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Title |
A Great Beach Day |
Author |
Bioya |
Story Code(s) |
F/F |
Length |
5,700 words |
Rating |
Excellent |
Summary |
Jan goes to the beach to catch some rays; after getting a bad burn a beautiful nurse takes care of her. |
Commentary |
I like the way the author gives insights, throughout the
story, into how Jan is feeling. She never completely
accepts the situation, and yet at the same time she has an
understanding of what is going on. I thought Jan was
handled very well. There is not much of a plot. It is a simple and straight forward story. The ending is not final or conclusive. It was a nice, light, arousing story. |
ASSM |
A Great Beach Day |