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Title

The Better To...

Author

Mat Twassel

Story Code(s)

F/F

Length

4,800 words

Rating

Very Good

Summary

Annie meets Sara on the way to a rendezvous with a friend.

Commentary

This story is both amusing and bizarre. I like the humor. There are some really bizarre twists near the end.

I find this story arousing; the suspense kept me going, but I did not find the ending as satisfying as I hoped it would be. After reading this story I feel like I missed something somewhere.

ASSM Link(s)

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