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Title |
Incentive |
Author |
Vickie Morgan |
Story Code(s) |
F/M, Teen |
Length |
1,500 words |
Rating |
Very Good |
Summary |
Angela, a tutor, inspires Jake, her student, to excel. |
Commentary |
This story is direct. There is some build up, but not much. It is well written, but I prefer that author take a little more time in describing the action. Despite the lack of subtlety I found the story arousing. |
ASSM Link(s) |
Part 1 (of 1) |