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Strip, No Tease
Titmouse
2,500 words
Male
Twosome (Female, Male)
Heterosexual (Female, Male)
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SUMMARY: Carrie decides that the narrator of this story has waited long enough and proceeds to strip for him.

COMMENTARY: Part of the beauty of this story is that the exact nature of the relationship between the narrator and Carrie is never specified. She is a woman and he is a man, other than that they are not explicitly identified.

I have a minor gripe with this story: there isn't much to the plot. For that matter, there isn't much of a plot. The story reads more like a sex scene in the middle of a longer story. Normally I do not care for such stories. In this case I am willing to make an exception. The author does a very nice job keeping the story fresh and the action dynamic.

This is more of a male fantasy than a female one, although I think that both men and women should be able to enjoy it equally.

OBJECTIVE ANALYSIS: 9.5 (out of 10)

• Arousal: 5/5
• Editing: 5/5
• Plot and Characters: 4/5

SUBJECTIVE ANALYSIS: Excellent

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• Strip, No Tease - Part 1 (of 1)