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The Kitty and The Mouse - Chapter 1:
Paul Ridley's two nieces, Kathleen (Kitty, eleven-years-old) and Nora, (Mouse, thirteen-years-old) come to spend two weeks with him as their parents, his sister and brother-in-law, leave for a second honeymoon. Their antics bring back memories from Paul's youth involving Judy and Kayley.
Story Codes:g(13)g(11)exhibionism, b(13)/g(9) oral, b(15)/g(11) rape, b(14)/g(10)oral
The Kitty and The Mouse - Chapter 2:
Paul continues his reminiscence from his youth, this time featuring Krystal. Things start to heat up with Kitty & Mouse.
Story Codes: b(13)g(7) oral, g(13)g(11)exhibionism
The Kitty and The Mouse - Chapter 3:
Paul's resolve is tested and he succumbs to the desires of his nieces.
story codes:M/g(11) oral - M/g(13) first, oral, incest
The Kitty and The Mouse - Chapter 4:
His talented nieces put on an uunforgettable performance for Paul and a good time ensues! Paul and Kitty get some quality alone time as they prepare for the return of Jeff and Carole and what that means.
story codes: M/g(13)int-M/g(11)oral, M/g(11) oral, incest
The Kitty and The Mouse - Chapter 5:
The girls are back at home and Paul is worried his sister suspects something. Tragedy strikes, Paul becomes the girls' Guardian and they move in with him. Eventually, the three build a new life and it becomes Kitty's time. Epilogue
M/g(12) first - M/g(14) oral, incest
I read all 5 chapters. The first 3 last night and the final 2 when I woke up this morning.i am single and retired, so reading is my favorite way to pass time. Especially a fantastic story like you wrote. It seemed so real to me. Your characters are so life like. I can't tell you how much I enjoyed your story. Thank-you.
This from Bill, who also commented on Luscious Liz.
First, thank you for taking the time to send a comment, much less two! It is heartening to heard from readers every now and then. Liz was a fun write, it just seemed to flow with great ease. The Kitty and the Mouse took some time and it ended up longer than I expected; but stories take on their own lives once they start. I am very happy that my work had provided entertainment and maybe a little joy. It takes me some time to get one of these tales put together and hopefully properly presented. I'm almost done with my next story and when I am, I'll set it aside for a few weeks and then read it fresh for the first full edit. Then it'll get two more edits at least before I might feel right about posting it. I have a few others in various stages of completion and hopefully those will be out before too long. Comments from readers make a big difference in putting in the time. Maybe things will move quicker when I hopefully retire in a few years. Enjoy your time and stay safe!
--------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- I wish to comment on the entire story, from beginning to end. I loved it! Very masterfully written. Keep writing them like this. Very tender and touching telling of their memories. Sincerely, Chris Thank you very much.
--------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Very nice narrative. Well written with a nice flow. While the story is about Paul's, Mouse's and Kitty's sexual life together, the detail never comes as hot and lurid like other writings. It was a story I had to read to the end. Thanks for taking time to comment. This was a story that seemed to mostly write itself. Your comment about the "hot and lurid" aspects; was I too weak in that department or adequate? I'm assuming it was OK considering the overall positive nature of your comment. One needs to be careful about assuming though. Again, thanks for taking time to comment, glad you liked the story! Stay Safe! --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Too confusing. Whose who doesn't seem to make sense. I think a rewrite with proper naming would help A LOT!
I gave it reread and think I may have needed to provide greater deliniation between the girls and Paul's "flashback" story. I've added a proper division and alert as to the change in storyline. Hope that helps! Otherwise, Kathlene is The Kitty and Nora is The Mouse.
--------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Well done I love reading about young girls they are so hot
I don't think I would be too far off to say that most of us wholeheartedly agree with you!
--------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Really liked the story. I'm sorry it wasn't longer. Great job.
--------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Great story until the end. When the parents went on a their trip I thought "I hope they don´t die". When they made it back safely I was like "yeah. maybe some writer can come up with a better scenario to put the girls with uncle Paul than death. But no, same ole same ole. Jeez Louise Why not just have the parents take a job overseas and the girls stay for a couple of years with him. Something! Just not death. As good of a writer as you, and a lot of others are, SURELY you could think of better endings. I didn´t even finish the story after the tornado. That is how annoying these deadly endings are. Oh well, it´s your story. But I bet a lot of other readers feel like I do and are tired of these predictable, easy, and redundant ways to end stories.
The first four chapters were great!
Interesting … first off, thank you for your comments, they are appreciated.
Regarding the story-line, I don't believe I was trying to find an easy way out, it just flowed at the time. I was kind of interested in seeing if I could put the whole tornado scene together. I hope you came back and finished the story, I thought it ended reasonably well. Back to the main point, the parents were not the type to leave their children; they would not have gone if it meant leaving them behind for such a long time. I could have had them thrown in jail I guess; but, I don't know … It is a challenge setting the scene for what many of us write.
I'll give it some thought.
--------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Great story. It even made me cry. Now that is the type of comment we would all like to get! --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Very nice story. I read it over several days The epilogue caught me off base as I didn't and still don't understand why artificial insemination. Trying to recall, was this the story about the sperm with 'bent tails' or was that a different tale, different author. If Paul was sterile, why was it necessary for Nora to have the 'patch' and do we have an anonymous donor fathering baby Jeff?? Oh well, I really liked the story, very well written. Thanks Thanks for the nice comment. I'm glad you liked it. I figured I would have read a chapter a day. Regarding Jeff, he was not necessarily sterile, his sperm was incapable of impregnating an egg. Yes, this was part of the story. Mouse's birth control, her mother put her on birth control as a matter of fact when she came of age, not to keep her from getting knocked up by her Uncle, which was impossible anyway. The mother (Carole) had to get an abortion at 14 and wanted to ensure her daughter(s) wouldn't have to go through the same thing. Kitty's pregnancy, Jeff was the donor and IV was the process. I hope this helps tie it together. Again, glad you enjoyed it! --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- first two chapters are wonderful!!!! --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Uncle Micky, Fantastic story. You kept me interested in wanting to read the next chapter after I had finished the last chapter. Lots of writers aren't able to do that. Only a very few can.
I was able to see the girls when I was reading the story. The only part I couldn't see clearly was what their faces looked like but from the words of everybody. They were some beautiful girls.
Keep up the great work. --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- I’ve been having a hard on for the entire series! Great detailed, well written story! ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
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