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Title |
I Just Want to Talk |
Author |
Nick |
Story Code(s) |
M/F, No Sex |
Length |
2,100 words |
Rating |
Very Good |
Summary |
A lovers' quarrel, with a twist. |
Commentary |
This is a well written story. I like the interplay between
Wanda and her lover, the narrator. What happens in this story feels like the tip of the iceberg. It could be the beginning or the ending of a longer work. It would not have to be a much longer work, but what happens before and/or after this story? I like what is here, but the story feels incomplete. |
ASSM Link(s) |
Part 1 (of 1) |