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Title |
We Needed His Help |
Author |
Crystal D |
Story Code(s) |
f/f/M, Teen, Inc |
Length |
5,100 words |
Rating |
Excellent |
Arousal Factor |
Ultra |
Story Factor |
High |
Summary |
Crystal and Shellie find themselves in a bind. They turn to Shellie's brother Tom for some help. He is more than willing to help, provided Crystal is willing to make it worth his while. |
Commentary |
I like this story, a lot. It has more sex than
plot, but the author does a wonderful job with
the details. She does not focus on the
physical action as much as she does on the
emotional reactions of the three characters
to the predicament they find themselves in. I think it is also worth mentioning that the incest in this story is described by someone who abets it, but not by one of the participants. I don't keep statistics, but it seems to me that this is the exception and not the rule. In other words most incest stories are related by someone who is committing incest and not someone who is observing it. Its always nice to see something different. |
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