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Subject: The Annex Reviews, 11/23/97
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Not much to say this week, except, for those of you who run BDSM-
oriented websites, I have a new "Kink-Friendly" plaque available on my 
website to display to everyone your taste, and perhaps draw them in, or 
warn them off. Instructions for use and copying are available at 
http://members.aol.com/ladycyrrh


The stories:

[story] [no subject provided] [A+]
When posted: 10/10/97
Where posted: ASS, ASSM
Author: waynet2
Address: waynet2@earthlink.net

A middle aged couple who've been having cybersex for a while sneak 
away from their spouses for a day and meet in a Holiday Inn, where they 
have physical sex...tender, sublime, and slutty. 

This description doesn't do justice to this story, which was very good, and 
very hot, and dealt realistically with the angst engendered by infidelity, 
first dates, and midlife anomie. In fact, it's almost too good for ASS. Dig
it 
up and read it; trust me. Sometimes good stuff comes in unpromising 
packages. This author should post more.


Fantasies Revisited [B+]
When posted: 10/16/97
Where posted: ASSG
Author: Phoenixfr
Address: phoenixfr@aol.com

In this romantic science fiction story (which has similarities to Woody 
Allen's "Sleeper" and the John Malkovich movie "Making Mr. Right") a 
scientist wakes up after 99 years in suspended animation. In this brave 
new world, all those old, guilt-producing family ties like parents and 
teachers have been tossed out in favor of android companions who 
anticipate their "master's" every need, even changing form for them, 
and offer unconditional love and affection as well. That's just what the 
scientist gets, along with sex up the wazoo.

The writing here suffered from poor proofreading ("exstasy" "he put his 
arms around his waste") and could have used more polish, but otherwise 
it was a very nice fantasy.


Overview of Populated Space, 2023 [A-]
When posted: 10/31/97
Where posted: ASS
Author: P.C. Drake
Posted by: Albrecht
Archived at: http://www.alfaskop.net/~albrecht (Furry Pleasures)

Though listed as fur, this story was more *scale.*

Like many of its genre, the story was science fiction as well. A young 
man applies for a job on a starship crewed by "Dragons"-- a reptilian 
humanoid race who spend most of their time in deep space scouting 
habitable planets. He is interviewed by an attractive female Dragon with 
blue scales, who asks him revealing questions about his sexual 
preferences and experience...routine for long space missions, she 
explains, as all members of the crew have to get along. Hearing that the 
young man is a virgin, she initiates him into sex, making the discovery 
that human men are better endowed than Dragon men. 

The story was well written and entertaining, especially for science 
fiction fans. The style was a little derivative of Elf Sternberg's, or 
perhaps of the authors who influenced Elf Sternberg. Things got a little 
silly toward the end, with "candy flavored cum" and lots of hissing and 
moaning, but overall, I liked it. How often do you have a man making 
love to a dragon?


The Misadventures of Jane Jetson [C]
When posted: 11/20/97
Where posted: ASSM, AST (alt.sex.toons)
Author: Thoth
Posted by: Cernovog
Address: cernovog@servtech.com

Like the above, this story also had a science fiction theme...the sexual 
lives of the familiar Hanna-Barbera space-age family. I don't know about 
you, but I find the idea of having sex with a cartoon character way, way 
more bizarre and offputting than any number of sentient Dragons, 
androids, Vulcans in pon farr, tentacled beasties, or amorphous gobs of 
protoplasm. I mean, picture George and Jane Jetson in your mind. Then 
pictured them unclothed with their genitalia exposed. See what I mean?

That said, there was no way this story worked for me, and in fact it made 
me nauseated. Jane dresses herself in a "Venusian's Secret" teddy to await 
the return of George, but he falls asleep on her, so she turns first to the 
Vibratron 3000, an advanced masturbatory servo-droid which has special 
micropodia attachments for her nipples and a sonic vibrator for her 
cunt. Then she fucks "her boy, Elroy." My, don't kids grow up fast in this 
future age! After the naughty incestuous thrills of that escapade, she 
fucks Astro the family dog, who has a monster penis that finally satisfies 
her.

Though the writing technique here wasn't bad, I found the story 
insulting for assuming any woman, cartoon or not, would get turned on 
by fantasizing her face fucked, then screwing her 9-year-old child and 
getting humped by a dog. Yeah, I know it's porn, but if it was intended to 
be amusing, the writer could have used a lighter, more humorous touch. 
I wouldn't have minded reading about just Jane and the servo-droid dildo. 
The many stupid cliches the story contained also irritated, from Jane's 
lapping up jism like Big Boy milkshakes to a child ejaculating to a dog 
having a large penis. This is against scientific fact...even a small man 
has, by weight and volume, a larger penis than the largest dog. 


Hoover [C]
When posted: 11/20/97
Where posted: ASS, ASSM
Author: Edward Miller
Address: zxcvbnm21@hotmail.com

This one was just as silly as Jane Jetson, but in a different way.

A guy meets a girl at the store. They go home and fuck. After 4 or 5 
orgasms, he wakes up in a hospital bed, where it's revealed these 
orgasms have so depleted him of fluid he had to be carted away in an 
ambulance.

Though the writing was technically OK, the plot, characters, and 
storyline weren't there. This wouldn't have bothered me if there was 
something distinguishing about the sex or sexual characteristics of the 
people involved, but there wasn't...just run of the mill DD tits and shaved 
pussy on a blonde bimbo who was described only in the most general of 
terms: "walking sex, to such a degree that it was almost unbelievable." 
Then there's the favorite sex act of hot chicks everywhere--hot cum on 
the tits--and they expand with every squirt, too, even though the story's 
narrator tries vainly to ignore the spectacle and fall asleep after 
lovemaking like he usually does.

Actually, this wasn't even a story about a blonde bimbo. It was about a 
plug-in sex toy. And why on earth was it called "Hoover?" But then, why 
are dogs called Rover...


X-Rated Shop [B]
When posted: 11/20/97
Where posted: ASS, ASSM
Author: MrED157897
Address: mred157897@aol.com

For all the sex toy shops there are, it's surprising there aren't more 
stories about them. In this story, which can probably be safely classified 
as "wifeslut," a couple goes to one of those video-peepshow places and 
rents a booth, complete with glory hole. The wife gets so excited she 
sucks, then fucks, the men who come into the neighboring booth, and 
the husband in turn fucks her. They both leave later that night feeling 
like they've really accomplished something.

Like most wifeslut stories this didn't have a lot of background, or a lot of 
explanation for why the characters did what they did; it simply assumed 
the reader would receive an erotic understanding of whatever sex acts 
are portrayed therein. Which is fine, I guess, if you want a lot of 
mindless, readable sex, but if you're looking for something more 
substantial, you need a storyline.


Building Bridges [B]
When posted: 11/9/97
Where posted: ASS, ASSM
Author: Nick
Address: nick@cassandra.demon.co.uk

A man goes to visit the girlfriend of a friend of his, who's been 
revealing certain secrets about him that she shouldn't. It's his intent to 
confront her with his feelings of betrayal, but he loses his temper and 
pushes her around some. He discovers that she likes the treatment and 
wants to show remorse, and they have implied sex.

The story wasn't bad, but it only felt half-complete...because we never 
see what deep, dark secrets the remorseful woman blabbed to her 
coworkers. Therefore, neither the hero's nor heroine's behavior holds 
water...and while I could imagine people behaving this way, it was only 
with a fair degree of puzzlement.

The story was more interesting for the author's preface to it, which 
states: "I've been told that this story will get me a reputation which will 
be hard to shake off! I hope not! Although it involves M/F violence it's 
not gratuitous and it should be emphasized that I don't condone such 
things in real life. Its a story about provocation and anger rather than 
good ol' S&M, but there should be something in it to please anyone. If 
your worried it does have a happy ending, so if thats not what you're 
after - well sorry. Read it anyway, you may just like it!" which suggests 
to me he was self-conscious about it, or feels he should be self-conscious 
about it within the core group of ASS writers who post most frequently. I 
find this attitude a little strange. I read bizarre, violent and kinky stuff 
all the time, as do other ASS authors (no, I'm not naming names) even if 
they don't write it...and I know for a fact that if the same author writes, 
say, a romantic little M/F story, and one featuring bondage, rape, 
violence, and other goodies, the kinky one will draw three and four 
times as many responses as the "straight" one. I find the attitude that 
only M/F or F/F consensual stories are morally superior tiresome in 
light of the very broad, diverse range of sexual attitudes and behaviors 
adopted by the human race, but hey, I'm just a bystander in all this. It's 
all just grist for an imaginary doctorate.

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