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Title |
My Cousin Rosanna Visits |
Author |
Now What, 99? |
Length |
3,000 words |
Main Character |
Male |
Combination(s) |
Twosome (1 Female, 1 Male) |
Orientation(s) |
Heterosexual (Female, Male) |
Relationship(s) |
Incest (Cousins) |
Kink(s) |
-- |
Setting(s) |
Cabin |
Genre(s) |
-- |
Caution(s) |
-- |
Summary |
The nameless male narrator of this story is at his parents' cabin in the mountains. His cousin Rosanna is keeping him company. Flirting between the two of them leads to more than flirting. |
Commentary |
This is a very arousing story. The author has a nice
light touch and does not push things too fast. He also does not
obsess over physical descriptions. He does not go into too much
graphic detail it comes to describing the sex. This is a well written story. It flows nicely. The author does a nice job with the dialogue. The main character comes off as realistic; Rosanna is another story. At first she is flirtatious and seems real, but as the story progresses she seems to become rather subservient without an adequate explanation. The story could stand to be proofed for spelling and grammatical errors. In particular, there are a number of instances where words are not capitalized that should be. I enjoyed this story. It is well written and very arousing. I think this story will appeal more to male readers than female ones. My main reason for saying so is the frontal lobotomy that Rosanna seems to undergo between the beginning of the story and the end. If the story had continued for much longer with her acting the way she does towards the end, I probably would not have liked it as much as I did. I have given it an Excellent. |
Arousal |
4 out of 5 |
Editing |
3 out of 5 |
Plot and |
4 out of 5 |
Objective |
7.5 out of 10 |
Subjective |
Excellent |
ASSM Link(s) |
Part 1 (of 1) |