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Title

Ornery

Author

Lost Girl

Story Code(s)

F/M/M, Light B&D

Length

4,000 words

Rating

Excellent

Summary

Meg entertains Tommy, her lover, and Brian, a friend of his, after returning from a visit with her parents.

Commentary

There is much more to this story than just sex. There is a beautifully written paragraph about a quarter of the way into the story in which Meg reflects on how she feels about her family. The thoughts are not happy ones, but I love the imagery.

The characters all seem very real.

ASSM Link(s)

Part 1 (of 1)