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Title |
Paying for It |
Author |
J. Boswell |
Length |
7,500 words |
Main Character |
Female |
Combination(s) |
Twosome (1 Female, 1 Male) |
Orientation(s) |
Heterosexual (Female, Male) |
Relationship(s) |
Infidelity Married Couple Prostitute-Customer |
Kink(s) |
Role Playing |
Setting(s) |
Car Home Hotel |
Caution(s) |
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Summary |
Jessie and her husband, Tim, develop this game where she has to "earn" her money. Its all just a game until Tim is gone for a few weeks on a business trip and... |
Commentary |
The author does a good job of putting the reader
inside Jessie's head. She experiences a wide range of emotions.
Often it was hard to tell what the she was going to do from one
scene to the next, even though she is the one narrating the
story. This made the story both exciting and arousing. On the
whole the story is extremely arousing. This is a well written story. The plot is well paced and flows nicely. The characters are well drawn, although Jessie is the only character that gets the full treatment. The story, taken in its entirety, seems to be about more than just sex. It is also about how a role-playing game can affect one's sense of reality and possibly alter one's life. The only problem with the story, that I could find, is in the transition from the first to the second half. I'm not sure exactly what happened. I think that possibly something got left in that should have been cut out. I enjoyed this story tremendously. It is both well written and extremely arousing. The author's skill in handling Jessie's character through her various experiences is what made this story a joy to read. I don't think there is anything too kinky or extreme in here, and I recommend it to all. I have given it an Excellent. |
Arousal |
5 out of 5 |
Plot and |
5 out of 5 |
Editing |
4 out of 5 |
Objective |
9.5 out of 10 |
Subjective |
Outstanding |
ASSM |
Paying For It |