SUMMARY: A man becomes obsessed with his coworker's wife's breasts.

COMMENTARY: This one is a little different, but I like it. I found it to be only mildly arousing, but I there is much more to it than just sex. I like the way the author plays with the main characters; how he has them interact. They seem very realistic. For example, the narrator did not just say that he was obsessed, he also seemed obsessed. His action backed up his words.

As I may have already indicated, this doesn't exactly strike me as stroke material. It is, however, a fun read and isn't all that long. I think that most of you should enjoy it.

OBJECTIVE ANALYSIS: 8.5 (out of 10)

• Arousal: 4/5
• Editing: 5/5
• Plot and Characters: 4/5

SUBJECTIVE ANALYSIS: Very Good

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• ASSM Archive
• Part 1 of 1