New story - "Brenda's Conquest" >> AUTHOR'S NOTES << This story is quite a bit different from 'Elizabeth & Anastasia'. The feel, the style, and the subject matter, are different. I don't think it's as good as far as literary content goes, but it has other, more earthy appeals. This story contains some sensitive material. It involves consensual sexual activity between adults and minors. If this offends you in any way, please do not read the rest of the story. Also in this posting is part 10 of this nine part story - these are the out-takes or re-written segments of the story. Originally, it was written as totally isolated sequences involving the same characters. I decided on a 'soft' storyline, and then tried to blend everything together. Like I said above, the literary part didn't come together properly. You can read them for yourselves and decide if you want to keep them in your own files with the main story. The two friends who read the story had totally opposite reactions when reading these extras (one loved them, the other thought they ruined the story for her). - Tom Bombadil >> EDITOR/POSTING AGENT'S NOTES << Your humble editor and posting agent would like it known that I do not email stories to people I do not know. This is for a very simple reason. I have been burned -- severely -- for sending stories to a minor. When that minor's mother discovered this, she complained to my server, and I lost my account. Posting to a public area puts the monkey on the user's back; it is the responsibility of the person who reads a newsgroup clearly labeled "alt.sex.stories" to determine their own readiness to read said group. FOR A LIMITED TIME, however, I will have available a site where the entire story may be retrieved. Set your web browser to the following address: http://members.iglou.com/stbush/conquest.zip You will receive a zipped file that will contain all eleven parts (this intro, the nine parts of the main story, and the 'outtakes'). There is no "home page" at the above address. This 'zipped' file is all that is at this location at present. Other items may be substituted or added later as needed. Watch for announcements. Please access the file only ONCE; it will NOT change. It is NOT an archive. If it becomes overused and causes me any trouble with my server, it will be removed and not replaced. Also, please don't email me asking how to 'unzip' the file. If you don't already know how to do this, do not attempt to download the file, just wait for it to be reposted. It will be reposted several times during the month. [I use an Apple IIe and an Apple IIgs. That's not a Mac. My experience with IBM and Mac systems is extremely limited, and I couldn't offer you any valid advice anyway.] As always, email praise, complaints and comments are welcomed at the address: stbush@iglou.com If you put "Personal to Tom Bombadil" in the subject line, it will be forwarded to the author unread. Otherwise, the posting agent may respond to your letter as well as forwarding it to the author. ====================================================================== Public Praise: alt.sex.stories.d email: "Bombadil" stbush@iglou.com ======================================================================