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The usual disclamers. People to young, immature, mentally disturbed or uptight
should not read this story. It is a work of fiction in which names have been
changed to protect the author.
Any CONSTRUCTIVE criticism or creative input is welcomed. Flamers need not
waste my time or theirs
Now on with the story
Mick’s Payment
One of my first captures- was not my choice. I wanted a buddy of mine, Mick,
to help me set up a girl I desired. The girl lived around the corner from
him and his garage would allow quick seclusion once we had her. Plus a
second person would make the target more manageable. In exchange for his
help, I’d planned to give Mick a shot before I finished with her.
But Mick’s desires were a little more ambitious. I liked teenagers, while
Mick preferred them a little older. So while he had no qualms about helping
(or about my choice), he wanted a favor in return- my help to get a young
woman to suit his tastes. I hesitated- but decided it was only fair that I
risk for him what I was asking him to risk for me.
I decided that my cousin, Ellen, might meet his requirements. She was 23,
auburn hair, hazel eyes and had a fine figure. She was living with her
parents in a single house. At the time I was doing a little work for my aunt
which gave me access to her keys. I simply made a duplicate set and waited
for them to take a vacation.
It took a couple of months but finally my aunt and uncle went away for the
weekend. I got Mick to drive us up the house. My original plan had been to
hide in the house while Ellen was out, but Mick pointed out the risk if she
came back with company. Instead we waited until about midnight then staked
out the house.
We waited for Ellen to arrive home and proceed inside. Luckily she was
alone. Then once we saw her lights go out, we approached the house. I went
up to the first floor and quietly unlocked the front door- then tossed the
keys to Mick so he could open the door from the garage. We now had both
exits to the house covered.
I opened the front door as slowly as possible and crept into the darkened
living room. My first objective was to take the phone off the hook after
disconnecting the receiver. No calls were coming in to wake her and she
wasn’t making any out for help. I had about 30 seconds to get to the top of
the steps before Mick would open the downstairs door to Ellen’s room.
This was only my 3rd attempt as a rape and my first in someone else’s
house. I was sure one of us would trip over something and Ellen would hear
us. But the hall downstairs was reasonable empty and I had been in this
house enough that I avoided walking into anything. I even managed to
negotiate the steps down to Ellen’s room in relative silence.
Ellen lay on her side facing the back wall. I held my breath and tried to
monitor hers. Once I was sure she was still reasonably sound asleep, I crept
to the other door and let Mick in. We slipped our masks on and approached
the bed.
Mick pulled off a strip of wide electrical tape and I slipped out the
set of handcuffs from my jacket pocket. As I grabbed her arms and pulled
them behind her, he secured the tape over her mouth. She awoke struggling,
but before she was fully awake enough to really resist her hands were pinned
and her mouth covered.
From this point it was Mick’s show. I had no qualms about incest- I had
started my sex life by raping my sister. But I let Mick have her with the
understanding that he would let me have my girl to myself. Mick wanted me
there, though, as insurance. He figured a second person would intimidate
Ellen and even if it didn’t I could help catch her if she escaped.
He made an unsuccessful attempt at masking his voice. He sounded like he
had a bad cold- but otherwise like Mick.
“Let’s just put out cards on the table, cunt. My buddy and me are here to
have a good time. Now you can have a good time too or you can have the worst
night of your life. I personally like live partners, but my buddy could fuck
your dying corpse and still get off on it. So if you are a good girl we’ll
have fun together, otherwise we’ll have fun with you.”
Mick reached over and stroked Ellen’s cheek. I could see her trying not
to shiver at the touch. His hand traveled down, cupping Ellen’s left breast
as she pulled away. Slowly he moved his hand down farther pulling back the
blankets until she lay in just her bed clothes- a glossy lavender night gown
with matching bra and panties. Mick stepped back to admire her as he pulled
a small carpet knife from his back pocket.
“You know- I used to just love Christmas. All the pretty gifts to open.
Then hours of fun playing after they were opened”
With that he began slowly slicing up the side of Ellen’s gown. He took
his time, being careful to slice only the fabric of the gown.
While he worked I stood at the foot of the bed giving my cousin the once
over. Even in the dim light I could see the curves of her breasts as they
filled out the gown and later as the strained against the bra beneath. I
watched as the gown gave way to her tanned thighs and an ass that filled out
the purple panties quite well. I started to wish I hadn’t promised her to
Mick- but then again without his help I’d never have tried this.
When Mick had the gown off he applied the knife to her bra and then to
her panties. I envied Mick all the more as he revealed Ellen in all her
glory. She was lying very still while he removed her clothes- most probably
in hopes Mick wouldn’t cut her but accident. But as he finished she rolled
suddenly, swinging her legs toward Mick and trying to sit up on the bed. She
caught Mick in the chest and he stumbled back.
I was startled momentarily by the move and lost another few seconds
watching the way her flesh moved as she acted. She had gotten halfway to the
door before I caught up to her. We landed on the floor hard- with her taking
the brunt of the fall. She squirmed beneath me and I could feel her asscheeks
against my chest. It was rather distracting and for a second I nearly forgot
that this girl was Mick’s toy- not mine.
The fact was brought home as Mick grabbed a handful of Ellen silky hair and
drug the girl back to the bed. He pushed her face down over the side. He
laced his arms through her bound ones and pulled back.
“If you like it rough, BITCH, then so be it. I’m going to fuck you so
brutally that you’ll have my cum in your throat, even if you don’t suck me
off.”
He pulled back so that his dick just barely inside her and then rammed
forward. Ellen screamed beneath her gag. He continued to pull in and out
violently and increasingly quickly. With each thrust I heard Ellen screams.
Her eyes were squeezed tight. Blood ran from both her lip and nose. After
what seemed like a half hour- was probably only about a minute Mick came.
As he pulled out he released Ellen’s arms and flipped her over so she
faced him. He kissed her face and worked down to her neck and then to her
chest. He licked her round her breasts then began to suck each until her
nipples stood erect on both breasts. Then suddenly I heard Ellen shriek
behind the tape. I looked to see a trickle of blood running from her left
breast, where Mick had bitten her.
Mick turned partially toward me- “Damn she is tasty. I hope she’s still
worth fucking by the time you get her, man. She’s liable to be all worn out
by then."
I just chuckled- not trusting that Ellen wouldn’t recognize my voice as
soon as I did more. Mick went back to work on her right breast. Her shrieks
grew more frantic and insistent. When Mick next pulled back his head Ellen’s
once lovely chest was covered with bite marks and streaked with blood. Ellen
herself was whimpering and quaking.
Something about the whimpering must have set Mick off as he struck her
across the face until she stopped. He then roughly grabbed a handful of hair
and pulled her head back.
“Now, whore, you are going to suck me off. I know it must occur that you
could hurt me doing this. But if you do- my friend over there will make your
last minutes unbearable. Everything so far will seem like the pleasant fuck
you ever had in comparison- understand.”
Mick kept a firm hold on Ellen’s hair, pulling the tape off with his other
hand. When she kept her lips firmly closed, he punched her in the stomach.
He rammed his dick into her mouth when she opened her mouth with the outrush
of breath. She tried to pull away or push him out to no avail. After a few
minutes he pulled out and violently turned her back around.
He forced her face into the mattress as he rammed his dick against her
ass. He yelled for me to gag the bitch and quick. I was uncomfortable with
getting that close to Mick- I know I wouldn’t want some guy hanging over me at
this type of moment. Still Ellen first scream made me over come my
reluctance. I quickly reattached the tape and retreated from the room. I
could hear muffled screams for the next few minutes.
I returned to find Mick with his dick in Ellen’s mouth again- but this time
she was obviously not breathing. Mick smiled at me “I was too much for this
bitch. I literally fucked her to death. What a fucking rush. Let’s do this
again next week- but this time with two girls, so you can join in on the fun."
I was silent as we loaded Ellen’s body into the car. We dumped her in a
park a few counties over. I decided that I really didn’t Mick’s help that much. He was not someone I wanted around while I played with prey.
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