Blurb: My submission to the FDWritings yahoo group Halloween
Festival. A new girl has interesting tastes in Halloween
costumes.

mf

Copyright 2003. All rights reserved by the author (that's
me, Mark Reed). Posted here with permission.

Read at your own risk. If smut offends you, don't read this.
If you're younger than 18, don't read this. 

A big thank you goes to Mycroftxxx for editing and proofing
this story. He continues to impress me.

Halloween Visitor
By Mark Reed

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Author's Note: This is my submission for the Halloween
Festival in the FDWritings yahoo group. I was beginning to
think it woul end up like the movie "clue," with multiple
endings. My editor extraordinaire, Mycroftxxx, saved my
bacon once again.
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Have you ever been in an overly crowded room when it went
completely silent? It's eerie.

I was dressed up as James Bond at a Halloween party. We were
all pretty much crowded into one large room, when this
gorgeous babe walked into the party stark naked. No one said
a word, but the party host quickly stepped up to her and
told her in no uncertain terms that he didn't want any
trouble and that she had to leave. She looked confused and
crestfallen. As for myself, I was wondering how she had
gotten away with walking to the party in the middle of the
afternoon! I decided this was something worth looking into,
so while she was quickly being hightailed out of there, I
ran after her. 

"Hey," I said once I was caught up to her. We were 'alone,'
or as alone as two people can be on the sidewalk of a semi
busy street when one of them is nude. 

She glanced at me out of the corner of her eye. "What do you
want?" she asked. She didn't sound happy.

"I was just wondering if you'd like some company." I can be
smooth when I want to, and right then I was trying to pound
out the charm at full blast. She looked at me again before
shaking her head. Okay, try a different tack. "You look like
you could use a drink. Let me buy you one, we can go
somewhere and talk." Okay, so maybe I'm not *that* smooth,
but she was kind of distracting me at the time.

She looked at me again with a measuring look, then smiled.
"I'd like that," she said sweetly. 

I tried to hide my pleasure. In my mind I hummed "you've got
it made; you're getting laid. You've got it made… you're
getting laid…" over and over while we walked for a bit. I
brought myself back to reality and realized the silence had
become a little awkward. I thought for a moment, then
decided a bit of conversation was needed. "I haven't seen
you around before. Are you new in town?" 

She smiled again. Almost laughed, really. "I'm just
visiting. Some friends and I are passing through the general
area and we all thought we'd stop to partake of the
festivities."

I liked the way she partook. "Do you usually celebrate
Halloween by walking around naked?" 

She smiled again and glanced at me before her eyes flicked
back to watch the sidewalk in front of her. "Sometimes. It
depends." She paused for a moment, then continued. "Where I
live, skin is considered a costume all its own. I didn't
realize my form would create problems or I would have chosen
differently." 

Where did she live, a nudist colony? I scrambled for
something to say that wouldn't put my foot in my mouth.
Finally I blurted out "I like what you're wearing just
fine." Oh shit. I cringed immediately, thinking I'd just
blew it.

Strangely, it seemed to please her. Her smile changed to a
grin, and she stopped to put a hand on my shoulder. "Thank
you," she whispered while looking into my eyes. She had the
craziest eyes. Two black orbs surrounded by a ring of orange
and flecks of red amidst a backwash of hazel. I'd never seen
anything like them before. "Perhaps we can find someplace
more private so I can show you some other ways we celebrate
the holiday where I come from," she said softly. I didn't
have to be told twice. "My place is just a block from here.
Let's get you inside before you're arrested." She looked
puzzled at that, but came with me willingly.

----

I pulled her on top of me and kissed her as passionately as
I could. We were both naked, so I let my hands wander all
over her backside. Her skin wasn't quite as soft as I had
expected, but she made up for that by being rather well
endowed in all the right places. My tongue invaded her mouth
and her tongue intertwined with mine. Our breathing became
heavier as our bodies pressed up against each other. I
wanted to feel every last place of her body. I wanted to
take her. I wanted to own her. 

My hands began exploring her body and her hands mimicked my
own. Our kissing became more frantic. She seemed to be
looking to me for leads, but once I did something she
mimicked it eagerly. My hands moved to her breasts and began
squeezing them. I found her nipples and rolled them gently
between my thumbs and forefingers. She moaned and tossed her
head back, breaking our kiss. My skin was on fire. My body
seemed to move of its own accord. My head bent down and I
took a nipple in my mouth. My hands pushed her flat on the
ground and moved down to position my cock at her entrance.
She was hot, wet, ready, and *tight.* She also seemed to
have a hair trigger. It wasn't long before I had her coming
over and over and over and over...

----

I was already half asleep when she got up to leave. I
dragged myself out of my comfortable position and sat up.
"Please don't go," I said. It was some of the best sex I had
ever had. I mean, mind-blowing. She could do things with her
muscles down there that were just amazing. There was no way
in hell I was going to let her leave without a fight. 

She looked back at me, smiling sadly. "I have to," she said,
her voice full of regret. "My friends are waiting for me.
It's time for us to move on." 

"Can't you stay?" I asked. No, begged. "Stick around for a
few more days? I could show you around. We have plenty of
interesting things to see." We were in a hick town stuck
smack dab in the middle of nowhere and unless she enjoyed
watching people work out in the crops, there wasn't a thing
to see, but I had to say *something.*

"I'm sure we could have a lot of fun together," she said
smoothly. "But my friends would leave me behind and I'd need
to get home eventually."

"I could always drive you," I said, trying to add some humor
in my voice. "You're here now, how far can it be?" I sounded
more pleading than funny. This was NOT going well.

She shook her head and smiled sadly. "I have to go." It was
a 'simple as that' tone of voice. Okay, if you can't beat
'em...

"Let me come with you, then. I'd like to meet your friends,
and I know we can have a lot fun together." 

Her eyes grew wide. "Oh no, you couldn't," she said quickly.
"We won't be in this area again. We're taking a different
way home."

"You could drop me off at a bus station. I have enough money
to buy a ticket." Well, it wasn't *my* money per se but... I
could have paid my buddy back. He's an asshole, anyway.

She shook her head again, this time with more determination
showing. "I'm sorry. You wouldn't fit in, and I doubt you
could get back to this place again. I was just passing
through. We had fun. You're going to have to settle for
that. How did your poets say it? We're from different
worlds, you and I." 

Somewhere in the back of my mind something was trying to get
my attention, but I wasn't listening. I wasn't being
reasonable either. I steeled myself. I was going with her.
She'd get over it after our first few fucks. She'd thank me
later. "Let me at least see you off properly, then. I'll
come with you to see them." 

Her smile had returned, but she was still shaking her head.
"Oh, I don't think that would be a very good idea. Besides,
I don't have to go anywhere. They're going to pick me up
here. I was just trying to avoid... well... this." She
raised her arms and shrugged helplessly. 

They were coming here? It sounded too easy. I smiled.
"Great! Then we can both wait for them here. I'll go outside
with you and... see you off." I wondered if I could charm my
way into her friends' good graces. 

Her eyes flickered to the side and a look of concentration
flashed through her face. She looked at me again and smiled
sadly. "It's time for me to go. Thank you for tonight. I had
a very good time. It's... interesting around here." 

This is the point where in the movies the guy is supposed to
say "Wait! I love you" and the girl turns around and decides
to stay. The thing is, she wasn't turning to go. She wasn't
doing anything. She was just standing there, smiling at me.
I struggled for something to say, and another movie line
popped into my head. "Wait!" I said. She just looked at me.
"I... I don't even know your name." 

She paused. "Yes." She paused again. "It's better that way."
Her eyes flicked to the side briefly before she waved at me
with her hand. "Bye now!" she said cheerily.

The air around her skin began to glow. The piece of carpet
she was standing on started wavering, like something out of
a bad Startrek spin-off. Her skin color changed to a deep
red. Her body began to fade and was slowly replaced by
something... else. Something... different. The glow around
her became so bright that I could only see an eight foot
tall silhouette where she had previously been. One long
tentacle continued the back and forth 'bye-bye' motions her
hand had previously made, while the other tentacle came
forward to wrap itself around my arm. I tried to pull away
in sudden horror, but it gripped my forearm fiercely. I
could feel a warmth beginning to flow through my body from
my arm, and I suddenly felt the same exhilarated sense of
excitement we had shared after our coupling. 

I peered through the shield of sparkling luminescence,
searching in vain for those crazy eyes. I blinked slowly,
trying to keep the tears away. "I think I love you," I
finally choked out. The tentacle gave me another squeeze,
and a feeling of affection flowed through me. Slowly the
tentacle loosened and drew back into the shimmering light,
leaving a thin coat of slime on my forearm. I blinked my
eyes again; unable to keep the tears from streaming down my
face. The light grew so bright that I flinched and put my
arm over my eyes. There was one final flash of luminescent
intensity before the room grew dark again. Right before the
flash, I spotted those two familiar but crazy eyes. We
connected on a level I had never felt before and I could
actually feel her remorse. For one miniscule instant of
time, we looked into each other's souls. I slowly realized
that love can come in the strangest disguises. 

I brought myself back to earth, so to speak, and snorted.
She's gone. Listen to me, thinking of love, like some damned
poet. I shook my head violently, trying to clear it, trying
to snap myself out of whatever funk I was in. I got up and
got dressed. One of my friends back at the party loves to
collect Halloween stories. This year I had a dinger for him.

Still, it's a crying shame she had to be an alien. I mean,
she was like walking talking sex in a bottle or something.
Jesus, what a fuck! 

Ever have the best fuck of your life, and then find out you
just did it with an alien? It's eerie.

~fin~




Origional Ending

The air around her skin began to glow. The piece of carpet
she was standing on started wavering, like something out of
a bad Startrek spin-off. Her skin color changed to a deep
red. Her body began to fade and was slowly replaced by
something... else. Something... different. My jaw dropped in
shock as I took in her new form, then a brilliant white
flash erupted in front of her and I was temporarily blinded.
When the room finally began coming back into focus, she was
gone. I stood there, watching the same place she had been in
only seconds before, but I wasn't seeing it.

I was seeing what had been there just before the white flash
took her away. Its head had changed into a long, fat
cylinder, like a thick tree branch. Its body was about 8
feet tall and twice as wide as it had been before. Its skin
was a deep red with tan colored sickle shaped spots on its
face, like freckles but bigger. Where arms had been before,
two long tentacles writhed and twisted, mimicking the hand
waving motions that had been waving bye bye only moments
before. It balanced itself on one short appendage that
protruded from the bottom of the body. The entrance to a
hole in the middle of its lower body was opening up and
squeezing itself shut, oozing a kind of brown slime. 

I'm told they found me later that night crawling around on
the floor of my room, mumbling incoherently. They said it
took three people to finally subdue me. Nobody knows quite
what happened to me that night. They think I was on
something.

Truth is, I don't know quite what happened to me that night,
either.




Alternate Ending 2

The air around her skin began to glow. The piece of carpet
she was standing on started wavering, like something out of
a bad Startrek spin-off. Her skin color changed to a deep
red. Her body began to fade and was slowly replaced by
something... else. Something... different. The glow around
her became so bright that I could only see an eight foot
tall silhouette where she had previously been. One long
tentacle continued the back and forth 'bye-bye' motions her
hand had previously made, while the other tentacle came
forward to wrap itself around my arm. I tried to pull away
in sudden horror, but it gripped my forearm fiercely. I
could feel a warmth beginning to flow through my body from
my arm, and I suddenly felt the same exhilarated sense of
excitement we had shared after our coupling. 

I looked at the black figure, searching for those crazy eyes
again, but I couldn't see them through the shimmering light.
I blinked slowly, trying to keep the tears from my eyes. "I
think I love you," I finally choked out. The tentacle gave
me another squeeze, and a feeling of affection flowed
through me. Slowly the tentacle loosened and drew back into
the shimmering light. I blinked my eyes again, unable to
keep the tears from streaming down my face. The light grew
so bright that I flinched and put my arm over my eyes. There
was one final flash of luminescent intensity, then the room
grew dark again.

Ever have the best fuck of your life, then find out you just
did it with an alien? It's eerie.

 


Alternate Ending 3

The air around her skin began to glow. The piece of carpet
she was standing on started wavering, like something out of
a bad Startrek spin-off. Her skin color changed to a deep
red. Her body began to fade and was slowly replaced by
something... else. Something... different. My jaw dropped in
shock as I took in her new form, then a brilliant white
flash erupted in front of her and I was temporarily blinded.
When the room finally began coming back into focus, she was
gone. I stood there, watching the same place she had been in
only seconds before, but I wasn't seeing it.

I was seeing what had been there just before the white flash
took her away. Its head had changed into a long, fat
cylinder, like a thick tree branch. Its body was about 8
feet tall and twice as wide as it had been before. Its skin
was a deep red with tan colored sickle shaped spots on its
face, like freckles but bigger. Where arms had been before,
two long tentacles writhed and twisted, mimicking the hand
waving motions that had been waving bye-bye only moments
before. It balanced itself on one short appendage that
protruded from the bottom of the body. Right before the
flash, I had looked into those two familiar but crazy eyes.
I could almost feel the sense of remorse. For one miniscule
instant of time, we saw into each others souls, and I slowly
realized that love can come in the strangest disguises. 

I brought myself back to earth, so to speak, and snorted.
Listen to me, thinking of love, like some damned poet. 

Still, it's a crying shame she had to be an alien. I mean,
she was like walking talking sex in a bottle or something.
Jesus, what a fuck.

I snapped myself out of it, again, and got dressed. One of
my friends back at the party loves to collect Halloween
stories. This year I had a dinger for him.