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Title |
Lusting for Valarie |
Author |
Emerson Laken-Palmer |
Story Code(s) |
M/F, Teen |
Length |
8,400 words |
Rating |
Excellent |
Arousal Factor |
High |
Story Factor |
High |
Summary |
Mr. Bristol's infatuation with his daughter's best friend, Valarie, has dangerous consequences. |
Commentary |
How dumb can one man be? This story attempts to answer this
question. Developing an infatuation for your 18-year-old daughter's
best friend is one thing; acting on it is another. The narrator
deserves what he gets in the end. There is a point in this story where I felt the plot was advanced just a bit too easily. It was a let down, but the ending made up for this slip up, by author, in part. |
ASSM Link(s) |
Part 1 (of 1) |