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Title |
Card Game |
Author |
Vickie Morgan |
Story Code(s) |
F/M, Teen |
Length |
2,500 words |
Rating |
Very Good |
Summary |
Vickie and Dan play cards for clothes. |
Commentary |
This is a well written, well edited, well paced story. The focus is on getting to the sex and not the sex itself. It is a stroke story. I liked the dialogue. It might have moved a little too fast, but the author did a good job, considering the pace it took. |
ASSM Link(s) |
Part 1 (of 1) |