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Title |
The Gallery |
Author |
Prufrock54 |
Story Code(s) |
M/F |
Length |
5,400 words |
Rating |
Good |
Arousal Factor |
Low |
Story Factor |
Average |
Summary |
A nameless, male narrator describes how he met Karen, who inadvertently modeled for a sculpture that he is very taken by. |
Commentary |
What this story has going for it, is the fact that the
author realizes that there is more to writing an
arousing story than just sex. On the other hand, I did
not find this story very arousing. I also would have
liked to have seen more dialogue and less description. If you are looking for something romantic, this might be something for you. |
ASSM Link(s) |
Part 1 (of 1) |