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Title |
The Real World |
Author |
Hawkeye |
Story Code(s) |
M/F |
Length |
2,100 words |
Rating |
Good |
Summary |
Sam mopes around after breaking up with Lisa. Once he is done moping he finds a new girlfriend. |
Commentary |
This story is a bit short. The first half focuses on Sam's self-pity; the second half on Sam and his new flame. I think that either the story should have been longer or it should have been split into two stories. As far as the series goes, I now feel that it should be read as one story. |
ASSM Link(s) |
Part 1 (of 1) |