SUMMARY: After his misplacing his driver's license, Mr. Wilson, loses his employer, Mr. Pendrake. He recovers the former before the latter, thanks to one of the hotel lounge's waitresses, Stephanie.

COMMENTARY: I can see how my summary may not get your juices flowing, but I still think that some of you will enjoy this story. If you prefer stories that involve lots sex, then you will probably want to skip this one. The author does a wonderful job painting the scenery and the characters. The details he includes fit together nicely and make the characters and the setting seem very real. I found the scenes involving Mr. Wilson and Stephanie to be quite arousing. The scenes involving Mr. Wilson and Mr. Pendrake weren't arousing, but they do add perspective to the story.

If I were scoring this story primarily on the basis of how arousing I found it, then I would probably say it is Very Good, but not Excellent. On the whole, though, this is an Excellent story: arousing, very well written, and very well edited.

SUBJECTIVE ANALYSIS: Excellent

LINK(S):

• Author Web Site - The Stories of Richard Rivers
• The Easy Winner - Part 1 of 1