SUMMARY: Deborah and Athena invite one of their shy male classmates over to study.

COMMENTARY: I enjoyed this story because of the bondage and forced sexual activity. That sounds odd, since I normally don't care for stories that involve forced or non-consensual sex. On the other hand, I can see how such a situation could be both frightening and arousing. I think it is the mix of emotions that got to me.

I think that the author went a bit too far with her female characters' actions, at the end of the story. I suppose that they were just trying to protect their reputations, but I had a hard time seeing it that way, while I was reading the story. At the time, their actions just seemed cruel to me. It wasn't so much what they did, as much as the fact that their victim didn't seem to get any joy or thrill out of it.

So, I enjoyed this story, with reservations. It is arousing and entertaining, but it is also short on plot, the author cuts to the chase too quickly, and the way it ends makes me uncomfortable. Okay?

OBJECTIVE ANALYSIS: 7.5 (out of 10)

• Arousal: 4/5
• Editing: 5/5
• Plot and Characters: 2/5

SUBJECTIVE ANALYSIS: Very Good

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