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Title |
New Year's Eve |
Author |
Al Steiner |
Story Code(s) |
M/F |
Length |
6,600 words |
Rating |
Very Good |
Arousal Factor |
Average |
Story Factor |
High |
Summary |
Two couples swap partners on New Years Eve. |
Commentary |
This is a well written story. The author has
taken the time to set up the story properly. If
you do not like plot or background then you
may want to skip the first half of this story. Considering all the work that the author put into setting the story up, I found the action to be a bit disappointing. It is not there was not enough of it, but that after taking the time to describe the world that his characters live in he more or less isolates them from it. I'm not saying that I don't like buildup, because I do. I'm not saying that I didn't enjoy this story, because I did. I just think that I might have enjoyed this story more if the buildup had either been shorter, or more directly related to the action in the story. |
ASSM Links(s) |
Part 1 (of 1) |