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Deja Vu
Ann Douglas
14,500 words
Female
Twosome (Female, Male)
Heterosexual (Female, Male)
Older Female-Younger Male
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SUMMARY: Connie, age 55, relives the past in more ways than one after she meets the 18-year-old grandson of the man who took her virginity.

COMMENTARY: I think this story will appeal more to women than it does to men. It is a little slow moving for my tastes. I also prefer to see a bit more dialogue and a bit less description, than you will find in this story. While there isn't an abundance of them, there are enough typographical errors that I was a bit distracted. Possibly the fact that I was only somewhat aroused has something to do with my noticing the typos.

OBJECTIVE ANALYSIS: 7.5 (out of 10)

• Arousal: 3/5
• Editing: 4/5
• Plot and Characters: 5/5

SUBJECTIVE ANALYSIS: Good

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• Deja Vu
  • Part 1 (of 3)
  • Part 2 (of 3)
  • Part 3 (of 3)