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Title |
Bulls |
Author |
Lord Malinov |
Story Code(s) |
M/F |
Length |
1,600 words |
Rating |
Very Good |
Summary |
Rick tells Mark about what he did last night. |
Commentary |
This story is well written and arousing, but at the same time it is a bit confusing. The majority of the story is dialogue. There are places where the conversation switches from one topic to the other, without any clear delineations. I find this distracting, at least in this case. |
ASSM Link(s) |
Part 1 (of 1) |