. She stared at the bulge in my shorts for the longest time
until she finally took hold off the waist band and carefully pulled them down
past my ankles. When my manhood was finally exposed, Nicole gave it a gentle
caress with her cool hand that caused it to jerk upwards several times. She
seemed to enjoy that very much.

She sniffed the musk-like sent I produced and enjoyed the odor as much as I
liked the perfume she produced.

Nicole stood and we kissed again. More deeply, if that were possible, than
before. Our hands again running over our warm naked bodies. I reached around
and cupped her bottom, squeezing slightly. This forced out bodies together and
caused my firmness to press into her tummy. I think we both moaned a bit at
that point.

I looked at Nicole's face again, asking a silent question. She smiled and
nodded. With that, I reached down and picked her up and carried her in my
arms. She wrapped hers around my head and started to whisper the things she
wanted to do to me in my ear. I was surprised that she had that kind of
vocabulary. I whispered back that we had all day to try anything she wanted.

I placed Nicole on the bed and joined her so that we laid on our sides facing
each other. We started another round of kissing and caressing which I ended
when I rolled Nicole to her back. I told her that I wanted to get to know her
a bit better.

I kissed her forehead, her eyes, her cheeks. When I moved over to an ear, my
breath caused her to shiver slightly. I gently bit one earlobe then moved
down along the line of her jaw until I ended at her lips.

I repeated the treatment to the other side of her face.

My tongue then trailed tongue down her chin, across her Adams's apple and
between her lovely breasts. I loved the slight, salty taste of Nicole's skin.
I made decreasing circles around one breast until I felt the skin change at
her aureole and ended at the nipple. My mouth suckled gently at the hard,
wrinkled nub while my fingers played with the other nipple. After a while,
I circled the other breast and gave it the same treatment. This time kisses
were no longer enough. I tried to suck as much of her breast into my mouth as
I could. I could feel Nicole's back arching in response to my attack on her
breasts. I also felt her hands stroking my hair and back as I suckled, bit and
otherwise massaged with her breasts.

When I left her breasts to cover her tummy with kisses, she gave me a loud
protest. As I pasted her navel, I suckled it for a second. I bypassed her
womanhood for the moment and continued down one firm leg until I reached her
toes. I sucked each toe on that foot and did the same to other. I continued
up the other leg until I was just inches away from her golden mound.

I separated the down covering her with gentle breaths. As soon as I could, I
took a long, loving taste of her.

Nicole tasted like ambrosia!

As my tongue reached the apex of her slit, I encountered a hard bump that
caused Nicole to cry out as I licked and massaged it. My fingers gently spread
her lips so that I could see her passage and the hard bud of her clitoris
clearly. A moistened fingertip caressed the hard nub while my lips tongue
tasted every part of her womanhood. I found her channel and explored that
tight passage. (I'm still amazed that our daughter could get through that
narrow, little tunnel.)

Nicole's hands held my head against her and when she started to buck her hips
I had to hold them down while my tongue continued to pleasure her. She moaned,
cried and whimpered. All at the same time.

Then suddenly, Nicole arched her back and screamed.

For many moments her body jerked and trembled. I crawled up to lay at her side
and cradled her in my arms. She eventually opened her eyes and whispered to
me.

"Thank you," she breathed.

After resting for a few minutes, Nicole crawled down to face my hardness. I
watched her stare at it for a few seconds until she tentatively licked the
very tip of it with her tongue.  Then she placed her mouth over the end. The
warmth and moistness I felt almost made me lose it right there, but I kept
control. Barely.

Nicole slowly took more of it into her mouth. She used her tongue to probe the
tip and then made rapid circles around it. The suction of her mouth pulling on
it at the same time. Her hands cupped my soft pouch and gently cradled it.
When she came off my manhood and looked at me, she could see the intense
pleasure on my face. That really encouraged her more.

Nicole again bent over and again kissed the head again. This time she made
small kisses down the side until she reached my pouch. She then took as much
of it as she could into her mouth. That felt unbelievable! She may have been
an amateur, but I'll give her an "A" for effort.

Just before I was about to cum, she lifted off and grabbed a condom that laid
on the night stand. Ripping the package open, Nicole carefully unrolled it
onto my penis. We were not going to become parents right now. ( We did later.)
She then straddled my thighs with my manhood poking her in the tummy.  As she
leaned over to kiss me, I asked her if she really wanted to do this.

Her response was to take my penis in one hand and separate her lips with the
other. As she raised up and positioned my hard shaft at the entrance of her
channel, I placed my hands on her hips to help her. As soon as it was
positioned, she lower herself slightly. She whimpered slightly. I could feel
the tip entering her. She came down a few centimeters and I could feel the
blockage inside. Her eyes were closed and her face a mask of concentration
when she slid down the remainder of my shaft until out thighs touched.

Nicole's eyes flew open and she cried out in pain. I think I yelled too, but
I'm not sure. Her cries turned immediately to moans of pleasure. The feeling
I had was INCREDIBLE! It felt like a  million hot, silken fingers was around
my penis that gently squeezed. Nicole collapsed onto me and we started to
violently kiss each other. I could feel her rock-hard nipples dig into my
chest.

When I felt her hips rotate slightly I gave a small nudge upwards and she
responded by pushing down on me. My hands on her hips assisted her. Our
strokes increased in speed and strength so that we seemed to be a rocking
mass of flesh. In and out... In and out... Faster and faster... Harder and
harder...

We stopped for a second to catch our breath. Our sweat mingled as we stared
into each others dilated eyes. I couldn't believe what I was feeling and I
know Nicole felt the same way. The interlude ended when my shaft twitched and
Nicole responded by rocking her hips forward.

Nicole raised herself on her hands to give herself more leverage as she her
hips at me. We thrust with more force than before. I pushed deep inside her
and her channel tighten in response. That made me want to thrust even harder.

Her breasts hung directly over my face and I couldn't resist taking the pink
nubs into my mouth and suckling them hard. At the same time, I adjusted my
hands so that my thumbs met at her clitoris and they started to massage that
hard point firmly. This caused Nicole's moans to become cries and I could
tell that her orgasm was coming by the way the spasms of her channel grew in
strength and frequency.

Her passage finally me grabbed me so hard I thought she was trying to milk me
of my seed. Nicole gave out a wonderful series of shrieks and collapsed onto
me again. I couldn't hold back anymore and let fly with a shout, or was it
scream?. I shot my seed so hard that I think I nearly broke the latex of the
condom. How many shots did I fire? Maybe five or six. Maybe twenty. Who cares.

Nicole rolled off of me as soon as we both stopped shaking. We just laid there,
side-by-side, gasping for air and letting our hearts slow down a little. When
I felt my heart stop trying to pound its way through my chest I took Nicole's
hand in mine and turned my head to look at her. She looked at me. Our faces
mirrored in the same wide-eyed wonder.

I noticed her eyes traveling down my body and were now staring at something.
I looked down and that it was my deflated, condom covered penis. The condom
was covered streaks of blood. We both knew what it was from, of course, but
it was still a shock to realize that I had just made Nicole into a woman.

Nicole curled against me and mentioned something about cleaning up. I decided
she was right. I got up and went into the bathroom, on very wobbly legs. I
came out with a warm, moist washcloths Nicole peeled the condom off me and
started to clean my seed off of me while I moaned quietly. Within minutes,
she was done and again. I decided to reciprocate. I knelt next to her and
gently wiped the blood from her womanhood while she moaned.

After I was done, I threw the cloths back into the bathroom and cuddled Nicole
in bed. I could see that she could barely keep her eyes open, I couldn't
either. So I pulled the covers over us and held her next to me. My chest
pressing into her back. My hand in hers. My chin in her hair. I listened to
Nicole's slow deep breaths and knew she was already asleep.
I closed my eyes and was utterly content.

A stray beam of sunlight landed on my head and it brought me out of my near
coma-like sleep. For many seconds I couldn't figure-out where I was but I knew
it felt like paradise. It was so warm and comfortable... My head felt like it
was resting on clouds except for what seemed to be a rock under my cheek. I
could also hear a bass drum beating in one ear. Where was I?

When I opened my eyes I found out. As soon as they adjusted to the light they
focused on a nipple just inches from them. I suddenly realized where I was and
I remembered what had happened. While we had been sleeping, Nicole and me had
switched positions so that she was on her back and my head was lying on her
breasts. Her arms were lightly hold me to her. Our legs were intertwined. I
could tell from her deep breaths that Nicole was still asleep. The clock by my
bed read 11:47 AM.

I decided to see how gently I could wake Nicole up or failing that, give her a
nice erotic dream...

I turned my head slightly so my mouth was able to suckle her nipple while my
tongue played with it. When it hardened, I knew she liked it, even though she
was asleep. I know I did because the blood started to fill my shaft again as
it rested against her thigh.

One of hands drift down to the junction her thighs and felt the soft pubic
hair. A finger found her tight passage while the thumb stroked her clitoris. A
purring started in Nicole's throat while I did this while her hands moved over
my back. My finger pushed gently into her while making small circles at the
same time. I was content to keep doing what I was doing but my penis was not.
It was completely hard and was moving in a series of jerks along Nicole's
thigh. She must have felt this because one of her hands reached down to take
hold of it. Her fingers stroked me gently. I knew that if she kept that up I
was going to shot my load onto the bed.

I could hear the purr in her throat slowly change to a moan that came faster
and faster and my fingers stroked her. Suddenly her eyes flew open and she
came with a loud moan from deep in her throat.

Nicole looked at me with an incredibly surprised look on her face.

"I wish I could wake up that way all the time," she breathed.

Suddenly, she realized that she was still holding my manhood in her hand
Before I could stop her she moved so that her head was over penis and then I
again felt her mouth on me. Her tongue licking every millimeter... Her cheeks
hollowing for maximum suction. I saw that she was watching the stunned
reaction on my face. My hands ran threw her hair while I groaned many time.
Finally, I could take no more...

My back arched and a huge groan emerged from my throat. My shaft started to
fire shot after shot of my seed into Nicole's waiting mouth. She swallowed
every drop.

When I was finally finished, I sank into the bed while Nicole clean my penis
of every particle of semen. She held the collapsed shaft in her fingers and
gave the head a soft kiss then laid it gently on my thigh and rejoined me at
the head of the bed.

"You didn't have to do that," I said in a groggy voice.

"You did it for me and I wanted to repay the favor," Nicole said with a smile.

She leaned over and gave a kiss. It was weird to taste myself on her lips

"Do want anything to eat?" I asked.

"You're hungry?"

"Damned right. I think I'm going to need all the energy I can get for this
afternoon."

We both giggled at that. 

I got out of bed first and helped Nicole get to her feet. We gave each other
a quick kiss and then she headed for the bathroom while I went into the
kitchen to find us something to eat. We didn't get dressed of course.

I checked what I had available to eat and it wasn't much. Sandwiches would
have to do. I heard the bathroom door open and I turned and caught sight of
Nicole.

She still took my breath away...

I told her what we had available to eat and she told me that she would start
making them while I used the bathroom. I took hold of her hand and gave it a
kiss and told her I would hurry back.

I won't go into what I did in the bathroom except that it was normal bodily
functions. When I got back into the kitchen, Nicole was standing at the
counter making sandwiches with her back to me. I took a long moment to gaze at
her gorgeous body... That caused my shaft to get rock hard again.

I stepped forward to place my body against hers. My hands slipped around to
cup her breasts while my manhood nuzzled in between her bottom. I kissed the
back of her neck through her shoulder length hair and then whispered, "Hi"
into her ear.

Nicole said nothing but pressed back against me and moved her bottom back and
forth against me. My hardness pressed in between her soft globes, finding a
nice, warm home. My fingers played with her hard nipples then one hand drifted
to patch of soft fur between her legs to caress her womanhood. In response,
Nicole reached around with one hand while supporting herself with the other to
firmly take hold of my shaft.

"Why don't we continue this in bed," I whispered.

"Sorry, I can't wait that long," she replied. Her fingers squeezing me
slightly.

She then produced a condom to my disbelieving eyes.

"I thought we might need one."

I gave her a nice hard kiss for her thoughtfulness. She released me and I
stepped back slightly. It only took me a second to slid the condom on while
Nicole spread her legs a bit more. I could see my target clearly:  the pearly
pink lips of her labia and the slit of her channel in between them. I took
hold of my shaft and again pressed forward as Nicole helped me to hit my
target.

I groaned as I again felt her wonderfully hot tightness surround me as I slid
in until our bodies touched. Nicole groaned as I stretched and filled her
depths. I could feel the tiny muscles in her vagina throb, giving me the
ultimate caress.

I took hold of her hips as she braced herself against the counter. Our hips
bucked against one another as our moans and cries filled the room. This felt
totally different from the last time. Different pressures and feelings... I
know I'm using this word too much, but it was incredible.

We were more then ready, unfortunately too ready. At about the sixth or
seventh thrust, we spasmed into ecstasy.

Nicole laid on the counter and laid on top of her as we caught our breath.

"I think I'm hungry for something else," she breathed.

"Why don't we skip lunch for now," I replied.

"Good idea."

I picked Nicole and carried back into the bedroom. We finally got around to
having lunch in bed around 3:00.

We didn't want the day to end , but we couldn't stop time. Nicole had to be
home soon so our parents wouldn't get suspicious. Before she left however, we
took a bath together to wash the sweat and other fluids off. Of course, we
generated a few more.

"I wish I could stay here," Nicole said as we laid in the tub.

"I wish you could too, but you can't," I replied.

"I know."

It took a lot of effort, but we finally got out of the tub. When we dried each
other off, it was less drying and more fondling each other. I helped her dress
in the clothes that had laid on the floor of the living room all day. Before
she opened the door to leave, we kissed each again and it took all my control
not to carry her into the bedroom again.

After that wonderful Saturday we tried to make love as often as we could get
away with it. After school, on weekends, etc. When our parents were away,
Nicole would spend the night with me. It was a glorious time.

Nicole was able to get a good scholarship to college when she graduated from
high school She didn't want to live at home any more so she decided to move in
with me. She thought the dorms were stupid. Well, you imagine what the
step-monster thought of this when she heard that her daughter was moving in
with "trash" like me. The fight we had was like World Wars I, II, and III
combined.

She went on about how she was going to get me thrown in jail for molesting her
"innocent" daughter and crap like that. I told her were she could put her
threats. Besides, I had checked with lawyer before and found that we were not
doing anything illegal. We cussed each other out like longshoremen for about
30 minutes (I wished I had taped it.) until Nicole and my father finally
intervened.

Incredibly enough, I found my father was on my side. He told the step-monster
that her daughter was an adult and that she could do whatever she wanted. That
and a few other choice words shut her up. He then told me that if I ever hurt
Nicole that I would my ass kicked by him. I believed him.

There's not too much to add. After Nicole graduated from college we got
married and had a beautiful daughter. My father divorced the step-monster
(There is a God.) and he died a few years ago. We have a great life together.

According to an ancient bard (That's a somebody who tells stories for those of
you in Rio Linda.) named Gabrielle. Long ago all the souls in the world were
divided in half and you are given one when you are born. You spend the rest of
your life searching for the other half of your soul. I know that I found my
other half in Nicole and she found her half in me. (OK, I know I got that
story from "Xena, Warrior Princess" but it was too good not to use.)

My only love (short version)

Deep in my soul
Love so strong
It takes control

Now we both know
The secrets bared 
The feelings show

There will come a day
Somewhere far away
In your arms I'll stay
My only love

You've reached the deepest part
Of the secret in my heart
I've known it from the start
My only love

by Michael Benghiat, John Miyagi Author, and Andy Heyward



Celeste801@aol.com 

Here is the review of your story:

"My Only Love" by Artemis and Luna (vbaa85a@prodigy.com).  In spite of his
new step-mother's opposition, the young man is strongly attracted to his
step-sister Nicole.  The two make tender love, resist the step-mother, and
become happily married.  It was a good story.  If the authors want to write
even better stories, they should add some twists to the plot or work on the
character development a little more.  By saying this, I don't mean to
encourage them to throw in extraneous things like sexually torturing the
step-mother or having group sex with her.  A better focus on interesting/sexy
details or the use of more descriptive language (a la Mark Aster) would do
fine.  Actually, ratings of 9 on a first story are pretty good!

Ratings for "My Only Love"
Athena (technical quality): 9
Venus (plot & character): 9
Celeste (appeal to reviewer): 9