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Title |
The Call of Desire |
Author |
DG |
Story Code(s) |
M/F, M/F/F |
Length |
5,700 words |
Arousal |
5 out of 5 |
Story |
5 out of 5 |
Objective Analysis |
10 out of 10 |
Subjective Analysis |
Excellent |
Summary |
DG is married to Cindy. DG wants to have phone sex with Desire, a phone sex professional who liked one of his stories. Cindy lets him, but then insists on listening in. |
Commentary |
This story is extremely arousing. There is a
lot of sex in it, and not much build up
before the sex, but I still found it extremely
arousing. I think it helped that the author
only includes those graphic details that are
necessary and leaves the rest to the
reader's imagination. This is a stroke story, but it is a very well written stroke story. The characters seem realistic. I enjoyed the dialogue. It helps to define the characters. The author also uses it to inject some humor in the story. The plot is well paced. Its basically divided in two. In the first part DG proposes that he have phone sex with Desire. In the second part he actually does. This sounds awfully simple, but it works. I think the author's handling of his characters is what impressed me the most. OK, lets see, uh, I really, really, really liked this story? Its arousing and its well written? Yeah, that about sums it up. Does it make my A-list? Ay, if you can't figure that out then look at what I scribbled under Subjective Analysis, above. OK? |
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