SUMMARY: 40-something Mike "accidentally" makes a move on 19-year-old Judy. His attempt to extricate himself from the situation is less than successful; and somehow the situation gets more complicated.

COMMENTARY: On the one hand I feel that the author has done a very nice job just presenting characters without mixing in too much plot. On the other hand I think that I would have liked it if there had been a little more to the story. It was compelling, in some ways, but it also left me thinking, "aren't there other angles or details that author could have included?" Still, this is a first rate effort. It isn't too predictable, nor too focused on sex. The ending wasn't quite what I expected, but it was credible.

OBJECTIVE ANALYSIS: 8.5 (out of 10)

• Arousal: 4/5
• Editing: 5/5
• Plot and Characters: 4/5

SUBJECTIVE ANALYSIS: Excellent

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• ASSM Archive
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