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Piano
by Chronic fantasist (chip_potts@yahoo.co.uk)
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This is a story about someone who plays the piano. It's
kind of inspired by a Smiths song - when I was very
young, I thought a line in the Hand that Rocks the
Cradle was "there will be blood on the piano tonight"
which made an impression (this isn't what he says).
Also, the idea of Charlie Mingus's clown that realises
that the more he beats himself up, the more applause he
gets was an influence. (M-solo, v, ritual, suicide)
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Greg lived in an old flat in Edinburgh’s Tollcross,
with a cat called Marmeladova after his favourite novel
character and on account of her honey coloured fur that
seemed to catch fire in the sunlight and made Greg’s
eyes sting with admiration.
The highlight of Greg’s day was to sit, sometimes with
Marmeladova on his lap, sometimes without her, at his
enormous double windows that pared the walls away from
his house and let the light of the outside in,
inescapable. Greg tore down the curtains that had been
there when he’d bought the flat. He would sit in front
of the windows, sometimes for hours, and gaze out of
them, at the concrete ground three stories down, at the
rows of sandstone tenements that sprouted
perpendicularly from halfway along his own street, and
this filled him up the way that food fills some people
up, or books, or friends, or family.
Greg had left his family behind because they had wanted
him to go into the family business, which was farming,
while Greg had wanted to be a musician. It had been a
messy business, his leaving home, with the family
refusing to believe that their last hope of continuing
their centuries old family business would disappear
with their only child, and unable to comprehend the
meaning of music to the boy, for to them it was just so
much clatter.
As for friends, he’d never been very good at making
them, because his obsession made him a very dull and
selfish person to be around. Greg knew that he could
never be a whole person, and believed it was because he
was a vessel for the expression of something more than
himself.
However, he had recently begun to think that he may
have made a mistake. Perhaps he should have stayed at
home and farmed. Perhaps he should have chosen to be a
full person and live a real life instead of living this
shadow life. Perhaps he had been too bloody minded, too
arrogant, and too dismissive, and only now was he was
learning his real lesson, that it was impossible to
give up the real world and survive.
There was actually nothing more than himself, that he
had been deluded and childish to think that there was.
Because, even though he was a very talented pianist and
had many interesting ideas for compositions, every time
he sat down to write a happy song it ended sad, and
every time he gave up with a sigh and decided to just
go ahead and write a sad song, he wouldn’t be able to
finish it for crying.
One day after Greg felt he had not more energy to go on
with the music that he knew was inside him, he happened
across an inverse law between his insides and outsides,
purely by frustrated accident. He realised that if he
cut his arm just a little bit, the music that was
inside him but that was too sad for him to stand to
write, would emerge little by little instead of choking
impotently in his throat and wrists and veins.
So he kept a razor and a bag of towels by his piano
each time he sat down to play, and every time he felt
he couldn’t go on writing, he cut his arm a little bit
more and made sure not to get any blood on the piano,
and then he could go on.
Greg started to write the masterpiece of his life. He
could feel it, the genius of his music, as though he
had channelled the voice of nature through his fingers
into the notes floating from the piano. He was to reach
the beautiful high point of the piece any day now, he
could see the music before his eyes physical and
precise as a map, and could feel the approach of the
climax as if he were standing at some point along the
map, before a jaguar shocking him straight in the eye
with its own keen, violent eye. He knew exactly where
his melody was going, and how he would harmonise it in
just such a way that had never been heard before.
He could taste the chords in the distance and his
fingertips ached to transfer their ungraspable soul
from his head to the manuscript paper before him. The
emotion crashed against him in waves and his sight
cleared, his head was no longer muddled, every sound
was conducted directly to his chest and the cotton wool
bubble that had seemed to coat his senses all his life
evaporated from around his nerves.
For the first time he recognised what was important,
and what was beautiful, and what he had done wrong in
his past, and what he would never do wrong again, and
what he would do again and again and again no matter
how wrong it was because, after all, he was only human.
And all the time the waves of music crashing against
his insides increased in force, itching against his
veins to burst out, his arteries clouding in the
perfection of the music, his head swimming with
sforzandos and crescendos and diminuendos and
ritorendos...
…and with all of this bursting inside of him, he found
that he could not get the music out. As soon as he
played the first chord of the climax, as soon as he
tried to put his pen to the paper, his stomach churned,
his eyes filled with tears, sometimes he was physically
sick, and he had to lie down all day and all night,
unable to do anything, just shaking, sweating, weak
with longing and burning quietly with frustration, the
music swelling inside his head into the cacophony of
limbo that he feared would choke him to death or drive
him insane.
He could not sleep any more. His block plagued him and
his focus was so intense that he could think of nothing
else. His cat crawled out of the cat flap and never
looked back. Having given up everything else for his
music, Greg decided he could not afford to look back,
or sideways, or even forwards and out of his window any
more. He looked at himself, he looked inside himself
and he looked at the piano, and that was his life.
He cut his arm, slowly, and the blood welling from the
fresh, deep wound echoed in shards of sound in his head
and flushed the music out of him and onto the page. He
took the knife to himself again, slashing across the
previous cut, and the initial surprised tension of the
resisting flesh to part gave way to the slow seeping of
blood that increased to a thick flow that he could not
stem and that fell in a contrasting deluge of shocking
bright red onto the black and white keys of the piano.
His sight was becoming blurry but his strength was all
in his hands, he could play and write and that was all
that mattered. The keys were not allowed to go sticky
as the blood was not allowed to dry for the fresh blood
that spattered onto the old pattern. The blood oiled
his mind and gave him the breath he needed to write.
Having run out of unbroken flesh on his arms to cut, he
unbuttoned his shirt and sliced the knife cleanly
against his chest in an arced rainbow, which wept
slowly down his torso and into his jeans. He undid his
jeans and kicked them off, then cut down his groin,
inside his hip bone, down his thighs, his shins, his
ankles, and immediately after a cut, his hands would
fly back to the piano, back to the page, and coast on
the rush of the adrenaline until it ran out and he
needed to cut more.
He was reaching the last line of the music, he was so
weak he wasn’t sure if he could stay upright and he
leant his head against the head of the piano. His hands
were shaking but did not betray him as he struggled to
copy the final notes from the keys onto the page. He
felt he had cut away all the ties that had been holding
him back, piece by piece, as if he had finally
uncovered himself, and there was only one bond left
that kept him from completion.
He took the knife shakily to his throat and sliced
diagonally across it, from his jaw to his collar bone.
As he felt the life seeping out of his body, he
committed his last notes onto the manuscript paper and
then his arms rested, his bloody carcass tilting over
the bloody piano, and the paper bloodied underneath
him, but still legible, although this meant nothing to
the policemen who found him two weeks later.
END
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