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Illusion of Love

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Summary

Ray tricks Costello into having virtual sex with him, but things do not turn out quite as he planned.

Commentary

This story is a little disturbing. There is something about it that rubs me wrong and I cannot figure out what it is. The ending is appropriate, but somewhere in the story something felt out of place or missing.

Possibly it is the fact that a female author wrote a story from the male point of view and I think she did a damn good job of it. I am not sure.

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