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               *     Detective Peterson leaned in to look at the body.
               Forensics had already done their part and the store manager
               lay dead inside the large black bag. The corner zipped it
               shut and two EMT's helped load the slab and body into his
               van. He was an older, balding man with thick glasses and long
               skinny fingers. He shut the door and pushed his glasses up
               his nose as he turned to Peterson.

                                   CORONER
                         Stabbed through the heart with a
                         small round piece of metal, less
                         than an inch in diameter. The lab
                         should have more for you in a few
                         days, but without a murder
                         weapon...

               He shrugged his shoulders and walked away to the front of his
               van. Peterson tapped his pen against his notebook and looked
               around. The uniforms were taking down the police tape and the
               onlookers were slowly milling away. A pudgy young man in a
               Star Trek T-shirt watched the van as it drove away. He
               slurped the last bits of his large Frappuccino and walked
               away looking at the cup with disappointment. Detective
               Peterson was days away from his fiftieth birthday. He had a
               thick head of messy grey hair and a warm thoughtful face. He
               wasn't in the best shape. His days of running after crooks
               were long behind him, but he had settled nicely into homicide
               investigation. He looked around the alley, imagining what
               events led to this mans murder on such a warm sunny morning.
               The sun glinted off of his pen as he stared at the open back
               door of the coffee shop. Reyes "Lucky" Thompson was the man
               laying in the back of the coroner's van. A pool of his blood
               lay thick and sticky by the open door of the shop he managed.
               As Peterson approached it, the last of the uniforms on the
               scene gave him a parting run down of the situation.

                                   UNIFORM
                         All signs point to a mugging. His
                         wallet keys and phone are missing,
                         along with his car. The shop
                         owner's been called, and she's on
                         her way to the station. All the
                         employees are on their way to
                         separate lock ups. Should I secure
                         the building, sir?

                                   PETERSON
                         No. I'm going to have a look around
                         before I head to the station.

                                   UNIFORM
                         Yes, sir.

               The young cop handed Peterson a ring of keys and walked away.
               Peterson stepped around the blood and carefully entered the
               door. The kitchen was immaculate. The shop hadn't been open
               for more than an hour before the police got an anonymous tip
               about the murder. Peterson knew that other members of the
               force had gone over the shop with a fine tooth comb, but he
               had a need to see things for himself. He looked at the tools
               and utensils, searching for anything that might fit the
               description the coroner gave. There was nothing.

               *     Hours before the police were needed, the morning sun
               shined a blue filtered haze through the glass front doors of
               the coffee shop. Six small round tables filled the main room.
               Behind them, a small counter was filled with neatly organized
               cups and various shiny coffee machines. Behind the counter, a
               door led to the kitchen on the far right and a small hallway
               led to an office, a storage room, and bathrooms on the left.
               Janine was in front of the counter wiping everything with a
               dust cloth. She was a tall red headed girl of nineteen with a
               thin build and long curly hair. She had ear buds in and her
               back was to the door. She danced as she cleaned, humming
               along to whatever she was listening to. Outside the door,
               Douglas stood watching. He was a pudgy man in his mid
               twenties, wearing cargo shorts and a Star Trek T-shirt, with
               a soft leather satchel slung over his shoulder. He tapped on
               the glass several times, and had finally decided to just give
               up and enjoy the show. Janine rocked her small ass side to
               side in tight white jeans and a matching blouse, then arched
               her back to belt out a high note. Douglas wondered if she
               sounded anywhere near as good as she looked when she sang.
               Janine bowed to her imaginary audience and pulled the
               headphones from her ears. She winked at Douglas as she opened
               the doors for him.

                                   DOUGLAS
                         That was the best five minutes I've
                         ever had to wait in my life.

               Janine giggled.

                                   JANINE
                         I knew you were out there. I
                         thought you might like that. The
                         usual?

               Douglas plopped down at a table and hurriedly pulled a binder
               and a decorative case from his satchel.

                                   DOUGLAS
                         Naw... I'm feeling crazy today.
                         Let's do a large Mocha frappˇ.
                         Extra whip cream.

                                   JANINE
                         Wow! Going all out. You haven't
                         changed your morning order in six
                         months. I'll be right back.

               She went behind the counter to make his coffee and Douglas
               opened the binder and the mall case. Inside the case was an
               assortment of fine ink pens organized by the thickness of the
               line they produced. He took one from the center and began
               delicately working on whatever was on the paper. Janine
               returned with his coffee and sat down across the table from
               him.

                                   JANINE (CONT'D)
                         You are so talented.

               She looked at him, her big green eyes radiating warmth and
               admiration. Douglas smiled. 

                                   DOUGLAS
                         Not really. I'm just an ink guy.
                         All I do is trace other peoples
                         work and add a little color.

                                   JANINE
                         Don't be ridiculous. You have more
                         talent than anyone I've ever known.

               His smile faded as he looked down at the binder.

                                   DOUGLAS
                         Tell that to the guys at Dark Star
                         Comics. They fired me yesterday.
                         Said they'll be doing all the ink
                         and color with computers from now
                         on.

                                   JANINE
                         Oh no.

               She reached out and touched his hand.

                                   JANINE (CONT'D)
                         What are you going to do?

                                   DOUGLAS
                         I got some money saved. Me and a
                         buddy are going to open a comic
                         book store. See.

               He lifted the binder and turned it for her to see the page.
               On it was a drawing of him holding a comic book and the words
               "Nerd Boy Comics" in the background.

                                   JANINE
                         You are amazing.

                                   DOUGLAS
                         We'll see. If this doesn't pan out,
                         I could always apply for a job
                         here.

                                   JANINE
                         Oh, God! I wouldn't wish that on my
                         worst enemy.

               Just as she finished the sentence, Lucky Thompson stepped
               from the kitchen. He was a tall thin man in his thirties,
               touches of grey sprinkling his hair. He had a handsome face
               and most people would have found him quite attractive, if he
               wasn't such a tool.

                                   LUCKY
                         So let's see, that what five
                         minutes now, I've been paying you
                         to do nothing useful.

               Pain and sorrow sunk into Janine's eyes as she stood and
               whispered to Douglas.

                                   JANINE
                         This job would be awesome, if that
                         dick would just get hit by a bus on
                         the way home.

               Lucky looked at his watch and folded his arms as she slowly
               walked behind the counter and went back to dusting. Lucky
               smiled at Douglas as if he were proud of himself then looked
               at Janine.

                                   LUCKY
                         Dan and Dave are both late again. I
                         can't have you working the counter
                         alone, so I want you to pick witch
                         one of them gets fired.

                                   JANINE
                         Are you kidding?

                                   LUCKY
                         Nope. Think it over and let me know
                         when they get here. Send witch ever
                         one you choose to get axed to my
                         office first.

               With a peppy step and a smile, he disappeared down the
               hallway. Janine grumbled to herself as she wiped the
               counters. Douglas looked at her, unsure of what to do or say.

               *     Dan and Dave came into the shop. They were the
               unlikeliest pair you would ever see. Both twenty one years
               old, Dan was a small, thin white guy with a baby face and
               short light brown hair, while Dave was a tall muscular
               African American with a smoothly shaved head. They were both
               wearing jeans and "Members Only" jackets and laughed about
               something as they entered. They stopped at the table where
               Douglas sat and raised their arms, turning and posing.

                                   DAVE
                         E-bay, baby! Sixty bucks each.

                                   JANINE
                         Shut up and get over here you
                         jerks!

               Janine threw the dusting rag into the corner and squared up
               on the two as they rounded the counter.

                                   JANINE (CONT'D)
                         That douche bag of a manager is
                         going to fire one of you, and he
                         wants me to pick.

                                   DAN
                         Fire? What for?

                                   JANINE
                         For being late again, you idiots.

                                   DAVE
                         It's fine. Pick me.

                                   DAN
                         No way, man pick me.

               Janine pulled at her hair in frustration.

                                   JANINE
                         I'm not picking either one of you
                         guys. We are marching into that
                         office and telling that tool that
                         if he fires either one of you, we
                         all quit.

               The two guys looked at each other and rubbed their chins.

                                   DAN
                         Yeah, we're all getting Shit
                         canned.

               Janine shook her head and threw her arms up with a grunt.

                                   JANINE
                         Come on!

                                   DAN
                         Hold on.

               He pulled his phone from his pocket and pushed the call
               button. The other two looked at him as he held it to his ear
               and waited. 

                                   DAVE
                         So, did the douche bag say anything
                         else this morning?

               Janine glared at Dave as Dan started talking.

                                   DAN
                         Hey Sareena, when you wake up could
                         you do me a favor and start
                         highlighting the job postings in
                         the paper again? See you in like
                         two hours.

               He hung up the phone with a casual smile and Janine glared at
               him as she marched past them.

                                   JANINE
                         Come on.

               Lucky had changed from his cackies and polo shirt to a pair
               of shorts and a jersey. He was stretching his legs on the
               desk when the trio knocked and quickly entered his office.

                                   JANINE (CONT'D)
                         Fire either of them and we all
                         walk.

                                   LUCKY
                         OK.

               He continued stretching as if he hadn't a care in the world.

                                   JANINE
                         OK?

                                   LUCKY
                         It's a tough decision. A management
                         decision. I had a feeling you 
                         weren't ready for so much
                         responsibility, as young as you
                         are. 

               Her fist clinched and Dave put a hand on her arm just in
               case. He gave her a head shake and she took a deep breath. 

                                   LUCKY (CONT'D)
                         Tell you what, you're solidarity is
                         impressive, so while I'm out for my
                         morning jog, I'll think about
                         things and get back to you.

               With that he casually stepped past them and left the coffee
               shop through the kitchen's back door.

                                   JANINE
                         That arrogant jack-ass! Riding my
                         ass about talking to a paying
                         customer for five minutes while he
                         takes hour long jogs on the clock.
                         I swear to god, I'm going to bash
                         his brains in.

               Dan looked up at Dave.

                                   DAN
                         Dude, how do you keep getting us
                         involved with these violent women?

                                   DAVE
                         What can I say? I have a type.

                                   DAN
                         You make me glad I'm gay.

               Janine's face was beat red with anger. Dave gently took her
               hand and pointed at coffee maker slowly percolating on
               Lucky's desk.

                                   DAVE
                         Come on, girl. You knew this was
                         going to happen. What kind of self
                         important nut bag brings his own
                         coffee to a coffee shop?

                                   DAN
                         Besides, we've only been working
                         here for three weeks.

               Her lips curled upwards as she looked at the coffee maker and
               the mini fridge behind Lucky's desk.

                                   JANINE
                         That's right... he has a cup of his
                         "perfect coffee" every morning
                         after his run.

                                   DAN
                         Dude, I think we're in trouble.

                                   JANINE
                         Dave, stay here. Dan, come with me.

               The two of them walked out to the main room and Douglas
               looked up with curiosity. Janine stopped at the table with a
               devious smile while Dan went to the front door and locked it.
               A beautiful blonde girl stood at the door as he turned the
               sign to closed. She gave Dave pouty lips and batted her eyes.
               He shrugged apologetically and turned away. Janine grabbed
               Douglas by the hand and pulled him to his feet.

                                   JANINE (CONT'D)
                         Come with me. I want you to be a
                         part of this.

               Before he could respond, she was pulling him down the hall
               and into the office. Once they were all in the office, she
               hurried around the desk and opened Lucky's fridge. She pulled
               out his bottle of hazelnut creamer with a snobby looking
               label across the front and set it on the desk.

                                   JANINE (CONT'D)
                         His next cup of coffee is going to
                         be less hazel and more nut.

               Dan and Dave shook their heads.

                                   DAVE
                         I knew she was going to make that
                         pun the minute I saw the creamer.

                                   DOUGLAS
                         So you want us to jerk off into his
                         coffee creamer.

               Janine sat on Lucky's desk and began unbuttoning her blouse.

                                   JANINE
                         Don't be silly. You know how much I
                         like you. I wouldn't bring you back
                         here just to make you play with
                         yourself.

               She opened her blouse with a smile. She wasn't wearing a bra
               and her ample breasts jiggled side to side as she playfully
               rotated her torso slightly. They were by no means huge, but
               larger than you would expect to find on a woman as thin as
               she was. They were natural and had a beautifully elastic hang
               as they bobbled.

                                   JANINE (CONT'D)
                         I'm going to suck all three of you
                         off and spit your cum into his
                         creamer.

               Douglas blushed as the front of his shorts began to stretch.
               Dan stepped over to the desk and stood next to Janine.

                                   DAN
                         I don't think so.

               Janine looked at him with confusion.

                                   DAN (CONT'D)
                         If you think there's going to be
                         dick sucking at work, and I'm not
                         getting one in my mouth, you're
                         crazy.

                                   JANINE
                         My mistake.

               She led Douglas to the table and Dan did the same with Dave.
               The two men stood next to each other as the other two
               unbuttoned their bottoms and pulled them to the floor. Janine
               looked over at Dave's huge brown penis in utter disbelief.
               Dan gave her a proud smirk.

                                   DAN
                         Yeah. That's my best friend.

               Douglas' cock was already hard. Janine spit on it, and slowly
               spread the slippery liquid around. His penis bent upward at
               the middle of the shaft and twisted slightly at the head. In
               her head, she estimated it to be just over six inches as she
               squeezed her soft warm tits around it. He moaned as his penis
               throbbed in her cleavage as she titfucked his swollen shaft.
               Next to her Dan was slowly filling his mouth with huge head
               of his buddies penis. Janine and Dan sucked their friends
               off, occasionally trading cocks playfully until Douglas said
               he was ready to cum in a breathy moan. She opened her mouth
               and stroked his shaft while Dan grabbed the bottle of creamer
               from the desk. Janine made sure to get every squirt of sperm
               from Douglas' penis before slowly spitting into the coffee
               creamer. A string of gloppy ooze dripped from her chin and
               she scooped it with her finger and wiped it into the
               container. She handed the creamer back to Dan and sucked hard
               on the head of Dave's cock until he threw his head back with
               a moan. His cum overflowed from her mouth and ran down the
               sides of her cheeks. Dan helped her get all of the spunk into
               the container and they all carefully cleaned the room. She
               twirled the bottle before returning it to the small
               refrigerator, making sure the gloppy sperm mixed thoroughly
               with the milky creamer.

               .     When Lucky returned from his jog, he found Janine and
               Dan organizing supplies in the small kitchen. Douglas was in
               the same chair at the same table, sipping his coffee and
               doodling in his note book.
               Dave was behind the counter serving a customer. Lucky waited
               until the customer left the store and walked over to the
               front door.

                                   LUCKY
                         I'm afraid I'm going to have to ask
                         you to leave now.

               He was looking at Douglas with a fake plastic smile. Douglas
               closed his pen box and put it in his satchel, but kept his
               notebook and pen in his hand as he left. Lucky locked the
               door behind him and walked back to the counter.

                                   LUCKY (CONT'D)
                         I need everyone in my office now.

               He walked down the hall and into his office where he sat
               behind his desk. Steam rose from the freshly percolated
               coffee. His mug sat next to the machine on the corner of his
               desk. He swiveled in his chair and whistled with a smile as
               he pulled his creamer from the fridge and set it on the desk.
               The trio entered his office.

                                   LUCKY (CONT'D)
                         Janine, I knew you weren't ready to
                         handle such an important decision.
                         I thought maybe it was your age,
                         but during my jog, I realized it's
                         because you're an woman. So, that
                         leaves me with the decision. I'd
                         love to fire both of you, but that
                         would mean me working the counter.
                         If I wanted to do that, I wouldn't
                         have taken the job as manager. So
                         while I enjoy my coffee, I'm going
                         to be deciding whether I want to
                         worry about some fairy checking out
                         my ass all the time or some black
                         guy stealing from the register
                         every day. Of course, you could
                         save me the trouble and quit, so I
                         don't have to give you a severance
                         pay. Anyway, you've got about
                         fifteen minutes to think it over.
                         I'll let you know then. Close the
                         door on your way out.

               He waved them away and grabbed his mug. No sooner than the
               door clicked shut.

                                   DAVE
                         I'm going to kill that guy.

                                   DAN
                         I hope he chokes on his fucking
                         coffee.

               The three walked down the hall, through the kitchen and out
               of the back door never to return to the coffee shop.

               Meanwhile in his office, Lucky filled his mug and took a deep
               long sniff of his favorite roast. He gently shook the creamer
               bottle in one hand as he pulled a red stir stick from his
               desk. He popped the cap and poured a couple ounces of the
               thick milky cream into his coffee, smiling as he swirled the
               liquids together. He blew the rising steam and took a deep
               drink of his coffee. His face contorted. He took another
               small sip and let his sit in his mouth. His face contorted
               further. He set the coffee down and picked up the bottle of
               creamer. He turned it slowly, scanning the bottom of the
               bottle for it's expiration date. He found it and scratched
               his head with confusion. He put the bottled to his nose and
               smelled it, then pulled it away quickly with a frown. He
               tossed the creamer into the small trash can next to his desk
               and hopped from his chair. He called out for every to hear as
               he walked down the hall.

                                   LUCKY
                         You've got an extra half hour to
                         ponder your future while I run to
                         the store for some creamer.

               There was only silence. Lucky entered the main room to find
               no one. He grunted to himself and quickly walked behind the
               counter and into the kitchen.

                                   LUCKY (CONT'D)
                         What the hell are you idiots
                         thinking leaving no one at the
                         counter?

               He was talking to the walls. There was no one in the kitchen
               either. The back door was open and Lucky stepped out of it
               with a frustrated glare. He gurgled something about
               incomprehensible shock as felt his chest being stabbed. The
               eyes of his killer in the bright morning sun were the last
               thing he saw.

               *    It was late in the day and Detective Peterson sat at his
               desk watching Dan, Dave and Janine walking out of the police
               station. He twisted hi torso trying to get comfortable. For
               years, he had been ignoring the dull throb in his lower back
               when he sat down. Detective Mathews sat at the desk next to
               his and was just hanging up the phone.

                                   PETERSON
                         Are we letting all three suspects
                         go?

                                   MATHEWS
                         We could hold them for twenty four
                         hours, but there's no point.
                         There's no murder weapon, no blood
                         on them, and a patrol man found the
                         victims car by an abandoned
                         warehouse on the waterfront.

                                   PETERSON
                         You don't say.

               He leaned back in his chair and frowned.

                                   MATHEWS
                         The guys wallet and phone were in
                         the car, credit cards and cash
                         gone. And get this, that
                         warehouse... Chop shop we busted
                         last year. Some junkie probably
                         robbed the poor bastard and tried
                         to trade his car for a few days
                         worth of smack. Probably jonesing
                         so bad, he didn't remember that his
                         buddies were cleared out of that
                         part of town.

               Peterson fidgeted in his chair as he rubbed his chin and
               stared at the ceiling with dissatisfaction.

                                   PETERSON
                         Say, that chop shop bust made the
                         papers, right?

                                   MATHEWS
                         You kidding? The chief still has
                         the front page mounted and framed
                         behind his desk. The mayor shook
                         his hand for getting his Lexus
                         back.

                                   PETERSON
                         Yeah, I thought that was the one.

               He slowly shook his head. Mathews knew the look on Peterson's
               face was the one he gets when he starts obsessing about a
               case.

                                   MATHEWS
                         Is you're spidey sense tingling old
                         timer?

                                   PETERSON
                         I don't know. It all seems so
                         clean. Who was on the phone?

               Mathews swiveled in his chair side to side. Peterson watched
               with envy as the younger man moved in his chair with ease.

                                   MATHEWS
                         One of the tech heads up stairs.
                         Get this, the call reporting the
                         murder came from the victim's
                         phone. How bout that, a junkie with
                         a conscious.

                                   PETERSON
                         How about that...

               Peterson looked back to the ceiling and frowned as he
               continued trying to adjust his torso to stop the pain.

               *     In another part of the city, Douglas sat on a bench
               staring at the lake. The sun was setting and off in the
               distance, a happy couple trekked across the horizon in a
               small paddle boat. Douglas stared at the deep shimmering
               water of the lake. He had his notebook opened to the picture
               of his store logo and was coloring the letters a vibrant
               shade of red. Only half of the letters were outlined in ink.
               They were done in a thin deep shiny black line. Douglas
               reached the half that were still sketched in pencil and
               sighed. He looked over at the open pen box sitting next to
               him on the bench. The pen on the farthest right, his thinnest
               tipped, favorite pen was missing. He looked back to the deep
               waters of the lake and sighed again before going back to
               coloring his new logo with red.
                

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