BREWBOTTOM
by
Joe Doe
A PLUCKY NEW WARDEN DECIDES TO GO UNDERCOVER AS AN INMATE,
BUT SHE IS QUICKLY "EXPOSED."
Natalie Brewbottom strode confidently into the exclusive club near
her law offices in lower Manhattan. Although only a few years out
of law school, she was already fabulously successful. She was
dressed in a natty blue Armani suit with a crisp silk blouse,
stylishly high heels, and a tasteful broach that the Governor of
New York had given her after she had won a particularly important
case back in her days at the DA's Office.
Life was good for Natalie.
But today there was something else on her mind. The governor
of a small southern state had offered her the warden's job at
a hopelessly corrupt prison for women that he was desperate to
reform. It was not exactly a move up for Natalie, but money was
really no longer a major factor for her. There was another aspect
of the job that appealed more.
She had recently seen the Robert Redford movie "Brubaker" and had
become fascinated with the idea of going "undercover" in prison.
It would be very dramatic; one day she would be a nameless inmate,
and the next day she would be the new warden!
But there was a darker side to her fantasy. She had always had
fantasies of being strip searched, which were difficult to fulfill
when you were a lawyer in Manhattan making six figures. But
somehow she had a feeling that a beautiful young Yankee locked up
in a cracker prison would have no trouble at all fulfilling THAT
fantasy.
Her cousin, Holly, was the governor's assistant, and she was the
one who had suggested Natalie for the job. She had phoned Holly
about her plan, and the latter had agreed to help if she could
first talk to Natalie face to face. Accordingly, Natalie had flown
her up to New York for a visit. She was glad Holly had actually
showed up for the 8:00 AM breakfast at the club. Although Holly
was a good friend, Natalie knew how much her cousin loved to play
pranks.
"This isn't like one of those stunts we used to pull back in
college," Holly pointed out. "This place is corrupt and mean;
if they find out who you really are, you won't be coming back."
"That's why you and I have to be the only two people who know,"
Natalie explained in a conspiratorial whisper. "I'm telling my
partners that I'm going on a sabbatical, and you will be the only
one who will know where I am."
"Natalie, they're not just going to take away your clothes there,"
Holly explained. "Those hillbillies are going to strip you of
EVERYTHING...your freedom, your money, your identity. The warden
and the Sheriff don't allow phone calls or mail, so you will be
utterly at their not-so-tender mercies."
"The prison is in the middle of a big swamp, and they use
bloodhounds to track escapees. In over 100 years, no inmate has
ever escaped. So, once you're on the farm, you'll be there until
I release you." Holly smiled, obviously amused at the thought.
For some reason, Natalie suddenly felt a cold shiver run down her
spine. Was the air conditioning too high?
Holly continued. "There are some rumors that the warden has some
pretty unsavory parties on Friday nights," she said, impishly.
"Which is why I want you to spring me Friday morning," Natalie
explained. "All you have to do is arrange some paperwork to get
me in."
"Getting IN to that prison isn't the problem, girl," Holly said,
with a laugh. "A woman like you shows up in that little town,
dressed the way you are, and they'll have you touching your toes
before lunch!"
Natalie blushed.
Holly went on to explain the plan. "Just make sure the Sheriff sees
you when you get to town. He'll toss you onto the prison farm for
something minor, and then the warden will find something major to
pin on you when you're at the prison itself. The warden doesn't
like to slap on the hard time until the girl is already wearing
those prison blues and he's damn sure she can't fight back."
"I won't be there long enough for that to be a problem."
"Well...yeah...probably not," Holly said, waffling. "Sometimes
they force inmates to work at this horrible strip club down by the
highway." Holly paused. "I just thought you should know that in
case...anything comes up. I mean...Friday is my definitely my
TARGET date, but flexibility is the key to a good plan." Holly
smiled.
Natalie was too distracted by the thoughts of her upcoming search
to notice her cousin's evasive tone. She was almost afraid to ask
the next question. "Do you think that they'll...strip search me,
Holly?"
"Girl, take a look at yourself in the mirror!" Holly said, with a
laugh. "Ain't one of those Bubbas that would miss a chance to
strip you butt naked!
"But don't worry, Natalie," Holly said, with a cryptic smile. "If
a strip search is what you really want, I'll make sure you get
what's coming to you...and then some!"
Holly started laughing again, finding the whole situation very
amusing, and Natalie tried to laugh along with her friend. But
already she was feeling a growing dampness between her legs....
*************************************
Less than 3 hours later a confident, well-dressed Natalie strode
into the Sheriff's office, map in hand. She explained that she was
trying to get to the state capital, but she'd gotten lost and her
cell phone had gone dead. She asked if the Sheriff knew of any
good hotels in the area.
The Sheriff rather artlessly asked Natalie about her background and
whether she knew anyone in the area, or if anyone was expecting her.
She explained that she was miles off course, and she doubted anyone
knew where the heck she was, since she sure didn't. The Sheriff
also wanted to know if that was Natalie's blue BMW rental car out
front, and Natalie told him that it was. He smiled and nodded to
his deputy, who quickly went outside to look at the car.
"So you're sure nobody knows you're here?" the Sheriff asked as
nonchalantly as possible.
She was extremely unimpressed with the Sheriff's cross-examination
techniques, but decided to play along. "How could they, Sheriff?"
she said, innocently. This place is really in the middle of
nowhere."
He frowned. "Well, it's not Manhattan, young lady, but it is our
home," he said caustically. "You city girls seem to think you
live at the center of the universe, and we country folks are out
here because we're too stupid to find the interstate."
She laughed and looked around the run-down jail. "The thought had
crossed my mind, Sheriff," she said, sarcastically.
The Sheriff obviously didn't appreciate city-girl humor, and
Natalie enjoyed watching his pig-like face getting redder and
redder. Just when he was about to explode, the deputy walked
in and earnestly reported that there was "a problem with the
young lady's car."
They walked out to the car, and the deputy pointed out that it
didn't have a license plate sticker. "Well, the currency exchange
up the interstate is closed today, and we certainly can't let you
drive around in a car with no sticker. If you go back in and sign
the citation, I'll make arrangements so that you can have some
accommodations for tonight."
Pieces of her sticker were still visible underneath the idiot
deputy's fingernails, and Natalie could see the rest of it stuck
to the top of his shoe. Fighting the urge to laugh, she dutifully
went inside to sign her "confession." She wondered how in the
world the Sheriff was going to inflate this relatively minor
violation into a stay on a hellhole prison farm for women.
It wasn't until the Sheriff's squad car pulled through the front
gate of the "Honey Pot Prison for Women" that she realized what the
his idea of "accommodations" was. She protested that she thought
she was being taken to her hotel until the currency exchange opened
in the morning.
"If you wanted us to do that, you should have paid your $10 fine
back at the office. It clearly states on the back of page 3 of
your citation that, if the prisoner doesn't notify the arresting
officer of intent to pay the fine, then the alternative prison
sentence takes effect. The Sheriff smiled. "You've just sentenced
yourself to 180 days at the prison farm, sweet cheeks!"
Natalie quickly pulled out her wallet and tried to pay him, but he
took her money and purse away, explaining that "inmates aren't
allowed to carry contraband." He then introduced her to a very
butch-looking prison matron, and they all marched into the
administration building at the front of the prison.
The first floor of the admin building was a large office area with
about a dozen prison employees of various genders sitting at desks,
processing paperwork. The matron marched Natalie to the back of
the area and selected a cardboard box. It was an old box for
JASPER'S CORN FRITTERS, but someone had written her name and
prisoner number on the side with a black magic marker:
BREWBOTTOM, NATALIE
555-58-03483-A
"OK, honey buns, it's show time!" the butch matron said, harshly.
"Shuck off all them fancy duds and drop them in the box. I want
you wearing nothing but your pretty little smile in two minutes."
Natalie looked around her in disbelief. There were at least a
dozen prison employees, most dressed in civilian clothes, who could
see her perfectly. A few guys had even come out of the mailroom to
enjoy "show time." Another group of office workers had emerged
from the lunchroom, sandwiches in hand. But, what was worse, the
grinning Sheriff and his toady deputy were standing just a few
feet away, with their arms folded, obviously enjoying Natalie's
predicament.
"HERE?" Natalie said in disbelief. "In front of EVERYONE?" She
had wanted to be strip searched, but she hadn't imagined that it
would be in front of twenty of the local yokels.
"No need to be modest, sugar," the matron said, acidly. "Of course,
if you want some of the guys here to give you a little bit of a hand
with your striptease, I'm sure they'd be more than happy to oblige...."
Natalie didn't need to be told twice. She quickly took off her
expensive shoes and put them in the cheap recycled box. Next came
the Armani jacket and fashionably short skirt. Then she surrendered
her diamond earrings, pearl necklace, broach, and expensive watch.
Next was her silk blouse, which left her in garter belt, stockings,
and bra and panty set.
"GOL-LY!" the slow-witted deputy exclaimed. "I feel just like I'm
watching one of them Victoria's Secret fashion shows on the TV!"
"Yeah, except on TV, this is the point where they cut away for a
commercial," the Sheriff said. "But we actually get to see the
little Yankee's KNOCKERS!"
"You heard the fellas, babe," the matron said with a sneer. "This
here is a CAVITY search, which means we need to strip you from top
to toe! Don't start acting all uppity just because we finally got
to the good part. Drop those fine, white frillies into the box,
girl!"
Soon Natalie was standing there with her hands on top of her head,
turning slowly in a circle while the rubes "appraised the
merchandise," as the Sheriff called it.
"What a little slut!"
"That sure looks like one sweet piece of ass."
"I hear college girls make a lot noise when you pork 'em."
"That pussy fur is so soft and downy...I bet you could make a
pillow out of it!"
"Look at them sweet lips. I say she's a natural born cock sucker!"
"Forget THOSE lips! Look at her sweet PUSSY lips!"
"I can't hardly wait to see the cavity search!"
"Oh-oh, it looks like the poor little doe is blushing!"
"You ain't gonna cry on us, are you, sweet pea?"
"She won't look so high and mighty when they lay some strap oil on
that sassy tight bottom!"
And so on.
Natalie flinched at the reference to strap oil. Holly had warned
her that they used corporal punishment, but Natalie had thought she
was joking. After all, Natalie was an educated, sensible young
woman, not some misbehaving teenager who needed a trip to the
woodshed to keep her in line.
She had assumed that her strip search would be just that, and she
hadn't anticipated a cavity search. What made it worse was that
her probing was obviously going to be done by a lesbo guard in
front of a staff of hillbilly paper-pushers.
While Natalie was dancing around in circles, the burly matron put
on a "pinky cheater," essentially a one-finger condom. While
Natalie continued to turn round and round, the matron playfully
held up her finger and lovingly greased it. Appropriately enough,
she was holding her hand up in the classic "fuck you" gesture as
she did this, which left little doubt about where the greasy digit
was going.
The matron told Natalie to stop turning.
"Face front!
"Spread your legs!
"Now squat 10 times and cough!
"No, SQUAT, till your butt almost hits the floor!
"That's right! And keep those juicy white thighs spread nice and
wide when you do it."
Natalie complied with each humiliating command, giving the office
workers quite an eyeful.
"Now turn left!"
Natalie turned again. Now it was the lunchroom's turn for the
gynecological show.
"Do 10 more squats!"
And so on, until everyone in the room had seen Natalie's twat and
spread buttocks, front and back.
Next the matron made Natalie put her leg up on a chair, for her
cavity search. Under the guise of getting a better look, she had
Natalie change positions several times during the search, making it
a "theatre in the round" performance. Despite her embarrassment,
Natalie's pussy was hot and wet, a fact that wasn't lost on the
matron, who helpfully pointed it out to the crowd. Naturally, this
led to another round of catcalls, which embarrassed Natalie still
further...and made her even more excited.
The matron also performed the rectal search from a variety of
angles. Four times Natalie had to bend over and put her hands
flat on the floor with her knees spread while the matron probed
her thoroughly. Throughout the ordeal, comments from the on-lookers
burned in her ears:
"She's sure a wet little floozy. What she needs is a good
butt-reaming."
"That's what all those fancy college girls need."
"It would be fun to fuck a lawyer up the ass once, instead of the
other way around."
"Man, a trip up that cute little Hershey Highway."
"Yeah, fancy college girl, she looks like she could really use a
good fudge-packing."
At last the seemingly endless search did in fact end, and, with a
quick slap on the bottom, Natalie was ordered into the next room.
She looked sadly behind her at the cheap cardboard box containing
her ID, her money, her clothing, and her dignity.
Natalie wasn't too happy when the Sheriff, his deputy, and a group
of her lunchroom buddies followed her into the next room to watch
her take her shower. The concrete shower area was large, and it
was easy for everyone in her audience to make sure they got a good
view as she lathered herself up. The grinning matron gave the
blushing girl pointed directions, in order to make sure that she
didn't "miss a spot."
Natalie noticed that the smell of the stinking soap quickly
overpowered her expensive perfume. It was only when she looked
at the label on the soap container in the shower that she realized
why the odor was so pungent and why the liquid was burning her tender
skin....
It was delousing soap! She knew now what a dog felt like when it
was put through flea dip.
But it got worse. As soon as the shower was over, the matron put
on an old gas mask (that might have been left over from World War
I) and ushered Natalie over to a large green hose that was hanging
out of the wall.
Natalie knew that this wouldn't be good, because her attentive male
audience quickly excused themselves, a few promising to "see you
later."
Like there was any more of her to see!
The matron told Natalie to spread her arms and legs so that she was
a human X while the matron pointed the menacing hose at her. The
fluid that came out of the shiny nozzle stank like fury, and Natalie
was soon coughing and wheezing. It was bad enough to delouse her,
but did they have to do it with fluids that smelled like they were
just pumped out of the septic tank?
At last the matron finished, and the sputtering Natalie was given
a towel. The matron left, and Natalie quickly dried herself and
wrapped her naked body in the scanty towel. Then she waited. And
waited. And then she waited some more.
After about an hour, the matron returned, accompanied by the warden,
a tubby man in a white suit and hat that reminded her of Boss Hog
on the old "Dukes of Hazard" TV show. Since the deputy was a cross
between Barney Fife and Roscoe P. Coltrane, it was obvious that
they got Nick-at-Nite in this part of the country, Natalie thought,
bitterly.
"Here she is, sir. This one was wet as a pistol when we searched
her, despite her fancy college degree and those big city airs,"
the matron said. "She may be a Yankee, but she's got a hot, spicy,
Cajun cunt!"
Natalie blushed as the piggy warden looked her up and down,
starting his examination at her long bare legs, and working
his eyes up her body to her silky brown hair. Natalie swallowed
hard. Her cheap green towel wasn't much, but she was glad that
she had it to cover her nakedness.
Obviously the warden wasn't. He nodded to the matron, who
immediately barked at Natalie, "Open up your towel!"
Natalie stared at her in disbelief. She had to be joking. She
couldn't just open up her towel...in front of HIM! She had been
naked in front of more than a dozen people today, but the casual
way that the warden had walked in to strip away her last bit of
dignity and crush it beneath his feet was just too much to bear.
Somehow, asking her to open up her towel like she was a piece of
meat there for his inspection was infinitely worse than being made
to shower in front of the lunchroom morons.
Natalie was snapped out of the reverie by the matron's impatient
voice.
"I said, 'Open up your towel!' NOW!"
What choice did she have? Slowly, reluctantly, Natalie complied,
exposing her nakedness to the warden's gaze.
He didn't say anything, but Natalie could see his gold tooth when he
smiled at her. Once again his eyes ran down her naked form. His lust
was unmistakable, but his demeanor and white suit were preposterous.
"Why do these guys always dress like they're the Governor of Devil's
Island?" Natalie thought.
The warden reached out and slowly ran his finger down Natalie's
tummy and over the soft furry patch between her legs. He smiled as
his finger wormed its way between her thighs and felt her wetness.
He gave the matron a simple command, "Saturday, 6:00 PM." Then he
walked out of the room.
Natalie swallowed hard as she remembered Holly's warnings about the
"unsavory parties" that the warden held on weekends.
*************************************
Within 15 minutes of the warden's welcome departure, a very sweaty
Natalie found herself working on a chain gang on the outskirts of
town.
Except for the chains around her ankles, they had dressed her like
a cheap imitation of a "Hooters" girl: white sneakers and white
socks, tight orange short-shorts, and a midriff-baring crop-top
t-shirt (with no bra).
Other girls were swinging pick axes to bust up the lane under
repair. Natalie's job was to haul the heavy pieces of broken
asphalt back to the dump truck, which was conveniently parked
a mere 30 yards from where the roadway was torn up.
Natalie thought of suggesting that they move the truck closer
to the debris, but she decided that the guards weren't really
interested in efficient work techniques. Earlier that morning
one of the other prisoners had volunteered to call her father,
explaining that he owned a machine that could "tear up this whole
road in about 10 minutes." The guard quickly bent her over, pulled
down her shorts and underwear, and then delivered a painful and
humiliating strapping right by the side of the road, much to the
amusement of passing motorists.
"Maybe they wanted her to use the Suggestion Box instead," Natalie
thought, bitterly.
The gawking hecklers were the worst part. Natalie's t-shirt was
soon soaked with perspiration, which provided an amusing wet
t-shirt contest for local hicks who drove by or parked their
cars by the side of the road to taunt the helpless women:
"Bend your knees, sweetie!"
"I hope y'all are learning your lesson!"
"Would you like some water? Well, that's too bad, because yo're
not gonna get any!"
"How'd you like to get yerself some of that hot jailbird pussy?"
"I bet you they're insatiable, with no real men to satisfy 'em!"
"No, the little lesbos just lick each other all night!"
"Look at the titties on that little brunette! Her nipples look
like thimbles!"
"Isn't she that fancy college girl we saw at the gas station, in
her hot little sports car?"
"Well, she sure don't look so snooty now!"
That was certainly true. A few hours ago, Natalie had been a
self-confident career woman, dressed in the height of fashion.
Now her soft, expensive silk clothing, designed to flatter her,
had been replaced by cheap cotton scanties designed to humiliate
her.
A few hours ago she had been ordering these Goobers around at the
gas station, warning them to "be careful with the car." Now they
were gawking at her protruding nipples and mocking her with their
humiliating commentary on her ordeal.
She hadn't realized that she could fall so far, so fast. She had
flown down early Monday, expecting that it might take a few days to
get picked up, and a few days for her trial. Holly had warned her
that "Southern slowness" didn't apply to the processing of pretty
young female inmates, but Natalie had ignored her and based her
schedule on her experiences with "due process" in New York.
The net result was that Natalie had thought she would be put in
prison on Wednesday or Thursday, and Holly would release her on
Friday morning. But now she was hauling rocks, and it wasn't even
lunchtime on Monday!
It had taken only a few hours to transform her from a successful
young attorney into just another "babe behind bars" in a bad prison
movie. They had taken away her old self, and she was now doing
manual labor under the threat of the prison strap.
She grunted as she moved the heavy rocks under the taunts of the
rednecks. It was like the powerful woman she had been had
disappeared, replaced by a helpless bimbo who existed only for
hard labor and sexual humiliation. She tried not to let herself
cry, knowing how much her tormenters would enjoy breaking her.
(Besides, she would need all the salt and water she could get.)
The next five days were a backbreaking nightmare of humiliation,
hard labor, and helplessness. They worked her hard out on the road,
and all of the inmates were strip searched and showered by leering
guards after every "road trip." The food consisted of mush she
wouldn't feed to a stray dog. At least she didn't have to worry
about lesbian sexual assault; the inmates were too exhausted at the
end of each day to do anything but collapse into the cheap steel
bunks in the large dormitory. Friday couldn't come soon enough, as
far as Natalie was concerned.
At last Friday morning came...and went. And there was no word from
Holly!
On Friday afternoon, Natalie was excused from her work on the chain
gang so that she could rest for the "party" that evening. She
dreaded the thought of going to the warden's disgusting party, but
took advantage of the time to sleep, sleep, sleep.
Promptly at 6:00, the proud lawyer found herself dressed in an
extremely short black cocktail dress, making conversation with
the local tycoons who helped the warden run his illegal schemes.
She met with the contractor who was happily charging the taxpayers
a fortune for the road she was building.
She met with the "caterer" who provided the inmates with their
savory collations, pocketing the difference between the cost of
real food and the cost of the slop she was actually given.
She met the sleazy manager of the local strip club, who promised
her a large crowd of farmers and truckers waving dollar bills at
her debut Saturday night. Natalie flinched at the thought. Surely
Holly would rescue her before THAT!
She met a local farmer who "complimented" her by telling her that
it was cheaper to use female prisoners to pick cotton on his farm
than it was to use slaves back in the 1850s. "Plus, you gals are
way more fun to look at!" Natalie tried to look happy at the news,
but, not being a particularly good actress, she failed miserably.
She even met Jasper, whose corn fritters box now held her money, ID,
and clothes.
Natalie had wanted to meet with these people in her efforts to
ferret out corruption at the prison. But here the term "meet"
was actually a euphemism. By the end of the evening, she had
given a blowjob to almost every man in the room.
On the brighter side, she knew that she would remember all of
their names. It was pretty hard to forget a guy once you'd had
his disgusting, spurting ding dong in your mouth.
She was sure that her cousin would spring her Saturday morning.
Holly wouldn't let them force her to strip and dance BUCK NAKED
at some sleazy club.
But dance she did, to the delight of the cheering, whistling,
stamping crowd!
When another 3 days on the road gang passed with no word from Holly,
she became desperate. Her chance came when she was ordered to go
into the warden's office and polish the shoes of the 18-year-old
blonde harpy who worked as the warden's secretary.
She remembered the secretary from her first strip search. Natalie
was much prettier than the chunky girl, who had remarked that she
was going to enjoy seeing "that stuck-up college girl taught a
lesson." The secretary relished her power over Natalie and was
soon bossing her all around the office doing menial tasks.
As soon as the secretary left the room to get herself yet another
candy bar, Natalie vaulted over the desk to get to the phone.
After 8 rings, there was finally a pickup. "Hello, this is Holly
Smith's office," the bored secretary on the other end of the phone
said.
"I am an old friend of Holly's, and this is an emergency, and I
need to speak with Holly RIGHT AWAY!" The words tumbled over one
another as Natalie whispered in a breathless panic. She knew she
didn't have much time to waste with chatter.
"Miss Smith is on a four-week vacation in Hawaii and can be reached
only in case of emergency," the secretary replied, going through her
standard speech.
"I already SAID that this IS an emergency!" Natalie whispered,
desperately. "I need to talk to Holly, or ANYONE in charge,
right NOW!"
"One moment, please," the secretary said, mechanically. "I will
put you on hold and see if someone is available."
"No, don't put me on hold, listen to me!" Natalie cried,
breathlessly. "My name is Natalie, and I...."
It was too late. The secretary had already cut her off, and the
music had started playing. Appropriately enough it was a muzak
version of the old Eric Clapton song "I Shot the Sheriff."
Natalie loved government bureaucracies! She couldn't believe she
was ON-HOLD! She couldn't believe that her cousin had gone on
VACATION without releasing her!
Holly had played some mean tricks on her before, but this was the
worst. While Holly was tanning on the beach, guzzling drinks with
little umbrellas in them, Natalie was being worked like a horse and
strip searched EVERY DAY.
Then Natalie had an awful thought. "I hope Holly remembers me when
she gets back," she thought, grimly.
Eric Clapton's famed accordion work was interrupted when the chunky
secretary snatched the phone away from Natalie and slammed it down
on the receiver. "NO PHONE CALLS!" she shouted.
The malicious girl had Natalie right where she wanted her, and they
both knew it. "Please, miss," Natalie pleaded in her most pathetic
voice. "Please don't tell anyone...."
The girl looked Natalie up and down with an angry stare. Even in
that stupid Hooters outfit, Natalie was still cuter than her! The
tubby girl smiled and picked up the phone to dial the matron,
singing playfully, "Nat-a-lie's getting a SPANK-ING! Na-ta-lie's
getting a SPANK-ING!"
Natalie involuntarily reached back to rub her bottom cheeks as the
girl continued taunting her with that humiliating song. Natalie
felt her throat go dry as she remembered that all strappings were
given on the bare bottom.
Natalie was still undercover, but she knew that, once again, she
would soon be exposed.
She knew that, somewhere, Holly was smiling.
*************************************
SINCE NATALIE WAS KIND ENOUGH TO SAY THAT SHE ENJOYED MY "HOT AND
FUN" STORIES, AND THAT SHE IMAGINED HERSELF AS THE HEROINE, I
DECIDED TO GRADUATE HER FROM COLLEGE AND GIVE HER A STARRING ROLE.
THIS STORY WAS PARTIALLY WRITTEN TO SATISFY THE NERDLY'S REQUEST
FOR ONE WITH PROSTITUTION, AND MORE BLOWJOBS, CHAIN GANG WORK, AND
CORPORAL PUNISHMENT.
I HOPE BOTH NATALIE AND NERDLY LIKE IT, AND I HOPE OTHERS SEND IN
FEEDBACK LIKE THOSE TWO DID SO THAT I CAN USE THEIR IDEAS IN MY
STORIES. THANKS TO ALL!
Edited by C. Lakewood